The story between characters were great and interesting however the whole story jumped around. I couldn't figure out if they were flashbacks or memories. What happened to Sneha and Rohan? Did they die? And why/how did the story end with Sneha's & Ankor's childhood tragedy? I was so lost. It was like 5 stories in 1 novel.
I had mixed feelings about this story. The overall concept was really good but the transitions between chapters and volumes could use a little work. I got a bit confused throughout the story because of the placement of backstories/flashbacks. It took me a minute to figure the sequence of events. Overall, it was a pretty good read.
I don't really like the first story but I really like the second story more.... I've been crying a lot while reading that!!! Uuuurgh poor Ankur! 😭
Even though the story jump out here and there but I really like the plot! I get angry, sad and happy while reading this. Those things are the most important thing for writer to deliver to the reader in my opinion 😊
Good overall story but major problems I think with some placements. The second story should be the first! The first story has a weak ending!
Very weak male lead character! He continues to be that way most of the story. He's barely mention in the second half of the story. Even though they grew up knowing each other.
I think it would be a better crime story!✌️
Already finished reading the whole story.
The story plot itself is good but it’s to jumpy from one chapter to another and there is some missing information in between.
On later chapter come information that “seems like” written on previous chapter but actually it’s not written.
So the story is just OK for me.
Keep up writing, i know it can be improve more.
Thanks for writing the story.
The beauty inside the house of your own choices will help your family be more horrifying to the acdmy today or not for your children or family and you you will be happy for the last time they are there
A good storyline, platonically speaking. The girl is admirable, at some point. Guy, not so much. I don't like the instant love connection but it's okay I guess. The main thing is the redemption and them fighting against the odds.
The inconvenient wife is a book of patient love, the wife sure is a patient on and as they say, the patient dog eats the fastest bone. A blast of passion afterwards was mind blowing. I read all chapters from 1 to end over 5 times and I still can't stop myself, it's a book worth ones time thumbs up to u author.
This woman ( his wife by arrangement) is not playing around. The MC is now recognizing what he has in his wife versus Stella his girlfriend who’s been manipulating him from the beginning. Man up before it’s too late!
I understand how some people can give this story a good review. The writer obviously has potential and the story seems interesting. However, the plot is completely messed up. I’m not sure if the author outlined their story prior to make sure that things are cohesive since there are certain chapters that just seem random. The writing style is good. The updates are good. The direction or overall story background is good. Just the way it’s written is confusing. There is no prologue that introduces the situation your just thrown in. The characters aren’t really introduced or built up. The conflict is just bamn in your face but there’s no build up, explanation, or even details. I don’t wanna give anything away just know you can tell the author didn’t really plan what they were writing and the order of the chapters should probably be changed. It’s a good concept for a story but needs a lot of work.