I don't know why some people want MC to be good person.......isn't he got meruem's body???fosho that some of mereuem will assimilate with him,, either way,, goodass MC is bored af anyway,,,,, a little ruthlessness is a spicto the fics... good job author,, although the sad thing is, it's too short for meeee,,, thnx..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
a fucking brilliant novel i don't know why people give it a 1 star its a fucking perfect famfic although i don't like that he short but that doesn't matter much
I liked it at first. but u make it seem like the mc isn’t even the mc. like u call the other guy a puss and yet he gets all the girls just like the anime like bruh. idc if its a hearm or not i just dont like how u make the mc. and i know this wont effect u bc its complete. but maybe in ur future storys u wont make the mc a side character
The idea was good. Here's the truth: it was great, but here's the performance... This is what ruined everything. The MC is downright no hero - the author is still trying to portray "cruelty" in the form of murders and devouring demons, but the weak character and frivolity of the hero break through any masks. Even more annoying, MC proudly calls himself "the king of chimera ants", having neither the intellect nor the character of Meruem.
Not such a good read. I don't know what you're looking for in this book, but be warned that whatever you find, you might not like.
Don't say I didn't warn you!
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Honestly, What is the point of the Mc having the body of one of the strongest characters in HXH? No fucking idea. Like seriously you and many Authors on this site leave me reading pages of ****.t. A human reincarnating into another world and slave towards the original plot while following the Mc like their *****.
Make your Mc memorable, like wtf.
Do you have any imagination at all? Seriously I don't know what is wrong with you or it's either my prefrences. What the ****k is the point of having your dumb oc in Mereums body. He does bloody nothing,
Why couldn't you just make up your own dumb monster body atleast we will be interested, but no you use Mereum in his body, but your Main character is a beta ass ****t, servant to a lowly human. Ugh, Your novel is ****, because I felt like you didn't like writing your story. I could feel it reading your dull sentences and lack of enthusiam. Dip ****.
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I hate the author for abandoning his other novel for this trash plot. I mean it have originality but it doesn't go through to me as being a good novel in my opinion.😧
I got a feeling those 5 star comment's are all bought... It make me feel disgusted..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Great work, at the begining I disliked the personality of the protagonist being too cruel and indifferent, but as time passes, you get to like how the MC is depicted and how his personality evolve. The work seem a little short and the end is a bit rushed but still likeable. (At the end he is with Moka but not Mizune, why? Are they not supposed to be together?)
This is a great story about a guy who couldn’t have worse luck if he stabbed Lady Luck 7 times broke every mirror in the world and walked under every ladder to ever exist and then had every black cat that would ever exist walk past him and it would still not be enough fortunately for him hes in the body of effectively a divine beast and doesn’t seem to mind how **** his luck is also seems to not mind that he has to eat people to have good food
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Honestly, I loved this fan-fic so much throughout the beginning. Then later on it somehow all got ****ed and the MC had stupid ass double standards and completely changes personalities sometimes. Not to mention he can't write romance for the life of him. It was really good up until the point where he started abusing the aura killer intent thing. Like it was badass the first two times, but then it lost all effect when he kept using it over and over. It was a good read while lasted, however go in expecting the quality to drop significantly as it goes on.
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