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KhanQi
Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.
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theenngee
Style:
The style this story is written in lacks many proper descriptions (not "detailled", "proper"), which makes it hard to feel immersed in the story. Especially during the fight scenes, events simply happen, without any indications in how tense the battle is.
Some names are obviously japanese, the spells even use japanese writing to name them, which (coupled with the character design) makes the story seem like a power-fantasy anime fan-fiction.
Characters:
The hero is a sarcastic, jesting, snarking, foulmouthed "young boy" who is apparently, within the context of the world, "unique" or "special" in some way.
He is accompanied by an eye-rolling, disagreeing turtle and fights a petty necromancer. The hero is never in any sort of danger and takes nothing serious, but is able to instantly go into asskicking-mode and as such feels difficult to identify with. There is no ******* or atmosphere, which is especially glaring in a scene where the hero reacts to three separate instances of being doused in blood and body parts with eye-rolling and "come on man!"
It's hard to take a hero seriously who won't even take the situation he is in seriously.
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gusdefrog
The story is interesting but fragmented. There are quite a few errors that detract from the story and places where it feels like there must be things the author is assuming I know that I've got no idea what got skipped, where there's definitely something missing.
All of that said, I like the supporting characters, and there's potential for the story to develope into something pretty interesting. Awesome turtle! o.o
So far a few chapters have been released each month.
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MishalZamir
Idk if it's early for me to review this novel but I like it and wonder what the story is about-
although the character design is so-so with sturdy writing- you need enhancement to improve those typos expecially in punctuation- Otherwise stability is fine! Good work :') x -Meshal!
IceSnowball