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oumam
Well the overall concept of the story is nice , but the style of writing is so boring , especially those questions and rewritten phrases , it makes me so confused , anyway ,thank you for your effort dear author 🤗
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innocentgirl_26
A nice story till now ....... The best thing in this story is the point '*******toloyal' .... We can get lots of stories on webnovel where the hero is a CEO or a ******* .... But here we get a combo ... Sam was once a ******* but now he is a successful business man .... Also a man who loves his daughter ... Also the point that Almighty CEO would be a chained husband ;) attracts me to read this novel to find out about the chaining contract he signed ... °+°
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UnliMegane
Wild megane-ojisan appears! It used Review! It's super effective!
Kidding aside, I'll try not to sound too harsh cause I understand this is your first work.
This is a story about a very (un)fortunate arrogant (?) CEO who extremely adores his daughter, and is super tsundere towards his wife (lol).
The chapters are quite short. The pace, however, is quite fast. Sometimes, a bit too fast - enough to leave the reader reeling. The grammar also needs some work. But I know English isn't your native language, so that can be forgiven lol.
Also, I get a kick every time I read your suggestive leading questions at the end of the chapters lol. They're funny, but they can also undermine story immersion.
All in all, a cute read. And I'm sure you're having a blast writing it. And if there are people who can share the joy with you, then so much the better :) Cheers!
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boywholovestoread
I am quite satisfied with the story ... It is indeed a nice storyy!!
Although I feel disappointed only about one thing it is that it updates only 1chapter per day which seem to torture me T-T
Please Author Please post more chapters if possible ... I can understand that may be because of your schedule you are not able to do so but I will really appreciate bonus chapters from you because I am feeling quite interested in it .. Thank you soo much for posting this story !! And I can assure you that I will definitely support you !!
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boywholovestoread
Quite interesting story !!
Feeling interested about the future chapters what turn this story will take !! I am ready to be surprised by the creativity of our author !! MC proves that one can change with time for good , encourages us to be protactive, caring and loving towards family !! Looking forward !! All the best Author !!
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