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Syphat
This one here is one of the best novel so far that I have read, but sadly it is also under rated. This one deserve a better ranking than what it have right now. I pray it get what it deserves, and more attention to the readership.
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Carson089
With every new chapter you make me love your story more and more it is a great story and you are a great author I canβt wait till more people start reading it I think it could be huge
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Carson089
We need more chapters please I love this novel but chapters are released so slowly
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HungryPotato
Nice read, the protagonist Dante is a unique leader, his 3 companions are also interesting. I have been reading wuxia novels for sometime now. I can say that this story is very interesting has a lot of potential. More chapters if possible hehe and maybe add familiars into the Faye or not . Group working together to complete quest is also good point in the story. Numbers does not always represent success, trust and team work is more important..
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Syphat
I hope you're here to stay and continue writing. You been gone for a long time, what happen? Any way I love your work.ππππππππππππππππππ
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MeiaNoite
A Nice novel, full of brutality and a good personality development of the characters.
Has the premise of an interesting adventure and totally new ideas, the author manages to add good quality comedy at appropriate times.
The only discomfort is the release rate of chapters, however, already addressed by the author himself.
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DrOlive
This is a great story, one of the best I have read so far. Although the posting rate is a bit low, I really love it. The author has a smooth writing style and a very good sense of humour. The story background seems deep and the different characters are good. I highly recommend it.
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LordDaoThief
I think itβs an overall good story world building probably isnβt done but no reason to give it 3-4 stars because of that as I got sucked Into this story quick. It is a well made and crafted dungeon world gives you just enough to go through the story with out needing or feeling like there is a lack of Information for you to enjoy fully. Give it a read you wonβt regret
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Kaichen442
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Ali006
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Carson089
Amazing start need more chapters and please please donβt drop this novel it is so good and has so much promise
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Criz3m
Predictable plot. Please, do prove me wrong, but after reading the 1st chapter, half of the plot was revealed.
1. Obviously, there is no way that they were all kidnapped to participate in the game. Thats way too many people so that means they all did it voluntarily. And the game might be broadcasted.
2. Why participate? Perhaps there is a huge amount of sum that can be won or something else to entice people to play a brutal game. (They get to keep their powers?) Perhaps they want to escape their everyday lives or escape from police who are looking for a serial killer. BUT our protagonist seems to be after something else (maybe to find out more about the organisation to destroy it or simply to have fun), because there is no way such an intelligent person would participate in such a game and be after things he probably already had before. (Money)
I might be wrong, but this was the impression i got.
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Spunk_image
I really like this one. There is not much about to say about the story but it is good to see that not everything goes the way Mc like it. Keep up the good work, please raise your update speed.
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minyol
I love how honest the character development is. But I felt that Dante needed more negative emotions in him to highlight human nature. He could've been a tad bit scared, just to be a bit realistic.
There are many grammar issues that I wish could be fixed. I'm only pointing this out because I want to be as comfortable as possible, considering I'm going to follow this book till the end!
The concept of a survival game is not lost on me. It was introduced so smoothly, too. Chapter one truly reels us in a lot.
Hoping for more chapters. Thanks for the great read!
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Carson089
This story is so good please donβt drop it author you have done and amazing job
stupid 140 characters ...........................,.,.,.,,.,.,..,.,..,.,,.,,.,,.,,.,.,,,,,,,,,,m,,m,,,m,,,mm,m,mm,
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Carson089
Amazing story please keep writing and giving us more of this amazing story .............................................................................................
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lg123456
nice start, calm and clever MC sometimes even cruel one, nice side characters, good world cruel an interested, even some romance
nice start, calm and clever MC sometimes even cruel one, nice side characters, good world cruel an interested, even some romance
nice start, calm and clever MC sometimes even cruel one, nice side characters, good world cruel an interested, even some romance
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ijjmmh
good start please more chapter
good start please more chapter
good start please more chapter
good start please more chapter
good start please more chapter
good start please more chapter
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l1243gggg
good one, interesting start more chapters needed
good one, interesting start more chapters needed
good one, interesting start more chapters needed
good one, interesting start more chapters needed
good one, interesting start more chapters needed
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l1234567859
nice Dungeon story, smart , calm mc cruel world looking forward for more chapters
nice Dungeon story, smart , calm mc cruel world looking forward for more chapters
nice Dungeon story, smart , calm mc cruel world looking forward for more chapters
nice Dungeon story, smart , calm mc cruel world looking forward for more chapters
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Lukas12345
Please more chapters, MC is smart and calm nice development please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters
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ArrogantYoungMasta
A good story so far! Feed us pls. MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!MORE!! MORE!!MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!
Fucking 140 characters
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Kaichen442
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Lukas12345
Quite a few interesting ideas ( no memory of MC, brutal unknown world,) calm MC , even some possible love interested
-please more chapter
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-please more chapter
-please more chapter
-please more chapter
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Neptulon
Main character has a mysterious background which is one of the my favorite things in a story. Fluent storyline also makes you forget how the time passes away when you read so i can not wait to see more chapters already. Give this novel a chance if you seek something different, something curious in dungeon stories. It fills up all of it's requirements and adds much more to genre. Good job!
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1234h
good start, we need more chapters ;)
good start, we need more chapters ;)
good start, we need more chapters ;)
good start, we need more chapters ;)
good start, we need more chapters ;)
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