Reviews of Taking on the Magical World by Abdirah101 - Webnovel

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Nice start but the MC turn out to be a perfect moron, I stop wen charactres start to go todly of the chart, like Dumbledore murdering créatures in front of first year students and treting to murder them ...

I loved the beginning but then all the sudden he turned into a manipulative idiot who thinks he needs pawns instead of becoming more powerful by himself or others but instead seeks out people to make them do what he wants

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it was very good. plus the author **** on mc. What a slow dumbledore this was. I was loving the story but the author made it smarter and ***** for a worse child than Ron

I have read the first 51 chapters and there has been 0% of it progress and honestly most of the plot is how the MC & Weasley Twins hate and try to kill Finch’s cat.... don’t waste your time if you want a HP fan fiction that has ANY plot

trash seriously forced plot, gary stu, unbelievable plot whatever the kid says everyone believes even if its bull****, slow pace like an old turtle 100 chapter for the end of book 1

This fanfiction is pretty awful. It has the worst of both genres it is inspired from. In the early chapters, a lot of it is just copy-paste from the HP book with little relevant context. In the later chapters, it takes on the worst aspects of wuxia/xianxia character development, with the MC randomly acting like a psychopath, with no apparent catalyst. This is not a story I'd recommend, especially considering there are several dozen lengthy HP fanfictions on this site/app

The mc's mother is so annoying "if I tell you, you will be in danger" what is the fu** with her, she is talking like the people who are targeting her will know about their conversation And what with this stupid mc 😑😑😑😑 So disappointing😑😑😑😒

Honestly this story starts off amazing and quite original even with the grammer issues but it sharply falls off around chapter 65 ish with the whole dumbledore, it seems as though the author just doesnt know what comes next and you can tell because the next 30 chapters the plot suffers compared to the orginial first 30-40 chapters. All in all an ok read up til chapter 60 ish then you can stop tbh.

The book starts off which a great premise, but then starts going off the rails when a ten year old starts yelling, insulting, blackmailing, and generally being a dick. And no one around seems to do anything about it. It boggles my mind seeing as to everyone else he should have no major background.

It’s a good story, the characters logic is a bit strange but over all it’s a pretty good story! Keep up the good work author! Well I have to have 140 signs or letters....

Bad grammar, forced story, no ‘character’. It’s annoying to read, characters speak bluntly, very boring. Immature. ................,.,,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,l,.,.,,,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,

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Alright i only made it to chapter 7. In chapter seven the mc gets revenge on some boys for making fun of his sister luna lovegood. Who is a wierd girl by calling her a wierdo... then the author describes making children sick over and over for quite some times and was then basically rewarded by his mother for terrorising children.. his mother only stopped him before he weaponized an aersol version of the flu. First i should mention luna is less than 5 years old. No where in the chapter does it describe the boys as older. My thoughts in america it is a crime with prison time if you purposefully make someone sick with food poisonings. My thought was if the mc is already so young to develop this dark mentality there is no way he can be a good person. Pycopaths torment animals. The evil voldermort was a quiet nice kid in hogwarts. The mc is already well beyond voldermort stage at a much younger age.. the mc mother is described as a theif who breaks into and steals magic books out of there volts or such. And i am pretty sure she married mr lovegood as a fall guy. Wondered how many people she killed to take there belongings. Personally at this point of the story i think the mc needs to be killed off there is just something wrong with him. This early in the story it already at the level were if a passerby were to say what a jerk if his father cut someone off while walking into a store the mc would sneak into that passerby home chop off limbs of the mans children use that dark magic spell imperious or whatever it was called and feed his childrens limbs to him. It is that dark already.

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At first glance this story seems to be a decent and potentially interesting combination of harry potter and some small xianxia features such as a form of cultivation levels, not literal but figurative. Still seems cool. Then unfortunately the story sadly follows the pagj of copy pasta. The character is supposed to be starting school early and is one year older than harry potter. This sets a neat idea, sadly again there begins the coppasta. It becomes a copy of sorcerors stone. Lines after lines of dialogue and descriptions directly lifted out of the first hp book. This a good fanfiction doth not make. I recommend going back and rewritting the story from thebeginning the character and his mother and family really do need more interaction and relational dialogue. Not enough detail and the characters seem a bit shallow personality wise.

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I think this novel is good. I love the way you use level to discribe the power of people in there. I hope you don't drop this. Well I think you need to exercise the body. The stonger the body also help to contain the energy.

Passando apenas para dar uma ideia. tentem imaginar comigo, renascendo em harry potter world com 2 desejos..... 1 um sharingan 2 o sistema de "adventure of the archmage"

The novel looks good But I have an important question? One of the most hated things in Harry 's original Is not marrying Hermione That's why I hated Ron desperately So I do not know how I watched and completed the movies The question is, is there a harem or not?