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4.71

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Shinkyo1
Anticlimatic. The novel is very well written but that's it. The pace is so so slow but ... then the author makes great jumps in time without reason or explation. In a moment the mc is starting training the next has abilities and he combats. You don't know how he learn them, the process or anything. In the 14 first chapters there is not explanation of skill system. The mc is not coherent and the reactions are not realistic. He is a nurse in Africa and has stupid reactions every time he sees a dead body. He should be beyond violence, dead and ... everything. The story development doesn't have any appealing and is anticlimactic. Well, I don't want to be more critic. Maybe what surprised me more was that all where excellent reviews... The story has potencial but must be rewritten.
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savetheprincess
(this review is based on ch. 15, but since that's all for now, i decided to share my thoughts about the world, the characters and the writing style in general.) While the premise and even the world itself so far are pretty generic, with the only exception being the MC's occupation as a nurse / field medic type of thing, it is implemented beautifully through superb writing and very human character designs. Or worded differently : it manages to avoid nearly all the pitfalls most novels of this genre are usually falling into. The main character isn't a horny teenager that somehow manages to get really strong right from the get go, he's not dark and brooding, not looking for revenge. Neither he nor the people around him are one-dimensional, everyone has different sides to them, and most importantly, everyone tries to understand each other in a very relatable, and very realistic kind of way. Therefore i am really looking forward to more chapters, hoping to have found a nice, human and relatable story set in another world, instead of the usual clichés everyone in this genre has come to expect.
5yr
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TheVirginPervert
The practically professional writing quality transports you into the author's world vividly. The characters are well though and deep. I enjoyed the plot for it was well explained. :3 Keep up the good work!
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fantasy_land
Loved this story, very well written. Character & plot development is good as well as the flow of story. If anyone's looking for anything fresh and interesting, then this is your cup of tea. Highly recommend it to the readers. ** you have got another reader, that's me. Although I do hope you change your book cover to an anime one, it's bound to attract more readers, but then again it's my own opinion. Keep up the good work 👌
5yr
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GinoBee
Wow what can I say? I was hooked right at the beginning. The story is so good. I understand that the author is only doing this part time but I see alot of otential if he decides to do this permanently. Can't wait for what happens next!
5yr
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Pgimz
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Pgimz

The writing quality is good. The journey with Sebastian let’s you feel and see everything he does which was great! The only things as a fellow reader I️ can say is, I️ thought the story’s development was slow. Like one reader mentioned; I thought there was a lot of info and was getting lost in reading. However it all tied together because I kept reading since I wanted to know what was going to happen next. Good writing author!
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MishaK
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MishaK

The story is really good and so is your writing style. I am liking the way the author is taking time to develop it. The chapters are long and you need to read them carefully. Keep up the good work.
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StenDuring
This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 14. You have your kind of traditional transported to another (D&D) world here. One main character leaves his ordinary life behind him, well, it wasn't really that ordinary, and he was quite dead at the point of departure, just to awake in another world. At fourteen chapters you'd expect to be deeply entrenched in the story, but in this case the reader has just started to taste the beginning of the story. It's very slow paced, with the first eight chapters basically exposition and setting up the premise. The last six published thus far takes us through more training and the very first adventure, even if that kind of is labelled as training as well. If you need your daily does of adrenalin then just stay off this one. If you, like this reader writing the review, has a soft spot for slice-of-life type of stories, well just enjoy. While not slice of life per se it's paced at exactly the glacial speed that allows you to sit back in your chair safe in your knowledge that your hot cup of tea will be lukewarm before something actually happens. The story is mostly written in third person omniscient point of view and in the past tense. I write 'mostly' because it wavers between the objective point of view and third person limited. I'd argue that this is the only noticeable problem with the story. Now for the stars. Writing. Five stars, which should have been four and a half. The English used is good, but there are some peculiar errors, the occasional shift into present tense (apart from deliberately breaking the fourth wall) and the lack of warning before the story shifts between TP omni and TP limited. Updates. Four stars. There are gaps in the delivery. Story. Five stars. For me at least. If you're after breathtaking action this is a no-brainer two, or even one star. Character. Five stars. No comments needed. World. Five stars. With this kind of slow paced story you get your overdose of setting. If anything you could complain you get too much of it, but this reader is happy. This one goes into my library. I'm in no hurry.
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bobing
Though it's a bit slow-paced for others, I like how detailed the author can be at times. It really shows the time and attention spent while writing. Good concept and an extremely well written novel.
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ArcaneOverlord
Characters- The characters are not 2D, not just arrogant, bad, good, happy. They seem that they have emotions and are very real. World- World even before transmigration was wonderful and after the transmigration it is good but as it only has been starting we still have to wait for it. Writing quality- The writing quality is very high with almost no grammatical error. Error rate is like 1 mistake per 4 chapter. Story development- The story development is a little slow, but it really let's you savor the feeling of story.
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DarkImmortal_Intel
Authors grammar and writing style is pretty good. My only suggestion would be to wait until there's around 30 chapters cause the story is really slow paced. First 5 chapters were completely just information chapters. MC doesn't talk, others just explain the world to the readers. The next couple of chapters afterward is a slow introduction to the laws and culture. I'm assuming will be like this for the first 20 chapters.
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Apophis9
Written very nice, especially the part with the 'Forgotten Ones' and the memoir. I hope you won't leave the main character as a support type, I suggest a little kickass and expect your character development in the next chapters. 😉
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