The story was pretty good. It kept me interested from the beginning and had a lot of plot twists. There were some grammatical errors but overall it was good. Good job author.
Good one...!!!!!
The story is short and very fast pace...!!!!!
Can be finished in one go as I did....!!!!!
The characters name was misplaced in few places but it's not a major con, since v can understand the plot...!!!!!
A good one for a first timer...!!!!!
Hello dear author.... ive enjoyed your story so far... but i just want to express my opinions as a reader...i know its hard to be an author... well its just some room for improvements for your next novel.. (looking forward for it)...there is a lot of emotional struggles of the characters in the story but it wasnt explored that much... i think, you should put emphasis on it too to make the story more enticing and captivating next time... the plot is excellent.. though.. ☺☺☺
Hello, Author here.
This is my first novel and i hope you all liked it.
Am not much of a writer but i have a story, so i had to share. This story might be too short for some of you and am sorry for that but i just tried writing and seeing how many of you supported me, my next novel will be much longer and i hope you all continue to support me.
I love you all.
Mandy_Calhoun