i am just gonna be honest here this whole side character Mallory keeps infurating me if i would be in the position in the mc even with his mental disposition: she created the joker not like bruce who did it because he was new at it no she just plainly ignored his orders and did because it was fun so she pretty much deserved to die at that point if not for the fact that she stole one of his promised powers (Still not liking this part) well otherwise this story is a great as it can be not too overpowered mc and still providing a funny story with much growth potential so go ahead but please let mallory die for his character growth that ***** deserves nothing more
i think this is stupid the powers he picked are too weak for the dc world and its kinda boring i'm dropping why can't i write a shorter review i hate writing reviews
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kill the girl and make him regain power ...
this girl is ruining the story ... I recommend starting over with him with all the powers or killing this annoying girl plague
So far not bad, just the release of chapter is a bit slow. The story is going in an interesting direction. The combination of the heros gas veen done very well. At fist i thought the mc will be op but its good tht he is not, its better to grow steady than being too op in the beginning, but at the same time i hope he will be op.
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Its terriable the author gave away the only power worth having to a female to make her special and important to the plot. So the girl will be able to stand side to side with the mc. I'm dropping..
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very hard to read but good story
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AbsoluteCarnage