Its not horrible but the stories pace is kinda all over the place and a lot of missing descriptions perhaps it gets better later certainly hope so has good potential
But 30 chapters i find it to be enough to have completly lost my interest.
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Love it, love it, love it. One you get use to the time skips its a great read. I hope the author keeps it up and doesn't drop. Could see it having potential.
I loved the story until Chapter 91.. but then 92 destroys the whole world building and the story itself.. I didnt read further than 93 so the story could become good again, but the world the author created until 91 cannot be saved...
The story was amazing.it had great characters and a great plot. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did. See yea.hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhfdfg&hhhhhhhhhvddtyh CD ryh
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A novel I really recommend even though the start's pace is a little slow once you are hooked up you keep reading (honestly having to wait each day for the free 3FP was pure torture but well here I am).
More seriously the setting is great, the characters are just hella funny in my opinion but what's great is that you can really get attached to them.
I look forward to the next chapters 😊
the writing causes me cancer. the grammar and sentencing is wrong as wrong can be. this makes the story nearly unreadable. I haven't read too much further but as fur as I can see, even if it is decent, it is still incorrigible.
Not two shabby.
Perhaps my English sucks.
In any case, this doesn't flow naturally through my mind like some of the other stories I read. And I lost interest real quick
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I’ve really enjoyed this story and can’t wait to see how this story further develops down the road. Honestly could have never guessed the direction the story has taken which makes it that much better.
So far, I enjoy the story but the writing can be hard to follow at times. Character aren’t fleshed-out and the world seems to be lacking a lot of details. Grammar could be better. Will update rating if writing improves.
Haven't gotten that far but the author is making edits which shows they are dedicated to the story building and the time behind it. I hope it lives up to my expectations lol
I freaking love this novel it is one of the most interesting ones I found in a long time love it Mr author keep on doing a amazing job and I'll give you all my stones :)
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