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4.67

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  • Story Development
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AToastForADay
Hi! Review from the author. 1. Writing Quality - As my native language is not English so there would be mistakes in my grammars, terms or etc. but I'm trying to improve as well and if you spot any mistakes just comment in the paragraph of it as I'll see what I can do. 2. Story Development - The synopsis I wrote there is what I intended it to be. If you're reading it now and get confused what happened to the second volume and such, don't be flustered as you will know everything once you get to the third volume of the story. The story will be a bit slow-paced due to the mysteries that I crafted but you will surely understand once you continue reading. THIS STORY IS NOT JUST A SIMPLE STORY OF A BUTLER AND HIS MASTER. 3. Character Design - As there would be many characters included in the story and the MC will be meeting new ones as she travelled, don't get confused to their attitudes as some of them had similarities with each other. The MC is a dense person as well as the butler. And if you read this story, we don't have two MCs only one but they are somehow connected. 4. Updating Stability - Everyday, obviously. 5. World Background - The story is set in a Diverse Culture, so don't be confused with Chinese names, Japanese names or Korean ones and other unique names, too as they are made for each the continent they represented. Disclaimer: If you drop your review, please signify an understandable reason why did you rate it to be like this? What's the matter of the story and such... because I'll be reading it. And I don't entertain foul comments or harsh words anymore so suit yourself. So that's all, thank you! Have a nice toasty day!
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Garo_
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dkennedyb1988
Thanks for the novel 😃😁😁🙃😗🤪😚😚😝🤭🤑🤗🤫🤔🤭😜😋😋🤩😂🥰🤣😆😍😚😋🤑😙😝🤗😝😚😉😘😃😁😚😋🤗🤔🤭😛🤫🤩😋😂😅😊😆😂🤫🤗🤑😙😙☺🙃😊😀😃
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Levi_zoldyck
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christinekrah21
Okay where to begin to be honest, the book is truly amazing for real. I can’t even think of words to describe how compelling the book is to read
3yr
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Kora_McGuire
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3yr
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varean
I'll give 5 stars to the author! I've read only the first few chapters but it already has me hooked. The synopsis itself is already intriguing. I like that there is a clear goal for the main character. There's really nothing bad to comment about the novel so keep it up! Keep updating!
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qweenamanda
amazing book. not completely done but the synopsis needs a little bit more work. maybe add space and not make it look clustered.Amazing book
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qweenamanda
amazing book. not completely done but the synopsis needs a little bit more work. maybe add space and not make it look clustered. overall from what I have read, amazing book![img=coins]
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anlaS0
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anlaS0

So far the story is good, first few chapter is good, pulling me into the story more. Plot is good, few errors, writing is the writing is very proficient. it’s just that I get confused reading some parts but I honestly still think it’s good. think it’s a worth reading book o(^_^)o
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bibiyenini
I felt the fantasy mixed with romance feels in this book! Just got to add it to my recommendations list! And the one-word impact on the title is really lit!❤
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Ibisen
The characters and world are written to be so fascinating. I'm kept reading by the great atmosphere the writer has set up. The author has a great way with words that will keep you hooked. I definitely recommend it.
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Immortal_eve4
The descriptions were amazing and it made me feel as if I'm in a past era. Characterization and worldbuilding were executed properly and promising. This story is a gem and I haven't encountered any errors in grammar which makes me satisfied. Reading this was great.
3yr
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Miss_Justice
This novel is better than the best! I've been looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by its mere sentences and words. It was really hard to locate one. But now I had found it. A unique novel with no comparison. Keep up the good work author! Also I want more chapters!!!
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choclatte
I am really eager now for what's gonna happen, love the characters. The personalities of each characters are relatable in real life. Love the way it makes me feel involved in the story, add the mystery and thrill that keeps me from missing any bit of the details. Makes my mind go crazy with all the descriptives used. I would really appreciate it more if there were some puzzle soon that we readers can participate, overall, the story is great, would love more stories from the author. ☺️
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ThreeEmptyWord
I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️. I love the development of the story. I I'm only at my toes in every chapter. No Clift hanger... Over all it's A M A Z I N G ❤️❤️❤️
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angelfromheaven
I like how the story develop and it was very inclining to read it. The author is really good at dropping a mind bomb. Good mysteries, i guess.
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balikishadizah
Its actually my first time writing a review. This novel is interesting, I couldn't bring myself to drop it when I read a few chapters. Author: keep the good work up and update frequently.
5yr
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