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Befragedaman
Very cool. very. Cool . Very cool very cool. Very very very very very cool. Very cool. Very cool . Yes sirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. no maammmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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AaminaAli
I like the natural flow of the story. And the character development is also very nice, hope each character has a different personality which is easy to understand. Good job! Keep up the good work :D
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Crosti
i thought you stopped! Glad you continued. Keep up the good work very interesting so far...................................................................
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Maryum
Hello everyone!
I'm the author of this novel. First of all, I would like to say that I am very thankful to all the readers who took out time and read this novel, and are reading this review as well! π
Secondly, I would like to give you a basic idea and overview of the novel. According to some people, it might not be a novel that focuses on only the sports section. And they are indeed right. My aim is to write such a story that focuses on different aspects of life and not only on sports. For me, this genre is a platform through which I would be able to write a unique novel. However, I will not disappoint you all in terms of saying that this is not completely a sports novel. I picked this genre for a reason and it will be filled with adventure. Using sports as a main topic, I will try my best to present you all with a great novel!
Lastly, I would like to say that if you guys have any suggestions regarding my writing, I would love to read them through your comments and reviews.
Thanks a lot for reading. β€
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Bluerose0308
This is a very good story so far! I love the descriptional details and how thorough your characters personalities are. Your vocabulary is also expanded, which makes your story even more enjoyable. A few pieces of criticisms I just wanted to add are that your writing style is a little choppy and clichΓ©. For instance, the whole section on how Aiden just so happened to guess the main protagonists and just so happened to start encountering her more frequently. To counter these kind of occurrences, try making the events a but more unique to spice up and individualize your writing. You could do this by rewording or adding to the dramatized affect like how certain scripts of dramas do. Additionally, your writing is choppy in the sense that you write out each scene very.... Formalized. In an algorithm that's like, "She does this, then goes here, talks to him, and goes home." These are all obviously just my opinions lol, but I hope I helped in any way I could. Good luck!
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AaminaAli
It is a very interesting novel. I like the character design and typical college style in the novel. The description and way of conveying expressions and scenes are also great. I like the novel... It's really enjoyable! Please continue writing and keep updating more chapters... ππππβ€β€ππ
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