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Daoist1rvBov
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DeJeL
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
*I will delete this and redo it if I find out the novel is complete, else-wise my review stands*
Constructive Criticism: You should try to come up with a regular schedule you can maintain, and always tell your readers if for some reason you need to go onto a break. At the end of Chapter 5 you said ""Sorry but I don't hit girls" said Yang Chen.", I feel that this would cause a plot hole, however if you changed it to be ""Sorry but I don't hit girls" mumbled Yang Chen." or ""Sorry but I don't hit girls" thought Yang Chen." then it'd be fine. Lastly, I feel that saying names of people all the time w/in the English culture is redundant, you should replace it more often with he or she when it's not what the characters are saying or thinking, use names only when there are more than one of the same gender you could be talking about.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Well written plot, characters, and world.;,;.
Personal Feedback: If you reply to my question that replied to a comment you put on another review with either "Complete" or "Hiatus" I will finish this novel, if you reply with "Dropped" I see no point due to not wanting to start a novel only to have it drop in the middle of everything.;,;.
Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 3/5 Rest 5/5
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UnjustlyUnderpaid
I loved it so farXD although there were a few grammar errors(mostly capitalizations) everything else was really good. From the comedy to the character development (development thus far) and to the actual story itself. I love OP people hiding their true identities to act normal. I just hope he is t one of the people who is super stuck up when his true power is revealed. Anyway I hope you keep writing and my only other complaint is that there are only 4 chapters so far xoxo xoxo
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MiaoMiao11
Though it is very early.
It's funny. I liked the high school retired emperor concept.The chapters are long except the first one.
I initially thought that it was an ancient theme but it was rather wuxia.
Just some grammar mistakes..
It is just the beginning.
Keep going.
Good luck.
Kimberleyy