Reviews of The Two Lives Of Aaron Wade: The Gamer & The Heir by Anone - Webnovel

This is an absolutely amazing book written by an amazing Author. The writing quality is very good, the story development and character design is also passable. And the world background is simply mind-blowing. I sincerely recommend it. Nice one Anone👏

Was this dropped, or just on hiatus?

• Writing quality ? 3* There’s room for development. The writing looks too superficial and not deep at all. I can’t seem the be hooked by the story. The writing style is more descriptive than narrative. • Story development ? 3* A good directive line but with lot of inadequacies, doesn’t feel like how people normally react and behave in those described contexts and situations. A lot of surprising developments but the bad kind of surprises, or maybe very badly written. We don’t feel a sense of flow. The events feels rushed and not finished, we pass from one to another without a sense of cohesiveness. • Character Design ? 1* The author want so badly the MC to be calculative, smart, funny or intelligent. But it’s gross, disgusting and totally the opposite. There’s no consistency in his personality and so his actions. Sometime he’s dumb or smart, calculative or emotional. We expect here one reaction but it’s totally the opposite. I don’t understand this MC, I can’t identify myself in him. I’m not that dumb and incoherent as a person. • World Background ? 3* There’s so much potential in that world background but the author completely messed it. He don’t seems to use that potential. The quality of story messed up the background. I want to know more about that world but not how the author brings it to us. Overall, a big disappointment. It could have gone so much better. I don’t know the author, his experience and age. But it looks very very immature. Sorry 😐

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Normal,not bad a bit cringe thought.

Lovely imagination. Annone is gifted and talented in displaying his imaginations. Reading his story gives you an image of which he has drawn in his mind. Keep it up.

In short this is a very good....no amazing....no the best novel I have read in a long time It's got everything you could ever ask for. So you should read this book. Also it's got dragons which are the best mythical being there is. So what's not to like.

Exceptional story, decent story building, though leaves much to imagination for now. An awesome story with a good amount of action and plot even though its tempo can be a a little mixed at times ( too fast, or just slow enough to feel frozen sometimes). Not gonna say too much as the story hasn't ended yet but this is a must read for those who want a good story without a template to follow like most novels out now.

The story is exquisite, adding in more detail over time while making large changes at the drop of a hat. It is a extremely fast pace book where the characters ter could experience a roller coaster of highs and lows within the same chapter while keeping a steady flow keeping the story on the proper path. It is an adventure for the maniacal as well as the romantic. Though just a warning it can get gruesome quite often.

Having read a sample of chapters, it's safe to conclude that this story tries too hard to do too many things at the same time. Here's some of the gamut of tropes that the author tried to squeeze into his story: 1. Having an unknown love child 2. Conveniently having said love child's mother dead 3. Having a new "stepmother" for said love child. 4. Introducing vr elements as a major component of the story 5. Introducing corporate politics. 6. Introducing crime/mafia elements into this story. 7. Trying to include humorous elements. I could go on and on. My advice for the author is that while it's great that you're inspired by various ideas, it's more important for a newbie ******* writer to write his first story with as small a scope as possible. Frankly, even bestselling authors like Butcher will struggle and fail at incorporating all the elements in this story. I mean VR plus corporate politics plus crime/mafia? This could be three standalone novels rather than just one. This is without mentioning the terrible prose/dialogue and cardboard characters. I see that the author has written about 200 chapters of this dross. My advice is to take this current story as a learning project and start over with a brand new idea.

all of this author's works are super good and underrated. need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters

Wow I’m only on Chapter 4 but this doesn’t read like one of those crappy originals at all! World building is great characters are interesting and there are tons of mysteries wherever you look. So excited for this one!

First of, great imagination and blend of soo much. But the problem is that the the VRMO actually feels like a drag instead of interesting. It feels pretty forced and boring. Amazing ideas, hats off for that . Also for some reason the whole world seems very forced and artificial. I think that is because you tried too many things and don’t have experience in properly connecting all of it. The flow is kinda missing like how it was done in ROTWRTW(not on webnovel)

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Interesting read my friend yessireee very glad to have discovered this little treasire💎 its hot everything one would want in a great novel an interesting storyline, great characters that you love to hate and hate to love😘..........😲😲😲 an entertaining read overall🤨okaayyyeee dokie...sooo yep.....plz keep updating plz, i will read okkkkkk🤞😇

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I am so very much finding myself liking the story just on the summary and reading other readers reviews just by itself so I felt I must review it too😝😝😝😝 I am liking the story so far😍😍😍😍 So keep the chapters updated daily please!!!🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 Its going to be one of my top novels I'm sure!!😜😜😜 LOVE it for now 💕❤️💕 💕 soooooooo more!!!!! Okay! Great❤️❤️❤️❤️

Is a nice story but up to chapter 25 i feel like all is in game rewards are too big for his efforts , his real life parts are nice so far

Wtf... You can be BATMAN yet you choose became gamer, really? Nah just joking. Not read yet but the theme sound generic, but hey who knew maybe this one can be good.

Very good once you get past the first chapters that seem just like some overpowered cheat, there is much more to this novel than one might think.

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Great story, just not my cup of tea. I don't see a reason not to give this a try, as I'm sure most people would probably enjoy it. I only read a dozen chapters, so take this with a grain of salt, but so far, the writing quality and characters seem pretty good. It's original and can be a breath of fresh air depending on your reading choices.

So far so good. I’m already in love with his other work. Love that he’s fearless and his grandpa is a badass. Also love the African heritage that the author includes in there. Plus foreshadowing..... A1

The background of game is not very well defined and is progressing too fast compared to real world which is way better . Also comparing MC and saying things that I'm not same like other novels characters or movie characters again and again makes annoying just remove that its not like i won't refuse like novel mc or rich boy bla bla things

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Well from what I have read this novel keeps you in the dark most of the time. And I swear the Mc has multiple personalities from the way he acts. He mercies an opponent in an arena and in the exact next paragraph he says that that he will not give mercy as it’s a death game, and again after he says that he tells the opponent to give up. The way the author implements humour is excruciating, he would be threatening someone and the next second he’s getting smacked in the head like a comedy skit. The story progresses pretty fast and the world building lacks considerably compared to it creating situations where a person would be introduced as the relative of your arch enemy, but we don’t know who that arch enemy is. The switch in moods makes it so readers have a hard time imagining the mood and frankly it irritates me. We are not even given the technology level of the world and what we have to do is put bits and pieces together to make up one. there are too many times things just don’t add up, and in the end contradicts eachother.