Reviews of DELETING by Awespec - Webnovel

I like the fact that there are multiple worlds... well 2 so far but there will be more as stated in the story, without the story really repeating itself in each world. Writing quality is good and there doesn't seem to be many errors. The doa got me confused at the start though .3. The stability of updates... considering this is an original novel the pace that the author is writing at is insane. I mean 3-4 chapters a day and the chapters themselves are long as well, not like some which release multiple chapters, but each of the chapters have only a few paragraphs. The story development is good and we get a good idea of the mc's personality through his actions. The worlds themselves are described pretty well, without chunks of text. The first arc was a lil short though, that's the only issue D:. Character design is good and as I said before we get a good understanding of the mc's personality and character. I especially love the women and those beautiful... scenes. World background is well displayed, except where the mc originated from but who knows maybe there's a huge secret in the human world =3. The only thing I'm confused about is why the martial world is worried about going to war with the human world,

I have read enough to think I warrant putting a review. First of the the update stability is top notch, most likely from having a large backpile of chapters or really fast writing speeds. The quality of the writing while there are a few spelling errors I've seen the amount of grammatical errors are small enough that no one would notice. The story development never feels rushed or out of place, you shouldn't go right to the next chapter, sit a little on the chapter think back to what you read and you'll pick up on things you might have missed that where hinted, everything feels to have some layer of planning The character design is good, some hiccups here and there but nothing detrimental, yes some might complain that there's little background about the mc other than little hints here and there but I feel that even learning about his background could be a whole arc in itself and leaves a layer of mystery which works The wold building in the novel while confusing at times if you're not used to the style of novel it's detailed enough to make you think hard about it in a good way. All up it's a novel I'd highly recommend to people, The chapters flow nicely with each other and you can get caught up in it to the point where you don't put it down till you've finished reading only to want to re read it to make sure there aren't things you missed.

Discord: https://discord.gg/3sUErnP Twitter: @Awespec https://***.patreon.com/Awespec Hey guys, I thought I'd finally write a review of myself. I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come! Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Dyon is as straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself has some demons he's burying deep within himself. I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality. For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :) As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping. I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)

why ya deleted it, did i miss smthn or what?

Hey can we talk Arthur because I don't know why you would leave this novel This is one of the best I have ever read and you end it in the immortal plane I can't start reading other junk novel You made my life a living hell😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Words cannot express how happy i am to have found this book! I have read many wuxia type books but always found the main characters to be SIMPle and bland. There are only so many ways a sword art can get better... the writing quality is phenominal and the depth and layering in this story is top notch. Nothing but love and powerstones from me for the foreseeable future. If you love strong mcs (power/personallity) unique powers and lita of face slapping then pick this up. You will not be disappointed. Much love Auther-san! Keep it up👍👍👍👍

Overall amazing book, The World is greatly developed and has a fulfilling Lore everything of relevance is explained to a great degree of detail. Aside from parts I personally dislike because they trigger me, its a novel of which has high emersion. 4.8/5 would be a 5/5 but my personal prefences knock it down due to certain happenings but otherwise a great! looking foward to a steady progression from 2424 onwards and to see how it progresses and ends

Writing quality is amazing overall. Some parts of it are so good that I strongly believe that it should be published as an actually book; the beginning is slightly rough, though. The update speed is incredible too. Half of me suspects that he's on an Adderall-fueled crack binge. I really do hope he's OK. As for the background, I'm personally not a fan of those that use the same martial arts stereotypes, but I think that this one works rather well. The character design is first-class, but I feel that it adheres to some stereotypes a little much. Take the main character, Dyon, for instance. There are hundreds of thousands (if not millions) of books whose protagonist is incredibly talented for nearly no reason. However, I think that this one is done well and that there's sufficient reason for why he's like that and that his character has enough uniqueness to make him feel compelling. I do have a slight issue with the development speed, though. First, it's inconsistent. Sometimes it'll go so slow that I want to poke my eyes out, and then it'll be faster than lightning. The second issue I have with it has to do with the slow sections. Sometimes, you're waiting for Dyon to take action, but then there'll be the or four chapters explaining the background. It's normally useful, but it can normally be drastically shorter. Another issue I have with it is that it doesn't always clarify the details. For instance, around chapter 20, he enters an underwater ruin. However, although we can assume that he uses a bubble that he created to breathe, he never mentioned it, so we don't know. Also, when he gets to the ruin, he seemed to walk around as if he were on the surface. Very odd. However, despite my criticism, I think that it's an incredibly good book overall. In terms of webnovels, it deserves 10.5/10; it is absolutely phenomenal. In terms of actually books, it deserves 9-9.5/10. I have been completely blown away.

Honestly just dont read this novel, If you do youll struggle to find a novel to match this. previously i could read any old thing to get by but this novel completely ruined that. Absolutely amazing

I love it from the beginning and it was always very captivating for me in each arc and in my opinion it's is one of the best novels I've read on webnovels and I cant wait till the sequel comes out

This one right here…. it’s definItely My favorite novel on this site. Right Up there with Coiling Dragon. The plot, the arrogance itself that is Dyon Sacharro, the twists and turn…just wow! I have been reading this for over 2 years now and still not tired of it! Can’t wait to see Dyon trample the Immortal plane too!

honestly this the best novel I've ever read and the author is a dope releasing 7-10 chaps a day.By far the best story and character development unlike most cultivation novels which lets be honest are cringe.I honestly couldn't recommend this novel more

hey awspec I am enjoying this novel especially since it is free I am 700 and something chapters in. I liked how you kind of glossed over the mature parts in the beginning and kept more towards cultivating. I see were people say the main character is OP but right now he is only op because everyone else is just weak around him. I think you need to have a chapter that kinda gives general idea of just what is happening with everyone instead of just focusing on one character maybe a chapter focused each character as they grow and develop

Really hate the fact that dyon be playing An ignorant fool bt I had really wished that he was to take Lilith as his wife though coz the girl love's him so much

Even though it does indeed need a little work (I mean like what book doesn't, come on), I cant give it anything below 5 stars. If you ever go to just 1 or 2 chapters a day, PLEASE make the chapters long like the ones in the beginning. thank you so much for this great book!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The best story I've actually ever read. The way the mc handles his problems is amazing and he has a lot of conviction to the point he won't back down no matter what.

un assez bon roman même si la montée en puissance semble trop rapide a mon gout ainsi que le concept de volonté. Peut mieux faire Bonne Chance .

It’s a pretty good book so far, I’m about half way through and we have some good character development, and the world building is top notch, the cultivation system is pretty well fleshed out.

I love this book!!!!!! Probably my favorite one. I like how the author develop the MC. If you haven't read this book yet I recommend you to try to read the book. Read the story and make yourself your own opinion I'm sure you'll like the book too!!!

Great Book, I chose to forget the first 30-40 chapters, other than that this has been a very good ride. There were some scares that the book would turn into let's just say 'unwanted' directions but it has been a really awesome story till now. One of the best books I have read till now.

easily one of my favorite novels on this site. with romance action adventure amazing world building and and oh so fabulous mix of the modern science and technology or even just the values from earth molded perfectly with the cultivation world that its simply amazing and new. the mc shows growth in his character along with his supporting characters throughout the whole novel and this is also tied to his cultivators dao heart really well and its not just a simple "im so arrogant the heavens can't defy me" type of thing but more mature thinking as the mc advan c es along in the story. now I love this novel I really do...but the twist and turns that make the mc path hard that it is so hard for the mc to pass these roadblocks without many heart wrenching losses sometimes that it makes me want to stop from emotional overload so I can get myself together and enjoy rather than despair for a few dozen chapters to maybe even a few hundred till he makes things go his way with either hard work, intelligence, a little bit of luck, and some heaven defying determination. overall this story is a must read for fellow readers who love cultivation novels and if you're a first time reader or new to the genre I would suggest reading lower ranked novels so that your expectations for others aren't quite so high that you can't find any you like.

this is the authors first book, so give it a bit it gets better as time progresses also keep up to date on this story on moonquil.com where it is updated and has 2500 chapters free... great story, as is his r.r.r

Love the whole thing.

Gotta say this is one of my favorite, if not my favorite novel of all time. im far from an expert but theres a ton of development in both the characters and the world, and its diffrent from any other martial novel ive come across with very little cliches. also if you enjoyed this like i have theres like an extra 700 chapters on moonquill.

I know that 5 Stars in every categoty seems to much, but it really is that good. It is honestly the best story i've ever read and i have read a lot, believe me. The world building is not fast or slow and it encompasses two worlds. The Mc learns of them relativly fast and you don't have too fear that a new one suddenly pops out. The Mc is arrogant, yes, abd that is just his character, but he isn't blindly so and has his own reasons. He is very smart, but rhe plot doesn't just play in his hands whatever he needs (not without a legit reason). Yes, there is a Harem in this story, but not overly so and i like it how it is. Overall there are nearly no fillers in this story and the quality is simply fantastic. I really love this novel so i recommed it to you all and please read it on moonquill.com, i has more chapters there and you can support the author by reading it there.

tbh this is the best novel ive read so far over 1000 chaps all free and the writer does about 2 or moree chaps a day i think idk wat else 2 put so ye

The story is really really really good, it always makes me anticipate for the next scene. The update is also stable, world building is the best and it is one of the books which I highly recommend.