Reviews of Fairly Fair Trades by JA_Anton - Webnovel

This story is everything I wish for. The author's writing style is humorous. The setting is unique and as magical and mystical as one could wish for. The characters are intriguing and full of mysteries. And the cover, it's so beautiful! (And I know the talented author drew it!!) Can't wait for the next chapter. This story is a must read if you enjoy a mystical story revolving around 'Fate'.

The story has a funny opening chapter XD. The fairy godmother MC is really interesting, and the impression she gives, at least at the start, is stronger than the one I got from the prince. It has clean writing with minor errors. The sentences inside parentheses threw me off at first, but those are simply how character thoughts are represented (fyi, Inkstone doesn't allow the use of italics for some inconvenient reason). Can't really comment on the update stability since this just came out. I kept that at 3 stars. Story development, the prince seems to be under a curse, and I really like the fact that the mysterious character called "Fate" is male. This is the first time I'm seeing that done, it makes me look forward to how different the story could be because of this. The progression so far is action-packed, there's this amusing character in the fifth chapter haha, I'll let you discover him yourself if you give this a try. There's realistic dialogue between characters, and their personalities shine through. The chapters are short and light, so the contents are very easy to take in. The only real criticism I have that might affect the popularity of the story is that the prince, whom I'm going to assume is the ML, seems to be in love with another woman. For me, at least, it would be interesting to see how his affections would shift to the MC, but many readers might not be down with that initial setup. I'm not confident with this advice, but perhaps during the MC and ML's interactions further in, you could play up their chemistry even though they have zero feelings for each other as of yet. Minor nitpick: take advantage of Grammarly to fix errors and become more familiar with the use of punctuations. Aside from those issues, your writing quality is very good already. Great job!

"Your brothers are way ***ier." bWAHAHAHAHAHA I CAN SPEND THE WHOLE DAY LAUGHING, WHAT THE HELL 😂😂 this line should be included in a book that should be called 'how to talk to a noble 101'