Reviews of RWBY - Fall of Grimm by DabanCrow - Webnovel

This d@mn author is a f*cking clown he just said that he already prepared and yet now he says im lost after releasing 5 chapters what a f*cking stup!d author said madara is weak? !d!ot when they were still a kid they are in war timezone already and u said hes weak? what a f*cking clown if hes weak he already died in war with other nation and yet the clown just said i put antagonist cause mc is too OP h*ly sh!t u call ur mc op keep getting trashed by enemy cause he keep on underestimating his enemies even with madaras memories u make ur mc stup!d like u d@mn author ur making madara of naruto weak u name ur novel fall of grim and yet u put godlike antagonist to fight against mc not just 1 obviously the grim will fall but not because of mc its because of the d@mn antagonists before mc can kill all grim hes already dead with so many antagonist this d*mb@ss author put in his novel what a joke author call his readers crybaby cause the readers didnt like what the author published obviously no one will object if what u put is good what a f*cking d*mb@ss author will say i already planned everything and just shut up and read ahaha f*cking screwloose who would like to read with stupid novel who cant accept critization of readers who wants tell and help u so u can improve it

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Just saying this first the ending was emotional and got me to tear up a little bit, now onto the negative I think that the Mc when he said “He was not going to train his body and only his aura and chakra” is complete idiocy since Madara didn’t get where he was just by training chakra when I read this I was shout out this fucking idiot so many times I lost so I continued reading from that stupid paragraph overall was a good chap I guess