Reviews of Ryo the illusionist - Naruto fanfiction (Completed) by drinking_water - Webnovel

Great story but no happy ending, if you plan on writing another oc x mikoto uchiha, hope there's a happy ending, maybe do a naruto x rio tsukatsuki from blue archive story

Writing was good, plot was terrible, at least for me, Author did a good job with his character, Author did exactly what he described in the synopsis, a bit heavy mentally, personally not satisfied with the ending but the boot was good. Author did a good job

I read this novel a few years ago and when I was going through my library, I realized that I didn't give a rating, so I'm giving it 5 stars.

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THERE ARE FEW NARUTO FANFICTION MASTERPIECE AND IT IS ONE OF THEM!!! IT IS ONE OF THOSE SAD ENDING WEBNOVEL, AND YEAH! YOU SHOULD JUST TRY IT CAUSE IT ONLY HAVE BELOW 30 CHAPTERS.

Really great story! Although I didn't like the love between Mikoto and Ryo it was very emotional. I really hope you make a second book of how he was reanimated in the 4th great ninja war.

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I loved the story I can say with great certainty that it is the best story I have read to this day, I don't know what to say, my friend, only that it is the only story that left me crying so much

most beautiful rollercoaster of emotions. heavily recommended for this to have a sequel. so awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I Cant, I have no words for how this book made me feel, I have never read a webnovel so tragic and I cant recover from it now. Phenomenal story truly but why Author Sama why make me feel so sad I cant....

Dark and realistic story. It is good to reed. It is unique in some kind if we took naruto fanfiction on this site. Ending is .... is realistic but I want another.

This was a great story so dont let anyone tell you otherwise. It is very rare for me to cry while reading so for me to cry 4 times already makes you top tier. Thank you.

A great story although a bit hard to understand because of the grammar. I was lost multiple times throughout the story but still kept with it. I have no idea why but the only explanation is that this book was good enough for me to get past the grammar issues. I urge people to read this story and if they find it isn’t for them to just quit. But at least try it out first!

Well, I don't usually write reviews but I know if I don't wrote for this one, I am going to regret it forever. This story is one hell of a roller coaster ride of sadness. It shows the reality hidden in the lives of shinobi. The MC just wanted one thing in life - A family; even that wish isn't fulfilled. This was also the best ending possible. I agree that a lot of alternate ending could have been possible. let's say - A happy ending; NO! he was broken and he wanted peace, his children would have difficulty accepting him... His love was married to someone else... She couldn't say to truth as it would hurt the pride of her current husband. Let's just stop speculating and let the feeling of this story sink in. Period.

This is the best short story I ever read I wish it went all the way to the end of Naruto but apparently wishes don’t come true.The story made me cry multiple times.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

1 star for the ntr and beta mc. Mc is by far the strongest in konoha and yet when they decide to marry his lover to another man he does nothing about it and thinks its impossible to change the situation and just gives up on her and does nothing while she's getting ****ed by her new husband... And in his childhood he was tortured by danzo and yet after growing up and becoming far stronger than him he does nothing about it... What the **** is the point of him being that strong then???...

I really don't care about anything for me this story is one of the best that I read it made me cry so much that it's gave me a headache Reading a story about a broken man in broken world that keep breaking him was really sad and seeing konoha from a different point of view for me was refreshing I love this story but I don't think I can read it again It hurts so much For the author if by any chance you are reading this thank you so much I was really having a bad time and venting out really did help so really thank you

very good novel one of the best here not long but not too short either mc is a op character but main point is not revolve around power influence etc life and story of mc emotions traumas etc not usual oc novel

Emotional and sad story with very sad ending 😭..,.................................. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

This Story made me cry because of the pain MC Felt. I wanted to hug him to relieve his pain. When the Story makes me cry And pity the main characters IT was definitely Worth reading.

Me rompí el corazón que dolor eres el peor escritor de todos en serio es insoportable leer tu escritorio, espero que nunca pase nada de esto de verdad en serio te pasas te pasas te pasas te pasas te pasas Niko en serio te quiero golpear por se tan cruel aunque escribistes las descripciones de la historia pero fueron suficientes para lastimar un poco a los que lo leen está historia en serio eres el peor pinche puto, espero que el negro verga larga te secuestre y te lo meta por el oscuro año chingate puto. En serio me lastimo el kokoro

Good novel. Pros: 1. Different writing style (maybe bad for others, but it was like a breath of fresh air. 2. Story and ideas for progression are very good but is huge problem (read under cons) 3. Mc is designed cleverly and is a cool character. Cons: 1. This NOVEL has a BIG PROBLEM that is the power levels of Mc and other characters are not properly designed and are a ABSOLUTE MESS. AND THE MC IS TOO OVER POWERED TO HAVE AN ENDING LIKED THAT. (THE MC HAS THE TITLE GOD OF SHINOBI). Thanks for writing this fanfiction author(atleast 3/4 of novel is very good and last 1/4 of novel is something that I wish was never written)

I would have liked this a lot more if it was in chronological order I could barely tell what was happening with the time skips back and forth I admit the story was decent even if half of it is filled with plot holes like the fact he dreams about another world doesnt use his knowledge or the fact that he never seemed to care that the village was using him I figured it was to honor his dead friends but cant he just leave or do something to make it better or even developing the village he just didnt do anything as a hokage which all hokages atleast do something he did nothing other than fight. I also dont like the ending that much like cmon Im pretty sure he knew it was obitio how do you spend that much time around someone and not notice his chakra is the same or sharigan and how does he kill his best friend for betraying the village and not obito what makes him more special a traitor is a traitor Id be more in a rage but hes just too much a pussy for someone whos been to war like 6 times youd think he would grow up a bit especially since he has a couple sons to look after

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Unfortunately, the writing style destroys the story. Every sentence is "he did this" or "he did that". It leaves no room for world building, for creating backdrop, for painting a picture. We are essentially reading a report on a character. He experiences emotionally disturbing events, but we as the readers are unable to feel a connection, given the lack of any detail. I like the idea of the MC. I like the time frame it takes place during. I like that it doesn't center on the manga's significant characters. There is too much left wanting with this story though.

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Writing quality 5/5 It’s amazing the way it just viciously beats you up like the vilest person in the world is a refreshing feeling then the harem adventure 4th wall breaking mc’s out there and don’t get me wrong I’m no masochist but this story in the beginning already has a pretty dark atmosphere and as the story goes on you keep getting more immersed in the story and getting more depressed because of our poor mc this is definitely a 5/5 as not many other authors manage to play with your feelings like that Stability of updating 3/5 It’s not that good but considering he’s is doing 2 fanfics at a time and with this quality it’s acceptable but would still like it if you posted more chapters Story development 4/5 The story develops very painfully not bad it’s great sadly i can’t think of any ways without spoiling anything Character development 5/5 It’s just way too fucking good the mc and the side characters almost feel real i can sympathize with them i feel a lot of emotions to them even though they are not real it’s merely a fiction but i keep forgetting it while i read because this stories atmosphere is just so great you get immersed in at as if you are watching it happen right before your eyes as if they are real and it’s just way too fucking amazing World background 4/5 Its the naruto world and the only reason i give it a 4/5 is because i feel so immersed in it as if im there