Reviews of A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse

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4.45

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gee_ringdomstories
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Tekknos
Only have 4 stars for updating because it was before but I don’t want to make it lower and hurt this great story
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AzureStar
I really enjoyed this story. Which is rare, when there harem elements. I wish you'd continue with this book. Not enjoying the new Harvest Dungeon anywhere near as much.
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065
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065

DONT PUT ANY INFO ON WHAT ANY OF THE CHARACTERS WILL DO IN AUTHOR NOTES ITS PRETTY MUCH A SPOILER AND IDIOTIC JUST NO INFO ABOUT ANY FUTURE STORY
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linFan
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Dino1971
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HELLkaiser
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1yr
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Dino1971
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Vistarion
Thys is for -15 years old readers. Hero is simple and self centerd. 0depth. ...................................................................... Dont know why 5*
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Dino1971
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eoxdmn
Good work ,.....................................................................................................................................................
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Jumpe
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Jumpe

Enjoy,........................................................................................................................................... ......................................................
1yr
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RandomExtra
it was great in the beginning but too much harem; one is enough, a lot of novels get ruined like this. But I'll keep reading because it's interesting.
1yr
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NecromikReal
Pretty Interesting concept of Mana surge and why people now has abilities. Typical OP MC but only on its same level.....pretty weaker compared to real powers.....horny college student focus too much on Harem building but in the latest chapter it's seems to finally be maturing. I hope author continue that trend and on the kingdom building aspect instead of just making Harem bigger.
1yr
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Dino1971
Fun story ..................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
1yr
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Lesbian_Loli
The MC seems a scaredy cat that run away from everything, he doesnt try to become stronger at all and doesnt even listen to the advice his parents gave him. He use his own logic without thinking about facts and ehat other tell him, "If I think it's like that, it's like that". He has talent, but doesnt fight at all; putting talent on a person like that is wasted..
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linFan
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LV 5

It was mediocre for the first few chapters, then turned trashy. Very disappointing. The idea had promise but nothing. ......................................................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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WolfLord
Absolutely love it please don't rewrite but will read it still if you're rewriteπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
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Dino1971
Good keep them coming ..................................................................................................... .......................... ................................................................................................................................................
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Aproximate
Great history just a bit to much into the *** part but still great its a must read one of my favorites right now keep up the good work im waiting alot from this
1yr
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Silky1351
Firstly I just binged read up to chapter 55 and I must say thank you as I am enjoying this story. The lack of seriously over used cliches and nipple twisting plot turns. Also just the overall plot direction being generally unguessable is worth the read. I have read a lot of stories and this one I must say have the potential to be in my top ten that I would recommend and reread when I want to enjoy the story all over again.
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19Pirateking95
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Sivil
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Sivil

Really enjoying this so far. If I had one major problem is that at times too much 'stuff' (read plot development) is happening and thus character development takes a back seat. I would like to see things slow down a bit so we can get some more character development, especially between the MC and his ladies.
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RationalMind
Very good. Keep up the good work. Good Original novels are very rare nowadays, everywhere it's just trash novels with ****ty prose structure which is just a pain to the eyes. Among these your novel truly stands out as a gem. Just don't drop the story. πŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’Ž
1yr
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LV 6

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1yr
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Dino1971
good going .................................... ................................... ............................... ..................................................................................................................................................................
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Ventreth
Out of the many books I've started reading and dropped, or even keep on reading, this one has my captivated so early on in the story more so than any of the other ones so far. The quality of the writing is excellent, with not too many huge info dumps, and the info dumps are still easier to read through than most other stories. The character's haven't gotten a whole lot of time to let their colors fly yet, I believe, but a good picture is being painted of who they may potentially turn out to be. I hope the author is able to continue on with this story, and is able to maintain a sane state of mind once this book starts receiving the popularity it deserves.
1yr
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Sakura_Miko
this novel is good, it should be in the top rating, ill vote for this everyday now, just pleaze dont drop itπŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡
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Dino1971
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