Reviews of The Sovereignty System by Termax - Webnovel

I loved this book I dearly wish that it would have been continued

Infelizmente só descobri está história agora.Sinto-me muito feliz que o autor tenha compartilhado para que muitos possam desfrutar de uma boa história mesmo que não tenha tido um fim. Gostei muito de ler, mesmo que tenha algumas coisas que deixem a desejar. Acho que foi bem escrito, gostaria de encontrar mais histórias assim. Achei o Mc tem uma ótima personalidade mesmo que alguns detalhes não me agradem em sua personalidade e decisões mas o autor que sabe o que é melhor para suas histórias e personagens. Como eu disse antes gostei muito apesar de tudo e da falta de término.🙃

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Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.

I wont say its exactly 5star rating but its a really good novel and worth a read. there are a few minor complaints but as i remember the author is quite new and apparently this is his second novel, so i gave 5 stars showing my support hoping for another good one in future.

I thoroughly enjoyed this tale, and would liked to have seen it continue. This is not your typical world cultivation story, where the MC is a great action hero that overcomes every trial by the skin of his teeth and is riddled with wounds after every encounter. Instead this is a 4X story where the encounters and the battles are merely set ups for the next expansion of the MC's ability/city/kingdom. Instead of Conan, this is more age of empires set in a fantasy world. Unfortunately, many of the reviewers were not willing to see it for what it was and wanted a more typical Isekai story. The story is well written, with a plot that most of the time hold your interest, especially if you are a fan of CIVILIZATION or other 4X games. The grammar is usually pretty good, but the author has a habitual glitch of starting a thought and then rewording it partway through the sentence.

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I like the story overall however I don't like how the people in his keep can sit around all day without actually working as everything is automated.

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why mc is so op? and system can also provide people out of things air? to simple story hmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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Great plot! Good World Building! Very Detailed! Easy to picture out! This is a really good one! I suggest you to read this! Good Luck dear Author! More novels to come!

World background development in this novel one of the positive area. Too much system trash talking doesn't seem my cup of tea still I read till end. Actually it was getting better from chapter to chapter. At first volume System was like adbomb , soo annoying and too much building -construction with fast phase. A medal for not going for pay stones.

this is utter crap what's the point of building a kingdom if people don't have a purpose. all the important buildings are automated so there's no need for workers , therefore there a no jobs. Another thing why introduce technoligy if after you doe there's no one else to deal with damaged buildings?

overall story was great kinda annoyed the author didnt even finish the continent and mc reactions to kingdoms was mostly unrealistic but the story progression was well done and mc's adventure was fun. as a plus I liked how it was a cross of merchant and kingdom builder

This for me is one of the best ones i read, too bad it ended faster than i thought, hope to see more like this in the future, this one have so much potential, im disappointed to not know what happened to the three kingdoms close to dragonshome and the three more kingdoms beyond the allied kingdoms who continues to make them submit and also the issue of the yeti like creatures who always attack during winter, i know this ended but im not in a position to brag about it, rather tell the author that thankyou for a wonderful story and i hope you continue to write stories like this

This Story isn't that bad that it would deserve a 1 Star rating but your overall rating is over 4 and this is utmost bullshit. You need over 50 Chapters just to build a small store and Mc's kingdom is somewhat less important because he spends most of his time at the store. We have a new World with different continents and creatures to explore but 50/160 chapters are Store building which could be done in a few chapters! I expected some cool wars with large armies, a King-like Mc that knows what he does but what I and the readers get is a bland and plain boring Mc!

This novel had an amazing beginning and I had high expectations for it, only to be disappointed by two things: one, the way the mc treats the people and how he just doesn't get any benefit at all, the way as an exchange for his generosity. second, the kingdom's development isthi plain trash. why would he need to build a kingdom when the people can't get jobs because everything is made by the system. third, the way the mc is sometimes is smart and other times he's just dump. Anyway, I gave this novel 4 stars due to the author being an ******* and a quick tip for the author; your mc doesn't need to help everyone who he just met. Also don't forget to make the Mc a bit smart because readers Don like it when he is dump or taken as of. the end ^__^

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Uma história muito boa 👏👏 Embora não tenha mais volume, você ainda terminou o volume mesmo com poucos leitores. Muitos autores deixam obras pela metade só porque não tem muitos leitores, e nem ao menos avisos de que vai parar de escrever. Sinceramente contrução de reino é um pouco chato porque na maioria das vezes são longas, mas você conseguiu tirar todas as partes chatas e deixas as partes legais 👍 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Para o autor por criar uma história tão boa. No começo achei o MC um pouco idiota e imaturo e realmente parecia história infantil, mas depois que o reino começou a se desenvolver, eu percebi o quão boa foi, principalmente no volume 2 Belo romance, pena que não se aprofundou nele.

story development is steady and at a good pace 😌 please release new content :) .

I really enjoyed this book, It had good writing, good grammar(hard to come by on this site sometimes) and an interesting concept. Sadly I feel the author ended the book a bit early because no one was voting for it. A tip to the author, I would pay to read this book, it was excellent until the end. Don't give up so easily, you have something here.

I'm a natural lover of all novels related to gaining systems and I really love this book I hope the author has other books like this I really really love the story 😀😀😀

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A bit slow,lots of unnecessary information,I don't think i need to know the techniques behind some stuffs there. And for a medieval world,I believe the technology is too advanced. Buh, at least, it's enjoyable.

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I don't really have much to say about this novel but there's one thing that I can say about the book it's one of my best #kingdom building books ever

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Best original novel so far I've read. Thank you writer for expanding my imagination horizons. Can't wait for a continuation... Keep up the good work.

Loved the book loved the story you have a way with words in this book I do wish it was longer and I wished to see what else ben would get in too and if Ben would really become an immortal. Can wait to see what you write next ill keep an eye out for your works. Thanks again for a world to lose my self to have a great time writing.