Reviews of 88887796799 by 90751052 - Webnovel

So far I have read the first two chapters and I very much enjoy it. The children seem very interesting and unique. I also like the concept that you have come up with. I can't wait to read more of this book

My friends! Don't look to novel name or synopsis! These are not what you nede. Because this story something more, more, more and more different thing than you can imagine! Its like you are preparing yourself to watch a movie with a dog MC about dalmatian dogs trying to save their home/farm from bad guys; but you feel stunned later because you find yourself while watching full action Jurassic Park! A different world everything exist! I don't wanna give spoiler but in 3 chapters this will be one of your favourite novels! Everything more perfect than what i can want so 5 stars.

Oooooh boy! I only read the first 5 chapters, however, they were really funny! Loved it! I hope you continue the comedy theme throughout the entire story.

It's pretty good Worth a read I'd say If there were 10X as many chapies id be happy😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Instant 5*, the author had said Princess Ria will not die in this novel. So, like I promised, I shall give this author a 5* review. What? This is an unfair review and you want some free 5* reviews too? Give me 5* review and I'll 'consider' it.

Nice adventure for a body of a 12 years old but had the mindset of a teens which is supposedly they were in their world before they have died tragically.... I can't wait to see how they fully evolved on their respective species today... Although the only guy character shows his awesome power that could adapt the 11 creatures of his friends... Nice replication of ability and great regeneration of body... Hoping to read more of the following chapters...

Transmigration human experimentation and triangulation... Ehh I don't know but it rhymes right? A very well written work from a technical standpoint. Grammar and punctuation are pretty much flawless. The characters are diverse and each one is interesting. There are laughs and tragedy to be found early on just be sure you are actually reading chapter 1 and not the shorts yours truly made that mistake. If you read the shorts after you have read a little further into the book it may not be so bad. Certain characters are very memorable.

Strangely using the last name of my real dad makes me slightly closer to the mc but it's like a weird brotherly feeling stories great tho man sadly my real dad died before I was born so never knew him

At first, I truly thought it was a fairy workd by the name bam. It hit me harder than a fist to gut and my feels came out of nowhere. The excitement of each chapter made me want read more, I was returning a review but looks like my fellow author got me hooked onto something more. It's well written, with little grammatical errors and will suck you into it's fairy tale. Good luck from trying to stop yourself from reading!

Don't let the author make you think that you are in for some half-assed puns and fun or you will regret it. This novel contains much, much more than that. Damn you Author I didn't start reading this to feel the feels....

This story is really good! The characters are developed and designed well so far, the plot itself is easy to follow and the world is described well. The writing style is great as well. This is worth the read!

This story is amazing. I can't discrib it. It is interesting and just amazing you should read it.😁😉😉😉😉😉😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😋😋😋😋☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Just read ok?!

very *****.... I'm not commenting anything, because I just want to give a star and to do this, I need to have a comment, so do not worry about looking at this

So far the language and writing style is good. I enjoy the descriptive nature of your writing and the plot seems very interesting. I enjoy isekai novels and this one seems to be a very good one. Keep it up, Author!

Love the bad puns, it just simply my cup of tea. The story was interesting and I want to read it more, so I'll just review it in this chapter. The character interaction was funny and cute. I like that the author wrote every each ending in the chapter so it triggers the reader for the next chapter. I love magic so that's plus! Great job for the story so far :D

This is a really interesting story and is written very well. The story itself has great pacing and the mix between suspense and complaisant comedy is wonderful. I look forward to more every time I read a chapter. Since the updates are quite stable, there's no need to bite my nails and wait weeks for another chapter like a certain different novel (*ahem*anyone reads Versatile Mage {the novel} too?*ahem*). There are 12 main characters which can make things more confusing as each name just seems foreign (especially since the lesser that a character talk or appears, the harder it is to remember them) when they come up. The characters themselves are actually really diverse and distinct in their own way but they can get slowly forgotten since not all of them get a lot of screen time. Heck, Layla talks less than Ialantha did (you'll understand when you read up to the Elf Arc). My suggestion for the characters, make a list somewhere so that the readers can be reminded of what and who is this and that. Like, it took me some time to remember who Layla is when her name was mentioned (chapter 29? 30? Forgot which) until the previous description comes to mind and I knew she was the ******** (gotta censor to keep it spoiler free). A list, maybe in an auxiliary chapter or in the end of a chapter can help at least a bit. It's not necessary though since the readers will eventually just remember and get used to everything but it will certainly be easier for new (or returning) readers. The world is well made with clear distinctions whuch in turn makes it feel all the more real. "The humans are here, beasts are there, demons over there and there," makes all the difference compared to a more reckless world building like "humans are in the village, merman in the sea, demons outside the continent and elves in a forest" since there's a mental map that a reader can place regions on unlike the second example. Great work on that btw, not a lot of authors put enough distinction between regions when world building after all. All in all, good story, lots of interesting characters, great world building and stable updates. Worth reading especially if you're patient enough to follow the author's writing until the end. Also props on the great author-reader interactions in the comments. Makes you feel closer to the person who created this wonderful story. ^w^

Going into a technical review, Readability is high and author takes care to not repeat his words. Sentence variety is there and passive voice is kept low. All in all, definitely a worthwhile read and for fans of the reincarnation tropes, its worth it x2!

Read this off my mobile and finished chapter 11. Your writing is good! It’s polished and has nice descriptions of the world. The plot keeps moving, so it’s keeps me on my toes. My only real qualm is there too many characters are introduced in the beginning. Building up the party slower one at a time would be easier for me to keep track of whose who. On another note, their interactions remind my slightly of Harry Potters gang lol. Also, Altwidus is an awesome name haha! Will read more later in the morn. :)

Real great. What? I can't review in 'proper' way, but **** it. Anyway, so far so good, interesting, great vocab, I'm doubtlessly sure that this is written along the plot (unlike mine, improvisation all the way). 4.5/5 recommend it. Go read, might waste your time but worth it. (Sorry that I can't really make a review. Too taken aback at the fact of your views...)

Wild megane-ojisan, dropping in for a review! This is a group isekai story gone horribly wrong (in a good way... for the readers at least). Man, these young-adults-in-kid-bodies sure went through a lot. And the story doesn't skimp on the gory details either. Maybe not for everyone, but it does have enough to hook readers into this stuff. Grammar is great. The story development is good, and it has a diverse cast. Keep it up.

I was going into this expecting it to be a rather typical reincarnation fantasy story, but boy was I wrong. Let me just say that i'm impressed by the amount of characters the author is able to juggle so easily from the first chapter! And there is nothing more I love in my fantasy read than a rich cast of diverse and interesting characters! I look forward to reading more, seeing how the author uploads regularly and daily!

Very interesting story, I find it really interesting the story begins when they're children~ I don't know why but when I read the synopsis, I expected Jae to be a girl lol so it was a bit of a shock when I found out it was a male XD. The writing is pretty good, there was extremely minor grammar mistakes, but it's not that visible c: However, I do think there can be MINOR adjustments made to the writing, especially when it comes to small actions like panting, sniffling, etc. Instead of putting it in **, I was thinking maybe you write out the action? Like, ____ sniffles, "_______" instead of "*snifles*______" Hope that made sense^ But aside from that, interesting story, good writing, nice humor, and adorable characters c:

The story is great overall but i feel that there can be room for improvement in terms of writing quality and character development as there has not been much emphasis on that. Story development can be improved more in the fact that there can be more emphasis on the different races and species as well. However in the grand scheme of things i think the story deserves at least a 4.

Good story with interesting plot and well written characters. Like it so far, world background is good and well written as well. great job author.

The way story progresses is good.. although I do think that there is room for character development. The plot is set up in a good space and writing is also excellent, couldn't find any grammatical errors. Look forward to seeing the story's development.

Have nothing to say but- Love this story. Character are cute. Interesting story line. Smooth words. Unexpected twists. Most importantly- REINCARNATION If it wasn't obvious, I'm a fan of reincarnation stories. In ****** words, this novel is one of the best examples of a reincarnation novel. What are u waiting for?! Read it.

I haven't really been a fan of reincarnation stories, but I love the characters here. They are soooo cute! Please keep updating the book! It is very interesting!

ADDED TO LIBRARY. Reincarnating into a fantasy world filled with magic, multiple protagonists faced a cruel fate, and survived to embark on a journey to seek revenge and a place in this mysterious, dangerous and beautiful world. I really enjoyed the tragicomedy essence of the story. :3 Keep up with the good work Nothing!