Chapter comments on the chapter undefined of the book A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse

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WolfLord
Thanks for the chapter on a good story
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DaoPursuer
Aw ha, went back and reread. My mistake.
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Randomhumanbeing
Thanks for the chapter
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DaoPursuer
Without going back can anyone name the 16! harem members? If you can name them all this is a well done harem if not... not even the MC can remember them all, and he’s bonded to them! Lol This isn’t the first time he’s thought about not arbitrarily bonding more females (next chapter bonds the new species girl) so if he doesn’t instantly bond the 2 empresses I’ll be really surprised.
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SmileyFace
OK, I have enough with this crap. author, I know you want continue this story but you need to stop this. First, the MC is form of humanoid who only think about (sex, girls, make them mine), he's stupid, don't think about the future, every time he meets girl he arouse Sexuality even though he already have dozen of women of all kind and colors, hell even if someone with huge Sexuality read this will feel disgusting about him, he has power and it continues increase, but he not only ignore it, he is not Practice, doesn't try to comprehension it, and even try to use new and dangerous things that nearly kill him dozen of times, and he is indecisive character, there dozen of man around him who want to take every thing from him, but he does nothing to them and he even gather more and more people even without food or anything ABSOLUTELY nothing. He doesn't react when his sister said she will go has sex with many guys but even thinking to pity them, he is sample deranged who even beast batter then him. Second, the girls and women in the story not only weak in character, but every time the MC think about sex they even Encourage him and go to sex rounds as if they Thirsty for years, they not batter then the MC. Third, the development of story is without any base or any pattern, just go with the following, it's start as good story but now is crap. Look if you want advice, delete this novel and rewrite it, just make MC cold,smart, talent but it the same time still have humanity in him not selfish bastard, and don't make him with huge and stupid power from the start but just make him learn and comprehension and practice more than anyone and have life and death situations. Let him think only of surviving himself and about sex scenes just make it little but more detail and more describes in it and don't let him meet any heroine before becoming truly powerful being or after the 4 volume it very last. Let the heroines have their special characters not like now. I just said this because I know this novel will ruin sooner or later
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krane99
i think it's the best time for a trainning time skip the mc and harem are too weak
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