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Long_Tian_Xian
Sangat bagus dan menarik sekali.terima kasih atas kerja kerasnya.saya harap utk kedepan tambah maju,dan dapat ispirasi terus.kalau bisa tiap hari bisa update terus...walau pendek ya gak apa apa.mantap
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VitorEduardo
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ElG0hary
Man The Novel is good but please keep updating and more release and stop this **** called harem
Man The Novel is good but please keep updating and more release and stop this **** called harem
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Mr_cat
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jayden13
The character formation is awesome
The lineup is great , its just that the updating is so slow ,but overall its a great story ,please update some more
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Zoldick_Kyota
Daily task! You're lucky since I'm kind person! here's 5 star!!
Daily task! You're lucky since I'm kind person! here's 5 star!!
Daily task! You're lucky since I'm kind person! here's 5 star!!
Daily task! You're lucky since I'm kind person! here's 5 star!!
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WolfLord
Very interesting so far I hope it can live up to it's promise although the one problem so far is the white except for one seemed to be there solely for the fact of trophies I hope future chapters actually expand have them as their own people and characters
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Davis111
This story is pretty good, it pulls you in and keeps you interested. Too bad it is not getting the attention it deserves. 3 weeks without an update means it is either *paused* or dropped
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InnerVoice
I just read the glossary and what Iโve seen sounds like a total shรฎt show.so the man reincarnated a bunch of times yet somehow he is able to bring people and heavenly treasures with him?
And what the hell will he do with a 100+ uchiha eyes? Dafug bruh. Literally the fรผcker is way too OP and has way too many advantages for this story to be good.
This is just my rant but yโall know that what Iโm saying is FACT
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chp289
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chp289
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Hocolate
Namanya asep coi, karena sepertinya novel ini tanda-tanda hiatus jadi saya sedikit merasa buruk. Cerita seakan akan dipaksakan karena menggantungnya cerita. Jadi saya menyarankan untuk pembaca lain, memulai membaca novel ini jika sudah menembus 300 bab. Dari pada buang buang waktu anda lebih baik membaca novel penulis yang bersungguh sungguh untuk novel nya. Terima kasih dan selamat tinggal
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Cestaria
Hey author!!
Why i can't see new chapter?!!
It's this novel drop dead?
Or r u get lost in some black hole in the Space?
Where my chapter!!
I give u all my power!! (stone)
So get your hand moving up and down! (in keyboard)
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Hocolate
Aku gk tahan namanya Asep, sumpah kalo bisa dikasih nama cikrak ato apalah. Kupikir ini novel romance, ternyata hentai gore parah.++!++++++++++++++++++++++++++aku gk tau kenapa penulis dari indo mengarah story kayak gini+++++ aku kasih sesuai kenyataan yah
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WN_grdy_mthr_fker
i usually don't criticise mc and the way they behave but.. still character development is the weakest in this novel still worth a read but ...some of things that bothered the heck out of me are as follows
1. world is in zombie infested and Ji Qingwu she is wasting time talking to someone with a bigass car and is without any urgency
2.orochimaru well if you take out his evil and crafty nature and make him an mindless slave what the **** is his contribution.
3.Tsunade is not all about boobs .i mean she is a doctor stronger than an elephant and macho man personality with yes sexy as **** body.
4.and Mei.. she was a fucking hokage not she looks like shy teenager ...
5.rest of the wife's they don't have a character so that i can be angry about them. plus i have not read their respective novels or don't remember vividly
above tid bits were my personal opinion about the characters
6. while saving the girls in hostel the past hokages,sannin,immotal,gold demon spiritualist... let there guard down in zombie infested unknown world due to being normal mortal again......come on you can take powers but not personality (the intention to develop chemistry between the characters but the characters we love respect and mestrubated to are being destroyed in the process)these are the general points in the story will piss off any one who reads it ....
m motivation for the review is to improve the novel not to discourage .. best of luck with novel.
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HeartRend
Starts off alright with the MC traveling through those 9 worlds really quickly just *coincidently* appearing near all the MC's of the respective story.
The character of the MC is weird af however, he takes all the good fortune from the original MC's from those 9 worlds, then "helps" then because he has a guilty conscious...... WTF?
After a while, this story just goes downhill. The only way to describe it would be: CRINGEEEEEEEEEEE
On the other hand, if you are fine with a sub-par power tripping novel which will induce a cringe in every paragraph, then give it a go.
P.S. I came because I like the power-trip, OP and harem tags of the story, but the execution was tooooooo cringe.
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FishBone
It has great concept! A good multiverse crossover and harem! ๐ story is not rushed and have good character building. You guys must try this novel
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DeathLingers
Sounded interesting then I saw harem, tch how annoying
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M0nyet_Dewa
Hi there fellow Indonesian hehehe... finally found original that is being written by Indonesian, quite proud of it (since i only know how to read and not write hahaha).
Love your story, keep it up and please... dont stop until the end.
SEMANGAT!!! :)
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TheDarkReader
Lanjut kan novel nya jangan hiatus ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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GodxOwn
Hope that u wont drop this wonderfull story cause i love it so much i would cry my life :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Kurosis
Wow this is sad look i dont care im neutral continue... drop it it dosnt matter there will be more fanfictions and just as many dropped. Surpisingly even though I enjoyed your story i must say you have fallen in my eyes but what do u care about us readers. So if u wanna write then write if u wana drop then drop just plz stop with the *****ing. Write a chapter saying your continuing or dropping no need for two chapters of you complaining.
Still thank you for writing a good fanfic shame that if you decide to drop it would leave a bad taste. I say you owe it to your self not us to continue but hey an advisor can advise a king but it is the king that will have to ultimately decide
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EmeraldGino
So interesting!!! But author just type using his stick rather than making the story really good. Story development is the worse. Nothing interesting except talking about his wife the past chapter. Where's the battle? The thriller? MC command his wife's cleaning up the dormitories? You got MC, orochimaru and the wives plus the skeletons, that's basically small squdron. Go **** the zombies to get stronger early in the game. The story going from very interesting to very disappointing.
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Afida15
Morvian make him back to indonesia after chinese, even if he is yue zong now, he is still asep inside, at least make a base in indonesia, and you know indonesia is the best place for leveling because there is so muct forest and beach.
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ARORA
Wow one more cool work of yours like harem palace sect .....it's good keep the flow of chapters coming thanks bro I hope it's fun and more
Need more need more need more ....and more
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Archdevil
I like this novel. the story is very good. both from the plot and the character
Did they have ***? . I am waiting for the MC to make the kingdom and if possible make the plot unpredictable
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SoberanoSinNombre
Please continue this novel, i have been waiting for a novel of GDW.
MORE CHAPTERS MAN, FOR ONE BEST WORLD
It is possible that harem not be too big?
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