Reviews of Marvel Invincible Talisman by yassinose - Webnovel

Character is useless, doing not so much. Wasting time. Writing quality is bad.

there is no story development at all. it just like the author adds a new paragraph for our mc. this kind of thing is disappointing. but other settings okay

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it's cool in the beginning, but soon the MC stops using the 12 talismans because now he not only steals power but also steals body cells and DNA, in other words his unique power that was a differential of the work soon stops and he starts stealing powers from others, the positive point I like the most is the harem, the MC’s wives are different from most, for example he doesn’t have the black widow in the harem, but if he talks about what I like least about the work is the appearance of the MC, almost every chapter the author keeps repeating how beautiful and sexy the MC is, the most beautiful in the world and awakens the lust of women, it's almost as if we would forget it if he doesn't detail this appearance every chapter, now I imagine the what would happen if the MC gets into a tough fight and ends up getting deformed, if his wives were going to continue with him being ugly

I'm enjoying the story so far. it's really good aside from the writing or the translation is very broken English.aside from that the problems that I have is that it is racist. it goes under the assumption that everybody in America mistreats Asian people and you think Asian people are bad ? like so many other of these Chinese made FanFictions you know Chinese good everybody else is mean.

Agradável até agora, mas agora vamos escrever alguma coisa inútil para atingir a meta de 140 caracteres. Rosas são vermelhas Violetas são azuis Tome cuidado para o Corona-chan não te pegar.

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Let's be honest The English is pretty crappy The powers are beyond **** we all know you can only use one talisman at a time All of them are like the least useful of the main super heros ars**** and all are under rank compared to the heros in marvel This novel is a basic wish fulfillment one... 1/5 for crap English 1/5 for crap powers 1/5 for a mc who clearly is a pervert 1/5 for a story I wasted my time on

I really love this story and want it to continue. I seriously want it to continue plssssssssplsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Fucking trash, mc is a simp and a horny virgin, he's just a brainless idiot, it started off so well but I can't read this ****ty crap anymore, don't waste your time on this crap, in front of a pretty girl his brain turns to mush, ruined in one chapter 🤦🏾‍♂️🤦🏾‍♂️🤦🏾‍♂️

Galrammervtoo bad and writer should feels how American people talk to each other rather than writing Chinese statements and cringy words. At least more description about power of mc should be given and levelling should be done.

Fyck you **** this novel **** this novels writer **** your mother **** your future kids **** your whole you dumb piece of ****. I wanna do just one thing can someone tell me the contact number of this guy I wanna make his life hell.

Shitty start but it gets better as the story progresses. But I wonder why Jack is hell bent on maintaining the original MCU plot with his unlimited power.

Is this dropped?

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Hope this novel still continues.

Mc is soooooooooooo dope sorry but mc is **** like u have power and zero intelligence/ knowledge ##################################################

Its been 9 month but i still have hope for this novel to continue...........................................................................

Another victim of grammar-kun😭 the idea was amazing but the translation horrible as if the intention was to chase away the readers......MC's stupidity also over 9000, truly a shame😔

A good novel which is enjoyable to read. Though there are some difficulties in relating the characters to the MCU plots and all, it is well written. Unfortunately, this novel has not been updated for eight months which sucks.

This novel is not very good for me. I have always a very sweet spot for OPness and system thing. This concept looks good, but the story is very childish. Making the MC too much op is not a bad thing. But I can't connect with this mc. His behaviour and personality is very inconsistent and childish. His decisions were rubbish. I understand, it is also a kind of idea. But a novel should follow some criteria. It's not like you can write anything you want. It could have better, if you had made him more mature, little bit arrogant and a bit mysterious. This is the first time I have seen someone reincarnated to a universe and wanted to become a superhero and made hero outfit for himself...

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This is one of the best novels I read even tho the grammar is bad sometimes it's still one of the best I read so I have it a five star rating and voted twice thanks for this novel

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Hey author, can you tell us (the readers) when there is going to be another chapter coming out. Please? I have been waiting for a few months now. I don't mean to order you around if that is what this sounds like though. All I want, is for you to tell us (the readers), when there is going to be another chapter. But if your going to drop this, tell us so that we can stop waiting, or hoping, that there is going to be another chapter, and then, I will cry myself to sleep, because this Fan-Fic was one of my favorites. Other than that, stay safe, and stay healthy.

2/1/3/2/2=2.0 writing quality is ****e, confusing with Chinese slang and terminology, trying to fit itself in the world of Marvel. However, what makes this worse is how choppy the combination and the eventual outcome of each sentence with Chinese phrases scattered between English sentences. Updates- nonexistent, nevertheless should state my point because this is a thorough review. Story Dev is mediocre, as of where I stopped, lots of description and info dump. Character Design, just like above is an info dump. But this MC is beyond stupid, and get less exciting the longer you read this book. Confusing is what I would describe chapter by chapter as by c4, the system is renamed to some random common name and MC has already destroyed his apartment. In a sane world, mc would have had cop called to his crib, or what's left of it. World background, sure its the Marvel world, and I also love adventures of Jackie Chan, but the weird way how it tries to combine itself with each other, as well as Mc's logic on how to become a superhero, and the lack of money, the implication of the talisman, his logic/IQ, and how the story progresses, its chapters full of cringe after cringe. With how the author tries to combine Chinese terms with a tradtionaly American/English plotline by adding confusing jargon, as well as Chinese slang into each chapter, Confusion is the major underlying feature this novel has given to the reader if the reader so chooses to read this novel. Overall not Recommending this book to anyone due to readability issues with the Mc logic and plot.