I liked some aspects of the OG story, but this one is shaping up to be very good as well. Coming from the original the story feels accelerated beyond belief, to the point I actually prefer the older version. I hope this changes as you pass the progression of the original and get back into making new storylines instead of remaking the old ones.
Keep up the good work!
This novel is amazing, I really love everything in it! However the rate it updates is very inconsistent and slow but the long chapters more or less make up for it.
Very well done, hopefully I get read new chapter that will be updated in the future. I hope the MC will train an army of firearms users and not to mention, form a harem!!!!!!
can u fix the status I'm confused of his stats and his imaginary time is missing in his active skill.....also nc novel............................
qlso update it ooften I kind of like this version of the story than the other because his use his imaginary time than the original
An overall good story that has been refined into a great story. Compared to the earlier version “Military System,” this story has kept all of the best things that made its predecessor great while improving upon the things that had room for improvement. One of the most notable improvements of this story compared to the first version is the pacing of the plot. Rather than starting from the bottom, Add is given more weapons earlier on in order to speed up the pace making it easier to get into the plot and story development instead of the grinding for “CP” in order to purchase an actual firearm. I am a grammar Nazi, but when it comes to WebNovel authors my standards aren’t the same for Fanfiction or other sites that are used predominantly by native English speakers. Taking that into account there are very few typos and mistakes compared to some of the other more popular stories, but most of all this story reads well.
Again, this story is probably one of the best non-Wuxia stories that incorporates certain lit-rpg elements without making half of the pages look like status screen.
Keep it up!! This is getting better every chapter!!
Cheers
super like it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I don't know what lead to write this story as alternate, but I think you should do it as rewrite of the other, no shame in that. I still wish to read a good story which blends modern technology and a fantasy setup, let's hope you achive that.
super like it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i like it
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