With a title like this, I wasn't expecting smut. I was going to break this review down on writing Quality etc. But I need to point out a flaw in this plot. I don't see what the two have as romance right now. Instead, all I see is 'lust' and 'desire.' that's a common theme that's found on WN. So that's fine. But I don't think Caroline or John realize that there are no actual feelings of 'love' Maybe you can add this in and in the future a more genuine romance can be built between them.
Writing Quality: There's a few issued, but nothing that can't be fixed with a writing program like Grammarly or prowriting aid.
Character Design: Contrary to the present plot line, the characters are developed - though John's story is still vague for now. I'm guessing this was done deliberately. We learn a lot about Caroline's situation from the very beginning. So it's easy to understand what sort of personality she has
Story Development: Right now I'm unsure of where the plot is going. But I'm guessing John will chose to go after her and Caroline will think more about her feelings for John. Or maybe they could spend much longer apart from each other. You could have them meet again when they are much older, maybe a year time skip?
Overall: This is my first time reading this type of story. I hope I was able to give you some good advice. And keep up the good work!!
He literally r4pes her. Forces her to take off her clothes after he r sister was caught trying to steal. Then when she’s asleep he takes videos of him taking advantage of her again. And the author makes it sound as if she’s like his holy grail or something as if he’s never touched a woman and he is very oddly pleased with he fact that she’s a virgin. That’s only he first chapter. Do better and stop putting bs like this out idc if it’s just a translation either. Stop. It’s disgusting and you’re romanticizing forced intercourse.
Please keep updating , i want to see what happens later. I like the fl and ml , and this is getting so exiting.i really hope for a good ending,because some novel's that i watched didn't have the ending i was accepting for.
This book was recommended to me by another author. I can’t stop reading it from the first time I read it. A Bit controversial at the beginning, but I’m totally rooting for the ML and FL to stay together and have Their happily ever after facing together any difficulties that come their way. I highly recommend this book. I will read it until the end.
I really like the story. It was well written and the plot is absolutely beautiful. Sometimes it is warm, happy and sad in every chapters. Love it and I highly recommended it! Thank you author.
Not a good book. The lead is a rapist who never regrets it except that he may lose her, not because rape is wrong. The way the book is written really downplays it. It makes it seem like the fl is annoying and flaky, but reality is most people would not even like him at all and probably call the police. Also most women wouldn't just go along with him like that and many would not enjoy it no matter how 'good' he was. Just because it isn't violent rape, it's still rape as she feels she has no choice.
He actually filmed when he raped her and watches it to masturbate to. This is a huge violation of privacy and illegal in many countries.
I add this story during the pandemic, I was hooked immediately. I find this story interesting and entertaining. My only problem was I am still finishing reading 3 stories. Anyway I will now start reading this. I can't wait anymore.
I immediately added this to my reading list when I firstread the synopsis. I have a feeling that this a good story. I actually saves my fast pass so when the time comes that I will read this I will have enough. I hope to find time to start my reading.
I think this story is interesting and fun to read based on the synopsis aline. I Immediately added this to my reading list while waiting for the right time and a lot of fast pass to yse to read this. the twist I think is kind of exciting.
I read this novel from the beginning to the end. Sometimes I would become frustrated but I keep reading because the story is gripping, and yes... it's controversial. The lemons (smut scenes) are so satisfying and reading this was my guilty pleasure for months! The book has a CEO in the title, but it's not really cliche as it is set in the Philippines (other books are usually in some unknown countries or in China) and it's quite refreshing.
It still has an evil (twin not step) sister though. Ugh, I hate the sister so much.
Story line is well developed.....the Grammar is nice to read to ......the synopsis written has captured me easily to read the story. It's depends on the person who read it whether it is good or bad😄😄😄
If there is a rating of minus, I will definitely do so. This is a garbage stuff and to me those who can come up with such ideas needs to attend series of psychiatrist consling.
Never ever read any novels wrote by this author.
John is a bit miserable while Catherine is lack of understanding with him. And John needs the real caring and love cause he lost his old love while Catherine can only give him the physical touches which she seems yearn for it too. But I love this novel cause it gives me a whole new emotion.
The storyline is quite compelling and pulls you in. The synopsis is engaging and tells a lot about the character of the female lead. She is ready to pay for what she wants even if it is to her disadvantage and she recognizes the efforts of the male lead.
My first and best read that got me hooked up with webnovel. Well rounded characters and very interesting story. No boring moments. Excited with the 2nd book.
i like the plot and the way the smut part is put nicey so i don't have any problems with it so i, think it's good as a story and for he photo i can say that the author really have nice eye with art with a smart fl i think the story is perfect
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