Chapter comments on the chapter Suggestions And Review! of the book System: Harry The Harem lord

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CraftingManiac
Still waiting on a Narcissa scene and waiting for him to finish cucking that Wilson guys family
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skyfatherbuluku
I just wanna experience the wizard word in it entirety if possible, so just keep up with what you are doing, and make the next books more challenging for Harry and give him more missions so we can keep track of of his evolution.
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Choco_Monster
Why 4th year? You could make a scenario where he would open a brach in France and that would create a foundation for romance
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WPOmega
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He should join Ravenclaw when he gets to Hogwarts that's the only natural way I can see him adding a ghost (The grey lady) to his harem, his harem should be equal opportunity so besides Luna and Hermione a ghost (or two), his house elf (eventually simply out of her own curiosity cause she's definitely been watching often), and maybe some other things like the mermaids from the lake or other humanoid creatures should be added
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Scarlet5ky
Need a regular chapter, well, you might be busy and all, but it would be good to have a regular chapter. Also, don't miss any sex part for any harem member! Also, I hope it is somewhat the same story as the original, well, our story should go according to that direction. Thanks for the good fan-fic book!
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breaker13
how can you end this book without a narcissa sex scene? that is sacrilegious my friend. I need a graphic sex that puts the one with vernon to shame since nobody likes lucious malfoy
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blueDaoist
Could also explore magical myths. Brung m Back more lost knowledge. And you ould create something like the clock tower in the fate series.
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dimv
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Not sure if I will regret suggesting this or not... but how about making Albus Dumbledore gay? And he id in love with Harvey (not Harry)? Imagine the wise and mysterious Albus Dumbledore be as we know him from the original series in front of Harry ans everyone, but the moment Harvey enters the scene, Albus becomes flirty and jealous of Harvey's girls and takes revenge on them!! I think it will be quite hilarious and refreshing. (To avoid misunderstandings, I do not suggest that Albus should be part of the harem, but him be the funny gay pervert of the story, who tries but never succeeds)
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ZeRoKc
Tame all the magical beasts at Hogwarts.
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Vampfan1
Makes sure that you include some story time for what happened between the Harry Potter Bks that wasn't included in the Books or Films, that way we will see more of Harvey and his business and girls. And maybe include in some stories where he visits different countries and maybe also briefly visits to different Schools around the world as well, maybe also learning unusual forms of magic from the country's that they are well practiced in.
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Vampfan1
If Harry/Harvey gains Multiple Beast/Monster Forms and learns more Shape Shifting\Body Alteration Spells, Potions and Magical Items then how about (in time) some experiments with Shape/Body Shifting, gender alterations, two penises, tentacles and him changing and having beastie &\or monster form sex with his harem girls. Also more learning of Sexual Magics, Spells and Ceremonies (tantric), and the exploration of uses of Magical Sex Toys and Items. (maybe set up a side business manufacturing and selling them?) As well as gaining some new sexual Abilities from the System. Plus of course some fun with Cute Monster Girls and Girl Ghosts. Learning some Physical non-magical combat and defence skills might be a good idea as well.
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Raunak
I believe that having only 1 book will be better than 7 books
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Isaac_Is_Me
I think an exploration on the magic side of things would be good like Harry learning more advance spells and creating his own like a take on apparate
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skyfatherbuluku
Just make it awesome k.
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Ttsfih
Author can you make list of all girls in harem?
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mrbrucele
Don’t understand why starting a new book just keep going here
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Yesuh_Dmz
In his first birthday he could get Tonks, in the original book she was in her 7th year when Harry was in his first year
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David_Bendeck
harry tambien es heredero de las 3 grandes casas gryffindor slytherin hufflepuff
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Doist0000077785
man I will appreciate if you can tell me the name of second book of this novel
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TyrantReader
Hello when are you comming back are you comming back?
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