the character work on this novel is good really good but the research into the time. Not so good need some detail work too but I do enjoy the book quite a bit where the characters
So, basicay his dad got NTRed. His mom ****ed some random shit, that's why his 'dad' doesn't like him. Completely justifiable tbh. Don't pity the MC to be not liked by his father. Also, my initial impression for the novel, while it was quite good, kept on dropping after author introduced freya, who had an unrequited love for MC. Idk, the author seems to try it make it as xomplex as he can. Overall, I can see why some may enjoy it, but it definitely not for me. Wish it didn't had some of the elements that I really hate, if not it would have been a good read.
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It's Unique, that's the best way to describe the novel.
At first you will think that this was about some reincarnation thingys, well you're not wrong but the story progress is just so damn good.
How every character had some moral conflict, the endearing speeches and heartwarming relationship.
Maybe the twist is a bit predictable but it was kinda foreshadowing in the early phase of the novel, so it was not that surprising.
This novel in itself is a script for TV drama or Anime.
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This was indeed a good story. I really love it. Especially the flow of the story and characters. πππππππππππππππππππππ
When I began reading this, I did so only to pass the time between events in my life. As time went on, however, I found myself sneaking in a chapter or 2 at any given opportunity. Truly addictive and beautifully worded. Thankfully I did not need to wait for installments as it was readily available when I started. Thank you to the author, I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter and was captivated. I look forward, even eager, to reading more of your titles.
This book deserves to be made a movie π₯ .
I love this book....................... Thanks author ...you did a wonderful job, I enjoyed every minute of reading this novel....
Really good story very different from anything else here on Web novel, the world is very well-thought-out the characters are well done. Love the interactions between the 2 main characters. This was a very well done book.
I actually have yet to review a single book even the good ones but this ones plot and character interactions are just stupidly rich and detailed,definitely deserves a read if your into wars,drama,politics,romance,or just a fan of good books in general.
Wow... Just WOW...!!! Hv never read such an awesome War plot novel....!!!! The tactics, the Castonians strength and courage esp Rooster.... I was awed while reading it...!!!! Great just great... Loved reading such an amazing novel....!!!!
I really wanted to give a shot to this novel, but there are really a lot if things that just donβt make sense to anyone who knows a little about how things worked in the Medieval period. I tolerated it at first and I read till the 44th chapter, but when the story is based on ridiculous things again and again, itβs unbearable and too annoying to read.
A critical review here, coming from great books like the Song of Ice and Fire series (Game of Thrones books) and Tom Clancy books, this webnovel has a good plot HOWEVER it lacks intricate details throughout the book. Its basically like reading a summary of a book or just reading the MOST important parts of a plot/story but you almost barely read parts about the day to day or the more deep details to flesh out its writing.
The writing style is great and flows effortlessly. Characters are developed well and you as the reader feel part of the action as each character is portrayed. A very well written novel overall and an awesome read. Looking forward to more written work/s by this author.
BRILLIANT! JUST BRILLIANT!
Could pass as a real printed paperback novel.
The story is very intriguing, very well written.
The characters feel real.
The romance is strong and not sappy.
I just... LOVE IT.
saya hanya suka membaca. banyak membaca itu menyenangkan. menyenangkan sekali. apakah sudah 140 kata. entahlah. intinya suka membaca. dan terimakasih untuk capternya
We should really appreciate this masterpiece. The story are very compelling and the intricacies involved between the characters and the environment are interesting and bored proof.
Wow, what a story. This is one of the best novels on the site. Normally I hate multiple perspectives in stories, but somehow the author made me care about the different characters
You should read it. Do I need to say Else?
Characters are gold, story is gold, romance is gold, everything is gold. The quality of this story is way over web novel standards. After you read it, youβre gonna have a hard time finding a new story that can quench your thirst.
The union is a marvelously written novel. If you like a story of chivalry, honour, loyalty and love. This novel is for you. Written in a fantasy world of the medieval age. Wars, schemes, hunger and deaths were common. And in the background a hidden ancient secrets of past civilizations threaten the world.
This is a wonderfully crafted story of two possible hired to there thrones who in time will help each other gain the respective things and unite their kingdoms in a path to conquer all who afend them
This was an excellent chapter with a wonderful ending that help expand on the world building and the unions grasp of power while also being very well written and has a great overall flow from beginning to end never being dull in the slightest and a near will wearing ending for this semi arc
Many may not understand but I will always love this novel πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Hello there dear author...Honestly, i haven't read your jewel yet.From all your readers perspective, i have learned how awesome you are in making your story so amazing.i am very excited to start reading this one..hoping for the best!!π€π€π€π€
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