Chapter comments on the chapter undefined of the book A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse

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fearlessj2008
Great chapter keep up the good work
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nighmora
so did he get his mothers ability that would explain the humanoid elements
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DaoPursuer
Thanks for the chapter!
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WolfLord
Thanks for the chapter on a good story
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Speedslayerx
First ever first?!? NANI! lol great story keep up the good work
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Drakzil
Thanks for the chapter Not sure how I feel about the room arrangement, and Karen taking advantage of the situation. We've already seen how the Beast Wives aren't really interested in other girls that much, but fall in line when it's by the first wife Megan or second one Karen, going along due to the hierarchy. Now, it's no longer group sex with some girl-on-girl, but straight up Lesbian sex between the wives, which imo doesn't really fit with Daryl's greedy personality, of wanting all the wives for himself
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Randomhumanbeing
Thanks for the chapter
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SmileyFace
Author, I hope you focus more about the plot and lesser the desires of the MC and lesser the Sexuality scenes but focus more about the description when their any Sexuality scenes. Also please make the MC more smart type, don't make him some kind of goblin who only think of his desires.
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NecromikReal
Welcome back! Good to see you and our horny characters are literally back in action. Hope you can up the pace of the story to compensate the looooooong time away eheheh
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