for the story part it is full of loopholes that a man would not be different from being naked if he wore cloths made of themoriginal characters designs are twisted and then brought back to stabilize the plot. OC background sucks... ALL OF THEM... I never got to know since when there were Soviet magicians, MC learned shadow-like magic etc...FINALLY FOR SLICE OF LIFE/ COMEDY PART!!!!!!I APPROVE!!!!!!!malfoy bathroom incident, azkaban revamp, bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, Tom voldy fight scene .......I only continued this novel till was because of the never ending bits of comedy here there .
writing quality 5 stars
story development 5 stars
character design 5 stars
updating stability 4 stars
world background 5 stars
good job author... one of the best HP fanfics Ive read so far..
Quite an interesting and intriguing book this has been even more so Arth how u have done his character and way that he interacts with people along with his intelligence not to mention fact he chose a raven over any other pet to have and found it funny his love for Turkey legs that was definitely fun to read about and made this book all the more different from others I do wonder what will happen next after this unexpected turn of Arth parents and two Voldemort's overall enjoyed all of this book look forward to getting the chance to continue reading more of this book
okay, I'm getting confuse who's the love interest?
Hermione?
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This is one of the best fanfics about harry potterz but it would be useful to add the HarryPotter tags because I found this book by accident. Developing relationships with the female characters looks very good I hope there will be a mini harem. Especially for Haremiona and Scarlet because you can see they have bonded very strongly emotionally with mc
Good story, I like the way the MC were overshadowed by Harry and lives like an "Extra" in his own story lol, funny that's how I always feel like whenever I was with my friends.
Condolences to Arth
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this is the best Harry Potter ff i have ever read, other than its updating stability everything is too good. Sometimes author rushes the story but it's manageable.
The story is trash im not gonna lie the MC is useless at least add something new to the MC like other fanfics with a OC so tis is just another story with a worthless character who is supposed to be the MC but isn't at least if ur gonna do a style like this do it with a character that is already existing and add a POV for like ginny, luna, ron, hermione, or some other background/semiimportant character
Lovely and interesting FF about Harry Potter World.
It's just sad that Author dropped it and didn't finish this masterpice.
Good luck on your future endeavors Author!
Well the first volume was a complete disappointment and I can only assume the rest will be too. We have a MC who has a weak presence that is pretty much a Hermione 2.0 of the group. But thatβs not the problem. The problem is that he loves cleaning up Harryβs mess despite knowing itβs not smart to do so and that his actions will, one way or another, bring harm to himself.
At first I was happy I has over 200 chapters to read this but after going through this garbage volume I think Iβll pass. Donβt waste your time with this trash FF. Heck, Iβm shocked that so many idiots are claiming this to be good.
WARNING:
#MC GAY
#MC BETA
#MC pathetic
# MC Gay
#MC is Harry's dog
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Alright, this story starts off alright even with a few plotholes popping up here and there. Then you keep reading and they just keep popping up continuously. On top of all of that, you have these moments or even just whole chapters where the author decides to have the MC do something ridiculous based on the assumption he just learned how to do it SOMEWHERE or in the library. At some point, he just starts obliviating people left and right. The writing quality is pretty bad... like the author doesn't get better as most writers would. There is an OC that is added into the story for no reason other than to pad the chapters with useless dialogue so they don't feel short. Most fanfictions build off the world they are using but this story just sorta spits out random ideas left and right until they stick and if they don't the next chapter it will be as if they never happened which leads to a lot of plotholes and confusion down the line. I will admit that the MC is an alright character that somehow by 200+ chapters in has almost no background given. All in all this story had potential but the author never got better at writing so it just stayed the same and in some ways got worse.
Poor, rather exploring the world of mc, we have a tagalongs with little input. I took the effort to get to chapter 40 but if I wanted to read the original, I would have read the original.
This fiction is just 99% regurgitation of HP books from pov of mc. Mc serves as Hermione 2.0 that butts in to conversations, but doesn't change anything and tags along with Harry's adventures even though it makes no sense, changing nothing.
There's also the absolutely massive plot hole that is the first chapter. Mc was adopted into wizard family, but never noticed anything odd and mc's parents went out of their way to alter their whole home and lives just to construct one massive lie. Even though there was zero reason to. I mean come on, author is basically copying originals but gets the first chapter totally wrong :D
I gave up because when first year ended, for some stupid reason mc's parents ditched him so he needs to go to his friends place, which just s happens to be Weasley's. Which just so happens to be where canon book 2 starts as Ron picks up Harry with flying car to live with them -.- I mean it's totally ridiculous his parents didn't actually arrange place for mc to stay, but at this point it just doesn't matter. And going to reviews, even third year is going to be same plagiarized work so I can't see any point in this fiction.
Don't waste time, if you want to read Harry Potter, read Harry Potter instead of this poor excuse of a copy. This is not fan-fiction, this is fan copy!
A very boring book, bad people, boring story, outdrawn story. Authors flair disappears in already canon stuff. 5 STARS GREAT STUFF.
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ClΓ‘sica historia del protagonista desesperado por socializar y bueno como siempre es una hermione masculino algo asΓ pero como sabrΓ‘n tiene el nombre de Arturo y bla bla historia aburrida sin desarrollo de personaje ( casi todos los fanfics siguien latrama de estas en el equipo del trΓo de oro bueno hasta ahora es aburrida la historia que mΓ‘s puedo esperar de un fanfic de hp)
no me gusto nada, Β‘ para que sigues ? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Love this novel! At first the story starts off with little to no background knowledge but this creates a sense of mystery as you find out that something scarred him for life. Just wish that Arth and Hermione get together. Please write more chapters iM BEGGING you!!!!!
I see a lot of reviews that are 1 or 2 stars but I can only assume they did not read very long because although the beginning of the story had some issues the author's writing style developed throughout this amazing story at least read 50 chaps then if you don't like it move on also if you like the author you should join his patreon the cheapest one is like a dollar ;)
I'll be honest, this is a really good ff. Nice buildup of characters and relationships. It is honestly one of the best plots for hp ff. MC is likeable and the dialogs are amazing!!!!!
amazing fan fic except for the end the last chapter 254 was offensive he dropped the chapter how low can someone be to drop a good fanfic like this DISGUSTING
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