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U,πŸ’‹πŸ’“πŸ’‹πŸ’“πŸ’‹πŸ’“πŸ’ŒπŸ’ŒπŸ’“β™₯πŸ’“πŸ’™πŸ’“πŸ’™πŸ’žπŸ’™πŸ’žπŸ˜‰πŸ’žπŸ˜‰πŸ’žπŸ˜šπŸ’žπŸ˜šπŸ’žπŸ˜šπŸ’žπŸ’šπŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€πŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ˜šπŸ˜˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸ’›πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’›πŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’™πŸ˜πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜
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Caribbeauty1
Story line is awesome,leaving me wanting more,,can't get enough of the female role,,she's soft and strong at the same time,I like how u hide her identity,please keep writing,been waiting for a while now😊
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Caribbeauty1
This book keep u wanting more,have u thinking where it's going,what's next,its so exciting to get excited,,I want more,,more chapters,,here waiting to see how the writing going to make it more excited and what surprise is around the corner..can't wait
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Ilze
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I absolutely love this novel your novel I hope you will continue this novel because I'm really interested in this novel I hope there will be many more novels to come. Please keep writing.
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PeachyPearl
Wish My One and Only was like Arnav.... Am I like Sofya? Nah I am not that strong..... It's MUST READ for those who love romance... Many more chapters awaiting me so I am not gonna say anything more than "READ IT DON'T MISS OUT ON THIS AMAZING NOVEL OR YOU CAN ONLY REGRET LATER". Keep it up author.
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Muchezli
Good storyline, strong strong Characters Though with a lot of secrets. Hope their growing love or do I say understanding will be able to stand the secrets surrounding them
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Luna1777
FL is smart and rational, Ml is stubborn and cool. The story is good as you can see their first inreraction in the beginning with a lot drama going on. So far it's amusing, good job author. Get going with the story author πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Ž
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zetsubouaichan
The story starting with the usual couple who did not like each other in the first place, but will fall in love as the story progress... However, the story and character development are exciting. It makes me want to continue reading, especially with the author's writing flow. It will not bore you. I have hope that this will be a great read as the story continue.
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Izarad_dc
This story is interesting ..I will keep reading until the end. Thanks to author for ✍️writing this beautiful story. It amazing πŸ˜‰..Fighting. I wish you the best.. πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ GOOD LUCK ⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€ πŸŒŸγ€‚*γ€‚πŸ’—~πŸ˜ƒxXx γ€‚πŸ’šγ€‚*。Haveγ€‚πŸŒŸ πŸŒŸγ€‚a wonderful day. .πŸ’œΒ΄*。.🌟¨¯`*β€γ€‚γ€‚πŸŒŸ
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lorre95
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Wonderful story, can't stop reading but dear author please update this story often, mass release is also accepted. Keep up with the wonder write up you have a great novel
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CailinMatthews
I'm a sucker for a strong female character. If you're like me, you might want to pick this one up. I'm writing this at the point where the plot is still at its early stages. There has been a few conflicts and a little drama but it's still too early to say they had a major impact on the characters' future. The story's opening chapters are great. A reader can easily immerse into the story. The author did a good job as explaining things. By that, I mean the amount and the timing. Not everything should be revealed at the same time, only what's relevant enough to understand the situation. There will always be chances to add further details IF they really are relevant. I wish the other characters had more exposures though. The main couple are the focus but the side characters are the ones who help make the book interestingβ€”especially since it's written in third pov, the narrator has a wider view of what's going on. The world is fairly normalβ€”as normal as the rich class can be BUT these people are human too. They're not immortals who always achieve victories and always receive good fortune. I appreciate that the author included vulnerabilities. I sometimes I think novels tend to forget those so it was a nice change. Good luck on the rest of your journey <3
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Veronica8
An arranged engagement of a power couple that leads to an unravel of power between family businesses. The power plays are nicely executed with the right amount of ******* to move you to the next chapter.The character design is complex and well written. They drive the story line along. The ensemble is an interesting mix that support or detract the main protagonists. I definitely can see this played out as a series on TV. Cool story. Top quality for a first go too. Well done. I'm only halfway, but I think I confident my rating will remain high towards the end of the story. Keep writing.
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PinkCotton
The story is developing very well. You can go through it once more to fix a couple of grammatical mistakes... they aren't too obvious but I think it'd improve the overall reading experience... Good work
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I was drawn into the world of Sofya and Arnav from the word go. A sucker for romance, I find their equation beautifully poised. Her independent character excites me unlike the cliched helpless females depicted otherwise. Its a reader's delight!
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niharikabhol
Just started with this one and I can't stop reading. Already in love with the main lead Sofya. The way you have described her as a person, her traits are too good. I wish some day I can be as strong and powerful as her. More power to you. Happy writing.
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BlueRhapsody
This is part of a review swap: I read around 40 chapters and I think I have a pretty good idea... Writing Quality: 4 Stars There are some grammatical and spelling mistakes, but it's not the worst thing. There are often giant chunks of description that get a little tiring to read, but still, not that bad. Stability of Updates: 5 stars Not really sure how often you update, but it seems there are quite a lot of chapters. Story Development: 5 stars It's quite fast-paced with short chapters. From the beginning, the plot centers around an arranged marriage and drama between the leads and a jealous love rival and a dude from the underworld? Quite a few cliche plotlines. Not my cup of tea, but not enough to pull a star. Character Design: 3 stars The characters so far are quite 2D. There is some kind of sad background for the male lead (heartbreak) but many of the characters seem extremely cliche. Psycho jealous b*tch in love with ML, ******* ML with a girl he can't forget, CEO FL who falls way too fast, and families that want them to be together. I can't seem to like any of them, they're just too stereotypical. World Background: 4 stars I think the characters are Indian? They live in the modern area, there's a lot of description, but sometimes it takes away from the flow. Otherwise, it's unclear and there isn't a consistent setting?
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prajaktamahadik
Hey author..good job...keep writing...i alway wait for your update......story is very nice and interesting.....once you start reading...you just wish for next chapter....thank you
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UnliMegane
Nice, bite size chapters. It has all the elements of typical rich-people-romance stories. But it's how you cook the food that makes it delicious, and stand out from other similar dishes. I do like the fact that the FL is a strong willed go-getter. Kind of sets this one apart from other works in the genre. All in all, a nice little read for those who dig these kinds of stories. Keep it up. P.S. Nice, cute cover you have there lol.
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I just read the story a few hours ago and is thriller me with the characters persona and their fluffy romance and hope this story will not dropped and wish the best story AuthorπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ
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Lovelesss
The story is quiet refreshing. Even though I've read little but the story build up is nice. There are few things that I'd like to point out. The both main characters are similar instead of different as stated. I feel that the chapters are short. Ig you're going with 500 words a chapter? There are some parts that are hard to follow through due to a rapid introduction of characters. But overall, well done.
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Charlotte8
In general, a solid story, engaging twists and developments. However, in the beginning, I had a great deal of keeping track of which sister and which brother was which, since you have siblings on both sides with the same first letter in their names, Susan and Sofya, Arnav and Advay. It took a while to explain the past histories, so I wasn't as engaged then either. About 20 chapters in, things really seemed to pick up and come together.
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yoursexypotato
I like where the story is going. The author knows what she is doing. It is a good novel that I would definitely suggest to others :D I just have some comments that might help in improving the future chapters. I am also prone to these, and it's really important that you are aware of them, too. First, I suggest you redefine who you are talking about when writing new paragraphs. As authors, when we say "he" or "she," most of the time, we already know who we are referring to. But when it comes to the readers, they might get lost. They would then ask them selves who was currently speaking or who the story was talking about. Then, they would read it again and again until they understand. That would immediately cut off the reader's immersion to the story. It's okay to repeat the names of who you are referring to, but don't make it too frequent that it gets annoying. Second, I think you need to get rid of the spaces inside the quotation marks. I am quite sure that it is not the right practice, and, as an author, you should practice the right standards as early as possible lest you get too attached to the wrong ones. By then, it becomes a habit that would be difficult to get rid of. Third, I think you need to elaborate a character's standing by they way he or she interacts or speaks. For example, it bothers me that a personage, such as Sofya, calls someone bro-in-law. Shouldn't it be brother-in-law? Four letters could make a whole lot of difference when it comes to the tone. The former sounds more casual and slang while the latter is more formal. Do take the effort to make her sentences formal, because that is how a person like her is expected to speak. Again, I am also prone to these errors. I just think it's best for me to tell you about the bad things I noticed in myself, so we could fix them together. Overall, it is a novel that is worth reading. Good luck to you, author!
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luna_sol
I like the synopsis, and will going to add it in the library, I only read till chapter 3 because kind of busy but I can already tell that this is a good one. A good past time when bored. The grammar is good, job well done author (qο½₯Ο‰ο½₯q)
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Nightmare_Taichou
The writing quality is good, just a couple grammar glitches here and there, the stability of updates deserves the five stars given how often the author churns them out but then again, the chapters are extremely short... Story development is good. Character design is fair, so far, they fit into the social elite stereotype that many novels of this kind have. But what I loved was that the female lead isn't a dependent spineless sap but instead a powerful woman who takes **** from no one. World background is well described, but it only focuses on the elites so far. Overall, a good story with short chapters to blitz through and a powerful female lead that deviates from the usual stereotype of how females are in these kind of novels.
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bitterlouise
Hi author! The story is great. I love how strong and tough the female character is. Actually, I both love the two leads. Keep up the good work. Looking for more chapters😊
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Your novel is good and well written. Keep up the good work! I couldn't read all 64 chapters but so far so good! The chapters are shorter but more chapters make up for it.
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MC_Dakki
This review reflects my ideas up until chapter 18. The story is quite similar to a few rich-people-hating-each-other-but-later-falling-in-love trope. I do admit it has it's own charms. Characters are a bit similar to stereotype and to one another, it's almost hard trying to distinguish between them. Yes they male and female protagonists hate each other but their world, career, disposition, and even circle of friends are quite similar. The story seems a bit fast-paced, but then again the chapters are quite short - so you have to wait for a bit (if you're up to date), or you blitz through the chapters (like me). It's almost as if quantity was one of the main selling points for this book. For the world background, the novel does describe it in detail. However it is limited to the world of the elite, so it feels redundant and expected at times. Overall it's really interesting with how the shortness of the chapters play into the novel. It almost leaves a lot to be filled in by you, the reader (which is not a bad idea at all).
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90751052
The chapters are short, but you could consider the length to be unique to the story. There are a couple of grammar errors or typos here and there, but they don't distract from the story. As a romance novel, it certainly is nice compared to others. And, a strong female lead is a plus. Well, keep it up. I'm looking forward to more updates. >3</
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NEidarous
Great romance! I like how the Female protagonist has her own strong persona without being a weak-need-man type of character, the world background is good as well. My only complain is the length of the chapters; It looked like small scenes not an actual chapter but other than that it's indeed a great story that I totally recommend.
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GabrielDetchans
A great romance! You don't actually need to read the reviews just go read the novel! I promise you won't be disappointed by it! Writing quality is great! Stability of updates is spectacular but chapters are ver short in lenght... The story is developing nicely and the world background is very solid. The secondary characters are very well developed and have their own personalities and motivations. Some of them are even better than the two mc... this could be a problem in the future...author should try to fix this by developing the mc even more. Overall, a great story with compelling narrative! Good work Author!
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