Reviews of Lilim Heritage Online by DamnPlotArmor - Webnovel

*MYA! Nom-Nom Mew! Meh. Mew. Meh-Heh-Heh.* (Listen up you wet bananas! I, the over 9000 INT Tama, is here to tell you all why you should read this or become my food! Also, you are required to give me your red powered jelly stone things for my efforts in writing this or I’ll make you not only a wet banana but a spilt one too! This story could be better if it was just about me hence only 4 stars for story development. My banana human is just that, a banana. Sometimes they have a wu-wu, others a wee-wee. Its weird, but ignore the boy trap and just focus on me, Tama. Some call me an eggcat, but those someones are bananas. I am a super awesome, all knowing foodie descendent from a dragon-like creature. Basically perfect, yeah. The world I live in is great! There all sorts of foods everywhere! Humans, zombies, green eggs, and ham? Tuna, snakes, scorpions, etc. My owner is abusive though and only feeds Tama the bare minimum, please call protective services for Tama before she starves to death! Author needs to write more so that Tama can show everyone how amazing they are in comparison to everyone else who are bananas. Author you banana, hurry up and give Tama more delicious foods and smarter humans. Poor Tama can only take so many bananas.. wait, that sounds wrong ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) heh-heh, banana Mish will take them in Tama’s place. But chop chop! *Mya-Nom-Nom!*

will you continue this story , i personally think this novel still can be continued and become awesome since it has a good story , though some weird language....

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Give this one a four star review! Having read it before, I can never stop wondering WHAT happens NEXT!! shame the last update was right before the coronavirus outbreak. hope nothing happened. 😔

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This is a great read I love it from the beginning to now and am going to continue reading it Love the hole sci-fi Theme and character build Not much bad about it but a Thew grammar mistakes but other then that it is really a GrEat book

I like this story its realy fune and easy to read but... id like to kno will ya continue this story? or u wont return to Tama & Misha duo? i did just finyshed last chapter and starting to mis Mew nom nom 😁

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ho ho!!!! I like this!!! should update more the MC is so hilarious with his/her banana!!! need to read moaaarr chapter!! hahahaha I still laugh at that banana

It's good.

LHO can be split into four quarters and the last quarter again into two. The first three-quarters of the story can be described as nothing but AMAZING...But the last quarter is when things began to go downhill too fast and to a very bad degree. The quality of the story was deplorable...The writing had no grammar mistakes or anything, it was the way the story developed that kinda spoiled the whole thing but still I wouldn't deny the fact that I enjoyed most, if not all of the first three-quarters of the story.......And when I said the last quarter could be separated into two halves...The first half was okayish...bad but okayish. but the second half which constitutes the last 20-30 or more chapters was down-right detestable and made me wish I had never read that part of the story. SPOILER! hap 200+ Momo was THE most annoying character in the whole story. His jokes were bearable at first but then when he took advantage of Misha...I lost it...It was really sad to watch one of my favorite books being brought down to this low but hey it's up to the author to decide what to do with his characters. To all those who want to enjoy a good story, go for the first 200 chapters but after that read it as your own risk of having it leave a bad taste in your mouth and wishing you had stopped reading and never reached the last part.

This is a great novel, and the story is amazing. I just wish that the hiatus will end soon, so that I can keep reading, since the 2 month hiatus without a warning has been quite unfortunate.

If you look past the trap stuff, there's a really solid going on, I really do wish the author would spelling check themselves before publishing. I know its a little thing, but its the little things that count,yes?

I feel like I should apologize. I’ve seen this novel for a while now but never tried it since the summary was strange and I wasn’t really interested in it, I assumed it would have been a stupid comedy or something like that. So when the farming option came and I saw that this novel could be farmed, I just decided to swipe the pages to accumulate coins. But I got a bit curious and read the first chapters and damn this is good. This is way more interesting than I thought and I am going through it as fast as I can x) So if you hesitate about this novel and have seen this comment just try it for 10 to 15 chapters and be impressed with it! Anyway good job author for creating this masterpiece

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Surprisingly one of top 10 of novels I have read.

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Well, Its kinda well written, but gender bender always freeking bothering me. I guess if there are no such thing, such as gender bender there will be many more readers will like or have interest on this novel, because many will hesitate for this genre, i dont know if he/she will turn a gay. Why dont you just make it girl or pure man, it will be a really good story, and the background of the is amazing, even til now im thinking of not to go on to the upper chapters, i just.like to when you create or make next time please make it friendly for all, because it is really annoying, i know for you i guess, its just a small issue/thing. But we cant admire a gay/or a guy dressing a girl clothes. Its making our brain hurt. Hahahah tnx btw. The story has good background, plot, and even my fav genre the gaming. But gender bender strike a good deal of stress to a reader like me. I think were quite many hahahaha anyway thanks, ill try to read for a few chap.

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I felt like the image of the story and the mention of becoming a mech pilot are misleading. This is an adventure kingdom building ish story where you get spammed with banana as an insult over and over again. Overall the story is interesting and quite good. However with a mech as the image and the character saying he wants to be a mech pilot over and over, mechs are seriously not in the picture enough. He only gets his hands on a mech just before it costs spirit stones to read and instead of getting more mech action from then on... He goes home for the remaining chapters. I came to this story because it was supposed to be a mech one. I don't trust the author enough to put it sufficient mech action in there to be worth the mech tag. Hense I am dropping it since it costs stones now and I don't want to spend them on a story that doesn't deliver.... I don't care about drama, identity crisis or kingdom building. I came here for mech action. I was sorely disappointed. The one scene where it did happen made the mech look like a change of clothes that upsized the character rather than a mech... Also, prepare to seriously come to hate the word banana for its use in here. It's seriously draining. That's my honest opinion about this story. If you didn't come here for the mechs then you should still like it if you mentally blow ck the banana spam. Else... I recommend finding a mech story instead of this trap kingdom building adventure drama

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