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BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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KenRingdomstory
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Myriads_Worlder
keep up the good work... and please don't drop... I like this story but the story development can be improved more... so good luck... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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Lotuslily
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Mergyana
First of all...is she trying to help the goverment with the technologies when the apocalyse happen? Second...will this novel have any action scenes? Lastly..she does not think that people who purchased her techs will try to attack or maybe rob her because they know she has many useful techs?
5yr
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merle94
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merle94

This novel is quite different then any other novel I have read. It is fun, open, with great flow with the characters. I so which that the author did not drop it. I would prefer a slow update but an update still. I still have it in my library hoping for a miracle revival. Great job until 2 months ago author!
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Questionablemnm
Not bad. I always have a hard time finding female characters that don’t make me cringe. Not every girl has to pine after some guy the whole time w a red face. You did good
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Asp3on
Please update soon.. Your story is great... I love to read the continue of this story as soon as possible.. And i think the other readers ar tge same too. So please update soon... Pretty please ^-^
5yr
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manshah
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manshah

This is great.. can't wait for the next update.. keep up the good work.. the story line was great.. can understand why the mc doing someting... Just hoping that the mc will be on the line to kick ass..
5yr
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Theudblad
Superb story I love Apocalypse-Fortress whose protagonist is a woman in a world apocalypse, who comes back a year before its beginning with a system. The auror then shows his beautiful originality with the construction of a company selling various objects of his system to finance his future base (and who worries about patent and possible reproduction of futuristic object if in one year these the end of the world )
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JayTheMonster
This is the only novel that I've found which has a female lead in an apocalypse setting that's into girls. Very interesting idea, also it works really well on world building and creating a sense of *******. It might not be realistic to actually happen, but like that's why it's a novel about a zombie apocalypse why would it be bound by our sense of reality? I love this novel.
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crof
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crof

I an liking your story very much. Congrats on webnovel contacting you, but be sure that you have enough chapters in reserve in case you get a writer's block. Thanks for the new chapter and I await with baited breath the coming chapters 😁😁😁
5yr
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Clou_d
The novel was written very well and update regularly. The author was able to build the world accordingly, but what disappointing are the actions of mc who survived an apocalypse for a long time and a betrayal. The novel only has started and hope the author can look into these issues.
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nyckidemon
Love this book so much. I get so into it, trying to figure out what all needs to be done. My heart started to race when the MC learned she had less time to prepare than she originally started. Can't wait for more chapters!!
5yr
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hamuhamu
This is a new to me to read Female leading MC who struggle in Apocalypse world. The building character is good. The writing is good too. But do not expect the story located on earth we know. Maybe I will give a little bit hint, the people before apocalypse seems ****** different from our earth we know. Moreover, the big companies Author mentioned is not the same we already acknowledge. From there I can accept this novel with ease. For Author: Keep it up for this novel. I hope you don't drop this novel. Because if you polish it harder you can make interesting things in your novel. And again you can make forum on disqus where you can ask your reader one or two suggestion. Cheers
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mythloving99
In short, expect a well written, fast paced, entertaining kingdom building story, but do not expect superb character development, or a story free of plot holes. Going more in-depth about the story, it is a great beginning to a kingdom building story, fits well into the base building genre, if you like base building stories then you can't go wrong with this one. So far the release rate and quality have been superb, hopefully it stays that way and it wasn't just because of a large number of stored chapters. The pace of the story is quick so far, expect it to be an enjoyable read but not something that makes you intimately invested in the characters of the story. So far the characters interaction has been good, smooth dialogue and several humorous and entertaining scenes. For anyone who does not like plot armors or stories where everything goes well, maybe check back after a few weeks. So far the story has been in the setup phase, and most everything has gone perfectly for the main character, with some obviously flawed logic (such as loud delivery drones the size of trucks that require no permit or government oversight of any kind), however it does not detract from my ability to enjoy the story.
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initiallaw
This story has me on the edge of my seat. I enjoy it very much. The process was fun and i hope you continue your story. The pacing is great and i love the kingdom build aspect of it. Great job, please keep writing and finish!
5yr
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Roarek
Sweet story,but very,very *****. MC get's everything without slightest problem,solutions attack her,and everyone important is sugary nice. Feels shallow sadly.
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Morning_Fragrance
The writing quality is great, very well written and easily readable without having to read a sentence again to comprehend it. The system's section could be improved by adding a symbol of some sort to indicate that it's the section title. Example: [Section Name] Placeholder Placeholder Placeholder Chapter releases is good, but I admit that I'm being selfish and want at least 2 in one per day for 5 days. Take the weekends off or whatever suits the author best; don't want him getting sick of writing and mentally exhausted. Story development has a good temp, not too fast or too slow. At some places it gets straight to the point instead of needlessly dragging it out. Character Design is also wonderful, it's totally not because we have a lesbian MC. World Background is well, but could have more details albeit minor to give us more to imagine the surroundings and world. Overall, I'd love for this novel to continue until the very last chapter. I don't normally write reviews, even if it's for a novel that I like a lot. But this is novel is like a bottle of water in the middle of the desert, even though I've been seeing a couple of Apocalypse + System novels, but unlike the others, this is quality material. Keep up the great work.
5yr
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DustBuster
Overall great story so far, has absolutely enormous potential and interesting characters and themes.For anyone debating on reading just do it, you won't regret it.
5yr
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GunnyBoi230
I just can’t get enough!!! For people new to this novel, here is some information on the story. The first volume, according to the author, is going to be before the Apocalypse stays, with her building her base and preparing. There is also some romance, with the MC preferring females, which makes this the only Apocalypse novel that I know of that is yuri protagonist!!! The writers English is very good, with little to no grammar errors throughout the novel. 10/10!!! 😍
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cloudydream
I enjoy reading this..thanks to author.. hopefully you keep writing till the end..so many good novel just stop in the middle..thanks again..give this novel a try guys
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Hultra
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Hultra

I LOVE THIS STORY. PLS MAKE MORE CHAPTERS. RECOMMENDED +1000000000 Till now it's been a very good start, I'm waiting to see if it gets better. (even if it doesn't it will still be very good). Sorry for the capslock, but it's really good XD. Thanks author.
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Trek
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Trek

Dear god, for having a high INT stat mc sure is stupid. First, she decided to start a website to sell future tech, without any patents, without any understanding of the market or precautions to stop the military and companies from finding her or stealing her tech. Then she decided it would be a good idea to use a high tech futuristic drone to deliver her projects! are you kidding me? does she want the entire worlds militaries after her? she also would need air space licenses up the wazoo. Mc even admits she knows nothing about business but still brazenly spends all her saving and credits over things she cant use without getting caught. If she just wanted money she should have taken the tech and licenses pieces of it. Even just the battery on her drone, its license would be worth 10s of billions. Instead, she is using for fucking delivery!!!
5yr
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Ksitigarbha
So far it's great. Hope it will continue that way. ******************************************************************************************************
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HeavenlySun
Good good good make sure you don't bother with love....... ..................... ............................. ..........................................
5yr
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Fake_Chinese
Really well written, interesting system and a nice story going on - kinda amusing how she can buy seemingly everything and I'm looking forward to how those 1000 UFT (unidentified flying trucks, if I remember correctly) and everything she is currently doing before the apocalypse will effect her afterwards :) The system seems to be quite op at this point however, since she's able to to buy high tech stuff and resell those with the help of drones bought from the system, even getting those high-class business deals - I'm wondering, how she'll have some challenge later on at all, if it's going so smooth currently. But this story is one of the few rare apocalypse ones that got me really hooked, really graving for more, keep the good work up author! :)
5yr
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shark2782
The story development is going well , i just hope that we don't need to wait 200 chapters to reach the apcalypse part though Well, keep up the good work and more chapters!!!!!!
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