Reviews of You Are Mine by mockingbird81 - Webnovel

I like the plot of the story. Although the author is new, the stoyline is clear, detailed and descriptive. I really like it so far. I hope to read more of this.

Reading this story and get upset with how stupid Joseoh is and how naive the female lead is. when will she fight? anyways, goodjob to the author.

The writer has stopped updating for a long time. Its a good story and I will love to read it to the end, but it's sad that there are no new update for a long time

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I love this story and am still waiting patiently. Pls update the story for us. It's Been long. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

This is an interesting story line.wow! I love it. It's really entertaining. Am already addicted to it. I couldn't even write chapter comments because I can't wait to read the next chapter,even when I have load of things to write. That is how good am enjoying. Ride on author . You are doing a good job👍😍😋❤️❤️

The story is so interesting..I hope that the author won't drop it because I can't wait to know the rest of its plot and the truth about his mother obsession...

......The story of the novel and its plot is so amazing and interesting.......It's the first time for me to read this type of story about an obsessed mother and her thoughts about her son and her plans to get rid of any girl around him even if it's her daughter but I think it's the reason why this novel took much attention from us .......and wow I am waiting for the updates......please don't be late

......The novel is very interesting...... .....It is the first time for me to read this type of story ....It began with a lot of misunderstandings that lead me to read the next chapters to know what had happened to the female lead .... ..And I really can't wait until its next update... .......Thanks for such an enjoyable story...

Loving novel, still enjoying the novel so far. I know that the author is a little not too fast in updating the chapters but it is really really interesting and loving. Thanks for the novel 💝💖❤

Good novel, author please try to bring more chapters I'm really hungry for your books, Everything about the book is okay, and I also like the fact that, the chapters are long. Author keep it up...

This novel is really interesting, and I'm enjoying the flash back, I just wish the author will hasten up, and give a massive release. Thanks author for this wonder novel

I read the the beginning 5 chapters of this novel and I find it similar to the pocketbook that I had read. It's a Filipino version though but I'm sure the stories are the same. So I'm asking if the author of this story and the pocketbook that I had read are the Same?? I really love that story you know.Just asking. Thank you! GOD Bless!

I'm reading this story.. and I'm already addicted by it... Please more update.. story is veeeeeeerrrrrryyy interesting.. I'm loving it very much.. I will support you.. promise...

The story has potential. I find the pace a bit fast, I guess, but definitely, the plot is interesting. But please, please check the grammar and spelling because even at the first chapter, it has lots of typos already. Nevertheless, it can be fixed later. It's just that, it most probably will affect the fluidity of the reading experience. Moreover, I noticed, there is subtle switching of POV's? Please be careful as it might cause unnecessary confusion to the readers. Overall, it's good and keep improving. Thumbs up.

Writing quality is good. Stability of updating os improving. Story developement is superb. Character design is amazing, they are introduced well. 5 stars for me.

Nice story. 👍 Intriguing plot. Characters were introduced fairly. The cold Joseph, the poor Christine, and the possessive demonic Celine. (That Celine is really getting into my nerves. Urggg!) Story development is quite in pace. 👍 Writing quality needs proofreading. Switching from 1st person to 3rd person was confusing. (Visible around middle chapter) I notice some typos error like 'het' instead of 'her'(forgot the chapter) Confusing and switching of tenses, past and present tense. (Also a problem of mine, haha) And lastly, the use of punctuation mark on a quotation mark. Usually, commas weren't needed after a quotation mark. e.g. "Addddds?" Instead of "Addddds?", (Don't need the commas anymore) Hope it help! 😊 PS. The last chapter improved a lot. Keep writing. 😄

Author has done a pretty good job with the novel, seeing that its a first novel. The story is interesting and not common, so thats a good thing.Good job author and keep it up.

I like the progression of the story. Grammar is improving and updating of chapters has improved. The author promised 3 chapters a week and so far it was fulfilled. Good job

I love it...The character is well described with her actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck

It has a few typos and gramatical issues here and there. For example skipping short words to complete a sentence. Such as: "I, Too, Off" Those of course are examples and not directed to the actual story. Point is some words are missing. I reccomend you too use "Google Docs". It has an inbuilt spell check and as for gramatic errors, make sure to read and edit a part a few times before posting. It is beyond helpful. As for the story, i did enjoy it. It has twists that would make even a grown man cry. Keep up the amazing work.

I like the story, it is refreshing. Please update it regularly.i would like to suggest also to get someone that is editor because i can see some wrong spelling and wrong words, hope you dont mind. Keep on writing.

Plsss.. Pllssss.. Support me with your stones and give me some giod ratings... Thank you very much, i promise to update it regularly and make sure that you like it. Again, thank you.

This is my first novel. I knoe that i was not able to update it for a couple or more months but i am doing my best now to keep it updated.

Keep it up. Interesting story so far. Keep on updating it everyday. It is quiet different from the ones I have read so far in this platform.

Its different from the other stories i have read so far. I hope the author will cintinue to update it. It got my attention because its kind of fresh

Its very interesting. But there was a time that the updates took awhile. The author seems to be new but neverthelesd it has potential. I like it so far.