Reviews of Lost in Character: Transmigration Chronicles of a Nameless Heroine by WinterBud - Webnovel

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niddaii
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Kenlinvert_L
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MibuShizu
A very good book. Good grammar, easy to read and story feels like flow smoothly. I think, MC can persuade the reader of her principal. At least for me. Update stability is good too, but recently there is no new chapter. I hope you come back 🐣
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Hwanvan14
Unique writing although at times i find it hard to follow through the conversation but overall love the characters and story. Thank you author for this wonderful novel. Hope you will continue writing and won't drop out. Keep up the good work and more power to you! 😊🙌
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MissBun
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MissBun

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101xhanna
Nice story so far different from the transmigration I've read. Some words are difficult to understand but good quality language indeed. Long and detailed background plot. Characters development nice so far. Overall good. Try to read it. You'll love it. ❤️
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exhibit_B
Good start keep up the good work. This really reminds me of "My Disciple Died Yet Again" I especially liked the beginning chapters before there was so much world jumping. Be careful of the foreshadowing if you mess up and contradict your self you will lose most of your following.
5yr
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NEidarous
Great story! well written, great characters design and world background. highly recommend it. such unique story that has great potential. Great work author.
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ihateyounot
Well-crafted. Well-written. I don’t have enough mental capacity to criticise this story so I’ll just heap some praises. This novel is truly well-developed. The pacing is good and not rushed. The writing is high quality and it reminded me of those fantasy paperbacks I used to read back when I was young and actually had time to read some good ol published works. Basically—it feels professional. The world-building was done quite well, especially for the genre. I’ve read plenty of “Quick Transmigration” stories before but none had as much depth as this story. While the origins of the system still remains a mystery, the existence of the system itself was properly explained and did not feel sudden or out-of-place. The personality of the system was also quite rare; such a system that is so condescending and secretive yet somehow feels like a mentor distributing tough love (unhelpful) was a breath of fresh air to me. The MC herself is also a breath of fresh air—she is so serious. It truly feels as if she is immersed in her new identity while still keeping traces of her past self. She had integrated herself into her new persona in a way that made it seem natural, like this is how the person would turn out given time. Anyways, I’ve enjoyed my experience thoroughly and hope to see more chapters soon. Thank you for writing this beauty~
5yr
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GabrielDetchans
Its a great story. Give it a try! Writing quality is very good. Almost no mistakes in grammar and spelling. The stability of updates is great! Character design is well thought, most of the characters are really interesting. The world background is extensively built and its very credible. The only thing that is unstable is the story development. It has ups and downs on the quality but overall most chapters are good and a few ones are spectacular. Just read the first chapters and surely you will be hooked by the story.
5yr
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NatsumeRikka
I actually started reading this book a lot earlier but because of WN's app issues, I was unable to finish it. Now I'm finally on board with the updates. Love this book. Pls continue with your good work<3<3
5yr
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WinterBud
Hello, everybody -- it's the author. Thank you so much for your interest. I really enjoy writing this story, the chance to do it means a lot to me, and it's also helping me grow not only as a writer but also as a person. If you guys could also find in the novel something to help you or make you feel better / cathartic / introspective, I'd be glad. I'm also doing this to find like-minded individuals who are interested in growth and developing inner strength. If that resonates with you, please feel free to dive in. I hope you could also enjoy :)
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lazyredragon
I love this, for the suspense in that last bit, the originality and just how well you just write, you've created an asshole system that's not an asshole but a genuinely interesting character He's still a prick though, not to mention the FL is a queen I would fight for! I'm learning from this book so that I can match proper pacing with an interesting plot and Grammar so professional I'm JELOUS really jealous but oh you was an epic trip can't wait for more! If I typed anymore they would be spoilers 💎 ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
5yr
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existing
Here's my impression based on the first 5 chapters: This novel has the potential to stand side by side with the famous ones. It has that 'different' vibe that you wouldn't see in other stories with the same genre. I like how the FL reacted after her reincarnation. (Or was it transmigration? Or..? Forgive the wrong use of word) She isn't the type who'd say to the original body-- since I've taken your body, I will make sure to avenge you, or something lmao. The only problem I have is that---The explanation about her current life (chap 5) made me quite confused. Maybe it's because of the sudden names sprouting everywhere (lol sorry foreign names are really confusing for me) Besides the reading flow that got 4/5 stars from me, (which is not in webnovel review criteria) the others got 5/5. (writing quality, stability of updates, etc.) Goodluck author!!
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JA_Anton
System and Reincarnation are two tropes that tend to make me shy away from a story. However, I must admit this book has different elements that managed to hook me in. First of all, the pacing is really good. It is not rushed, and the author really took time to introduce the world and the characters. Each character has very distinct features that make it easy for me to set every character apart from the rest. I must say Theodar seems more of an interesting male character than Leal. This is just a personal choice though. (* I must also mention that Prick still remains my fave character.) Moreover, the main MC, Hilde, is nowhere near perfect. I love the fact that she's not your usual pretty perfect princess, and I also find it relatable that she did not accept the 'System' idea immediately. The author also managed to establish Hilde's relationship to the people around her (her cousin and aunt especially, and also her family). I am yet to fully grasp Hilde's relationship with Loxar though. For some reason, I just don't feel the 'love' that she felt for him yet. As for the world building, the author has clearly took the pains to conceptualize a new world. I enjoyed reading the descriptions and there are even some back stories. There are a lot of mentions of names of places, and I think this story would be better with a map (though I'm not really sure if you can even post images in this site). As for the recommendations (Please note these are just my take. Feel free to use or disregard them as you see fit): I suggest the author look into tightening some portions of the narrative. There are some instances where phrases like 'She watched, She felt, heard...' were unnecessary and could just be cut off. Also, there's nothing wrong with using a third person omniscient POV. However, I think it would also be a good idea to let the readers understand the characters' emotions rather than telling the reader everything. Let the reader guess the characters' feelings from their actions. Doing this would not only add excitement and curiosity. It would also help in cutting out some of the adjectives/adverbs. In addition, as much as I enjoyed the new world introduced in the novel, I would caution the author in putting too much info. Sometimes the info about the kingdom is longer than the actual event/action in the chapter. Lastly, especially during the first half of the novel, the author tend to use the sentence structure: clause + 'however' + clause. I suggest to rephrase some of these sentences to avoid the overuse of 'however' and also to add more variety in the narrative. Overall, it was a good story. I had fun reading all the chapters, and I'll be sure to watch out for the next updates.
5yr
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Forsaken1
I hate you WinterBud, I truly hate you. You made me come here to show off this novel no? Nobody likes a show-off ok, it is my job to be an ass, and you had to take that from me... What am I now... Everything was fucking fantastic. I read through it cleanly. The story was introduced well and seems to make sense. Everyone seemed to have a reason for being there. Not a lot of hollow shells in this novel. World Background- I won't kiss ass here, I fucking hate it all, which means you did a good job because I really do hate it =] Stability of updates- Above the norm well done.
5yr
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DragonKnight531
You wanna know what's so good about this book? Easy, its not rushed! It doesn't feel like a book it feels like real life. You'll laugh (mostly in the comments) you'll feel the character. And last but not least. You'll itch to go the next chapter. A job extremely well done. ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°👍👏
5yr
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butterfly_effect
This story is really different and unique amid the transmigration novels that are everywhere on this website. Are you interested in reading a story with a strong female protagonist? Are you interested in reading a story with complex and interesting plot? A story with an intriguing mystery? Then you have it! The world building is also excellent with top notch writing quality. What are you waiting for? Give this story a try!
5yr
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BerriApplepi
I like the story plus it has looooong chapters! Hahahha! 😂 Sorry if I was only able to give this a review now, anyway, this story is pretty interesting and promising! I will keep this in my library and continue reading it hahahah I wonder how long will it take for me to reach the latest chapter? (Maybe a few hours if I read this without stopping xD) Anyway, keep up the good work! 😀😊
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MiaoMiao11
Your writing is so vivid. I could imagine smoothly. As for the MC, I loved her. Your story is so good. I hope to get a few pointers. Give in the comment section though :p
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killermniko
Good story. It has excellent dialogue and a likable MC. I enjoyed the twist on transmigration, where the MC driven by her past more than the future goal. The only thing, I would've liked more is the background. I feel like I know a lot about the MC, but very little of what's around her. This is more of an opinion on how I like my stories. Anyways good luck and keep writing.
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MishalZamir
I really like the concept of this novel. The writing quality is fine with a little enhancement required in background design otherwise I like the Main characters and their interaction-The story development is also fine~Keep writing :') x -Love meshal!
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UnjustlyUnderpaid
A very interesting concept, great execution, stable updates, incredibly compelling story, and lovable characters. Everything you could want in a novel! This is really good and despite only planning to read a few chapters, I read up to chapter ten and skimmed through eleven and twelve. I’m very impressed by this and I believe that if the author keeps It up, the thill novel will go far. I loved it!
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Positive_Lullaby
It's written in English and that's something very rare in the original section on webnovel.dot.com 140 characters so i will write a short story without proper grammar so one day there was this bus driver that really liked ice cream but because he was fat he knew that he should eat it so instead he made a sandwitch
5yr
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Dawsonrose
A unique transmigration system novel for me. Story is good and just after reading a few chapters can get you hungry for more. Updates are stable and chapters are perfectly written. Sentences are written in a complex and profound way. However, I don't recommend it for readers who struggle with their english. Might be too complicated for them. But for those who know English like the back of their hands, give this novel a go! It's really good!
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mdrm
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I've red everything and I have to say, it is REALLY GOOD!!!!!! It has the things I like( transmigrations and different worlds) and it is presented in a new ( at least for me) way thanks for the read.
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