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Pandoras_Actor
it is a good story and i like how the author is not shy when it comes to swaring and I look forward to when I returns (when is a mystery unfortunatly)
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Yourmomwashere
I think we all know the real reason we clicked on this novel. Kekekekekekekekekekekekekkeekekkekeekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekek.
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Eye_Ball
Ghostz
i love reading your book and hate at the same time because there isnt plot.
I dont hate the book you wrote but i just find flaw in them but Just keep keeping on writing and dont mind this comment.
Here a quote βrepect other and other will repect youβ
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Dragonfire16
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Dragonfire16
Cool novel ππππ
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BigShiesty
Greenfieldjj*jjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhjhj jr. Everywhere we reintroduce all law week jew funk new FM be b new FCC grew TV crew CV new rrd wesh UW in free but raw to redrew
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Darkdevourer
Kill all the babies of the world(?
Hail utchutulu?
Long live to the empire :v
Dunno what more to write here lol.
140 obligatory characters :'v
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Dropletcloud
Didn't like it sorry the main character is so focus in his past even though he is in another world , Too whimpy to me and also about being guilty about the baby orcs? or was it goblins? Probably orc babies
He is too doesn't have the feeling of being free. Or doesn't try to do it about than I'm scared to kill "Innocent Orc Babies " MC man the fack up you aren't only one with the problems and stop wiggling your past like an ass, It isn't important! You have PTS?
WE DON'T GIVE A SHIT ! you are now a tentacle. And have a tentacle form act like one until you gain your human form . or not. Because plot twist . Morals are only to those who have power if you don't have enough power gathered and you face your trails. You will fail .also about the orc babies great job for killing them. Just hope they are not like the warcraft movies orcs because those guys have honor ,If they are hentai based orcs - yeah **** those they grow up as a rapist.
Will you developed the story nicely the system is improving but the one who developed and using the system is not who I like . Even if he will grow up I will still remember what was he like
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GhostyXXX
Titties upon titties. This is not a fanficy. Real ******** stuff. I hope you all enjoy the insanity of this story. I will do everything I can to edit and make this story better each day.
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Teraphoenix
So far the story is developing good and I hope that he is now more like a savage monster that is calm and scheming with the goal to devour everything. And not like that pu***y that has too much emotions I expect coldness someone that doesent care about the deaths of orc babys I mean he is a monster afterall. So he should act like one.
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DonHit
I had one question what is grimdark harem????βΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊ
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primordial_oudon
The book is amazing one of my favorites i wish more people would read it and like these kins of monster mc novels i wish there were more good ones like this and hope the book can make it to completion.:3
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exceed12
That's super i like it where it is going and story pacing also good not fast or slow good job author π.................................................................................
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uSeer
Eye of the ????????
Am I right?
This sounds nice I didnt read it yet but I will, there are only nine chapter so I couldnt really judge story development and world background but I will start reading it now!!!
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