If another father (or in this case grandfather) of a wife betrays Daryl again.. First it was Derek, and now I feel that Jessarn has some history with the Lost Ones, or may perhaps even try to sell Daryl's group out to try to curb favor with the Lost Ones. I do kind of hope for it though, I think it would be nice if not all of his 'first batch of wives' accepted the bond, and I don't really like Tracy and especially not her family (considering how rude they were to Daryl and his beast-people the first time they met)
I like your novel. Although I think that too fast and too many girls join the harem, but I still hope that you have moderation and a healthy eyelash. And the novel still has potential. As for Tracy, I hope he has a positive line and ends with Daryl. He is the most traumatic member of the harem and has a difficult family situation, but deserves a stable support in the future.