An enjoyable read. It's still a little rough around the edges, but what web novel isn't. You can connect to the characters however and the author has done a good job world-building. Keep up with the excellent work author.
The story is narrated good, but I assume English isn’t the author’s first language. There are awkward tenses. But the important thing here is the concept. Good job on that! It is very intriguing. Mirai and Julietta are by far my favorite characters.
I won’t spoil for her power, but it’s a good twist. Ridiculously good and unique. Very much recommended~
I love it. There's something about the way the story is narrated that I find intriguing. I love the friendship budding between Mirai and Julietta. AND MIRA’S POWER I think is hilarious. I like the part that she had a choice if she fights naked or not depending on how in control she is with her power (Dark Matter). I think that adds to the humor of that scene, especially because I remember the MC talking about that exhibitionist Hollywood celeb at the beginning of the story LOL
This story has a mature feel to it and you get the cool vibe peculiar to the Japanese setting. This one is also unique that even though the protagonist is female, it sure will entertain a male audience too with this kind of plot filled with action and.. Read it yourself to find out more!
I'm 18, using 0's account on behalf of him.
Actually I have been reading your story and bookmarked it. This is story is a bit confusing for me but I enjoy when someone trapped into another world (or forcefully sent there)
I give a good review because there is no cliche ****ty isekai story that became booming today. Writer, regarding about protagonist's past or what happened to her, can you describe it in details? Also, about the world, I mean the world she transported, could you give the readers more specific details?
Like magic exist from where, etc.
Anyway, it's an honor to give a review to your story, next time I will use my own account so, you can have two good reviews lol.
POV switch to third person was a good decision. It needs an editor but what story doesn't? If you find one that works for praise, send them my way when you're done with them :D The MC's power is definitely a new twist on a classic!