Reviews of The Best Title by Alfwulf - Webnovel

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I like RPG novels, Orcs, elves etc... But they are ruined by constant level ups that ruin the flow of the story, well you won't have that problem with this novel, There is a level up system, but it rarely appears, more like I even forgot it exists before it pops up.

I rarely read stories involving orcs nowadays, and this book introduces rather kinder orcs which I liked. There are other creatures mentioned in passing, and I am curious to know more about the world being presented in this novel. Moreover, I find the concept of 'title' quite fresh and intriguing. For suggestions: (Please note these are just my take. Feel free to use or disregard my comments as you see fit.) Since only four chapters have been uploaded, it is still difficult to judge the characters and the world. Ben as the main character is yet to grow on me. I guess this has something to do with the pacing of the story which, I must admit, was quite fast. I think the story would have left more impact if the author slowed it down a bit. Additional descriptions would also help in making the characters and the scenes--especially that first meeting between Ben and Grey--become more striking. Writing-wise, I noticed some misspelled words and wrong word usage. I saw in the forum that someone else already told the author about Grammarly. I'd recommend that, too. The author should also be careful with run on sentences, shifting tenses, and misplaced modifiers. Overall, I think this story has a very good premise. Just a little polishing, and it will be a really good novel :)