Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1 of the book Clear Amber Hammer King: A Douluo Dalu Fanfiction

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BloodCleaver
Think I commented this on the original site you posted on too, but if he is four, two years younger than everyone else doing the ceremony, and they go youngest to eldest.. shouldn't he be first? Unless little Yan is the youngest of the six year olds, thus leaving MC completely out of that list so he can be last. The wording is just strange which is why I'm typing this entirely too long comment
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SilverEyedLionKing
I remember reading this from 3~8 months ago and I liked it please continue to update and release Thanks for the chapter
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3PoundsOfRice
I'm glad that you change to this platform, your fanfiction is very good, I hope that others like it as much as I do
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Pedro_Padre
Dream isn't over yet. I'm pretty sure Truck-kun would say otherwise.
4yr
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InsertUserNameHere
Y’all better not forget that truck-kun graced him with this!
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Alexheen
An interesting concept of writing a story in pure words rather than display system like feature it's fresh like a true novel should be and well welcomed new piece, . .
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MrSrew
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MrSrew

holyy moly very long very detailed and very good tsk tsk tsk good work Author, Power stone for you~!
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TyrTheFallen
if i could add a video here i would add one with a whole stadium applauding for a chapter well done.
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Immortal_Lover
I am very impressed. I feel like so dumb while reading this one. a very clear and detailed information and very deep and flowery words that it makes me so hard to comprehend it. English is my 3rd language so I'm not really good at it. thank you for this wonderful chapter
4yr
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Kurama_is_tsundere
Thanks for the chapter
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