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We get to ch. 56 or so and MC tortures a girl for six months. Turns out that the girl was a victim of brainwashing, so she wasn’t really culpable, but she gets tortured anyway. Deleting from my library and I will read it no more. It really wasn’t that good anyway, an OP MC dominating everyone. Kind of fun for a while, then the character became just too disgusting. Finally, the MC is disguised as a boy, so it is really a BL story, we’re just supposed to pretend it isn’t.
If you've ever played an MMORPG and never wanted to leave it, then this is the novel for you!
I dont have the words to express just how great the story is. I wish there were sequels or side-stories or something more. You want to watch these characters for the rest of their lives.
I am really intrigued by the world building, a very good author. you should definitely try it.
the flow is nice, writing is good
the description is very vivid and awesome
I wish this story became more popular. looking forward to reading more.
The story is captivating to say in the least amount of words. The FL is a sadistic, almost tsundere, powerhouse who is surrounded by loveable characters who each have a quirky personality. Example there is a G*d D*mn slime that is so simple so easily described that you can literally visualize in your own hands and just can't help but love. A good omg cute puppy love for a slime! Squishy ball of common monster but he's so cute!!! While the other characters pull out your hidden fetish types of love that makes you want to take your time to read and immerse yourself in the writing.
I personally hate vampires, ever since the twilight garbage that I so stupidly read and actually watched the first movie and literally walked out of after the first 20 minutes.... I can't hate this novel. Makes me want to give the vampire world a second chance.
Grammar is on par, none of that guessing what they wanted to say crap. Spelling above expectation, there are a one or two misspelled words every 10 chapters but it is forgivable.
As for the world, it is very imaginative. I don't wanted to spoil too much... Cough.... Underwater Kingdom.... Vampire Kingdom... School.... Cough... Forest of magical beasts.... Cough cough cough... A system that is a tiny turtle that you want to cuddle... Cough.... Again can't stress this enough, the author's words flow in a way that makes you see an enchanting world of wonder before your eyes without ever leaving your room.
Great work! Give it a read and become an instant fan of magic.
Although this is not the kind of stories I usually read, this novel performs quite well the "gender bender" premise considering that it remains within the normal parameters of the genre. The protagonist is well developed, her story and adventures turning out to be a pleasure to read.
The prose of the author is very good and flows almost effortlessly, accompanied by a good pace of the story. There are practically no grammatical or typos errors, which further strengthens the author's writing work. The WorldBuilding process advances effectively along with the plot, which expands convincingly and attractively for those who have been hooked by it.
With a constant and ideal rhythm of updates for a site like this, I can not see how someone who is interested in stories of fantasy, romance, vampires, and who has found it compelling since the first chapter does not want to continue reading this story.
I suck at reviews. I mean, really suck. I want to tell everyone how f*cking awesome this baby is, but I'm afraid I don't have enough words or talent to describe it. All I can do is tell everyone: You better f*cking read this, or you will regret for the rest of your life of you don't. It's that f*cking good!
It's super important, so I'll say it again.
F*cking read this! F*cking read this! You better f*cking read this or regret till death!
This novel is really amazing, very interesting and nice.
The first chapter of this story is actually my favourite.
Writing quality is good.
Updates stability is good.
Story development is very nice.
And I really like this story a lot...I just want to keep reading 😀
The Author has done a good job.
Keep up the good work!
I'll be following this story....
This is really awesome... really op mc... great plot hope you wont drop this dear author coz im gonna cry and i will haunt you down hehe... to the readers out there if you like super op mc you should read this....
I'm very surprised this isn't a premium novel already. The quality in this novel beats the majority of the stories usually seen on Webnovel, even beating several translated novels. Magnificently written.
The descriptions are some of the best I've read. At times, I thought that I was reading a fully published novel. The vividness of the world drew me in, everything is described with such vibrant colours. Rarely any grammar mistakes--the ones that I did see was probably just happy little accidents instead of things such as not knowing how to write dialogue correctly. I would recommend to maybe find a proofreader/editor to polish it up(but your quality is already brilliant so you can skip this. Just adding it for that little flair).
However, I felt like certain descriptions were too over the top. They made the plot drag on, and literally everything was described in detail. Hence, it felt like a chapter went on forever. The dialogue felt a bit stiff at times, as if the character was slightly forced to say that line(a little hard to get what I mean, but do tell me if you don't understand). Descriptions are cool and all, but too much will bore your reader. Also, some of your spacing made it so my eyes skimmed parts of paragraphs(the bits that were clustered altogether). But that's not much of a worry.
I'm on mobile at the moment so I can't see the dates of when each chapter was updated, but from what I can see you have a very stable update. To be honest, I don't even know why this is a section added for original novels :/ An author should choose their own release times.
As far as the story goes, at the chapter I'm currently at, there's a base for what seems to be the major conflict for later on in the novel(and the conflict that leads to the ML, if I'm correct). Nice foreshadowing. I felt like some of the character development with each other was kind of quick? The thing with the Emperor(I'm trying to keep it as spoiler free as possible) was very sudden. I would've liked to see some build up, but you're already so far into the story. I'll continue reading, and write another review if I feel like anything's changed. As far as pacing goes, on the other hand, it's decent. Felt a bit slow due to all of the descriptions, but half of those had to do with world building. In the beginning of a novel, an author has to do three things: create characters, ensure plot, and effective world building(but you can only choose 2 of these things half the time lol).
To be honest, I was getting a bit bored at around chapter 20. There wasn't really a draw for me, and I felt reading was a bit tedious. Why? Because there was no stakes. There was foreshadowing, but long-term. Until the most recent chapter I read(around 25-28) that really started getting the ******* up. You have my full attention now.
Your view on vampire lore is very interesting. I don't know much about it, but it seems pretty cool.
Another problem I have with the story development--you tell a lot of things. Some paragraphs felt like they were information dumps, and I found myself mentally skipping some of these. To combat this, split the info up and see if there's any ways you could show this information--it's okay if the reader doesn't know all of this. Go ahead with the story, us readers will slowly catch up along the way, joining the dots. Hint, but don't give. Much of the time, the reader doesn't want information dumps, they want the action.
Nine- cool, aloof, a bit sadistic, and very overpowered. I personally loved your depiction of her in the first few chapters, but after that it felt like she was just straight faced and aloof. Maybe it's just me. I don't really click with her; I feel like she is a little machine like. Also, she's very overpowered. You stated that she's trained to get there, and that it was hard, but I don't empathise with her at all. She's like a curious but aloof god looking.
I love gender bender stories so no don't this was exactly my cup of tea
The story is smooth and isn't disjointed. For example sometimes in this genre the author jumps from one point to another. Thankfully this author didn't fall into the same pit.
Can't wait for more chapters
This story is a diamond in the rough, it is very very good, the writing quality is superior to many other novels I have read on this site. There are very few, if any, grammatical mistakes, the sentences flow smoothly and they are very pleasant to read. The pace of the story is also very good.
The plot is well thought out. I enjoy following Nine through her endeavors and travels, I really find it enjoyable to read this novel, and everything about it is catching my attention making it near impossible to stop reading.
I would definitely suggest anyone to try out this novel, it is a buried treasure that deserves attention and a lot of love. It is worth it!
Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.
This is amazing!!! I loved it! I was so hooked that it took me hours to read it! The description and background is vivid, the characters are so good. I have not read any story involving the secrecy of the gender of the main character, so it is very interesting to me! Great!
Keep writing author! :)
The story was impressive from the very first chapter. The writing is really, really good. The writing flow nicely and the description (OMG! The description!) of things and events are vivid. The magical world was intriguing. I love the MC as well as the other characters. The MC died once, and in this new life, she was hiding her gender and lived as the Crown Prince. I love gender bender story, and this is definitely something I love to read. So far, the story was progressing well. I am sticking around to see what will happen next.