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Skelcthumal
Livro muito bom, recomendo muito verem ele, uma boa história para passar o tempo, se você não sabe o que ler, posso garantir que a história desse livro vai te surpreender
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Dino1971
good start ................................................................................................................ ...................................................................................................................................................................................
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Dino1971
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AlmightyLord5th
To start off I don't dislike your story, on the contrary, i think it's pretty good. I applaud you for your good grammar and sentence structure. Now my biggest disappointment with this story has to be the characters in the way that they affect the story. To start off none of the characters act like they're in an apocalyptic situation. all of them seem to be very unbothered by the peril they are in, they act like the apocalypse is just another Tuesday. And with the addition of annoying characters like courtney and that other thot, the story becomes less about the apocalypse and more of a highschool drama.
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Stako01
The story is made in a fresh and grips you from the start. The main character is like an everyday man but becomes more and more like a badass. If you have ever wandered what it is to have superpowers one day, it is a good way to see what it will be for a normal Joe to become a hero in his own story.
The comedy is very friendly and can be a game changer in serious situations. But you can find it offensive(but for me it isn't :).
I found the harem aspect very funny and in a not so intrusive sense to come out of nowhere. This is going to rock your boat in a lot of ways(like *** scenes :D who doesn't love those :D a lot of *** and even jokes about ***)
But in all seriousness it is interesting and for a lot of smart people will be something to enjoy and rely, RELY give you a look of what you will be if you could have a antihero/almost hero.
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jutyers525
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Goldenkitten
I think you have a good start, I like the main character. I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens to him. I’m also looking forward to the story picking up and to see how how many wives he ends up with.
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FeelingsNumb
I give this book a 4.6. The book itself is good but it feels like it’s missing something that would be able to give it a big push but even I don’t know that that is so until You find it the review will stay but otherwise the books is good and I can’t wait for more.
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Ashra
As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review.
This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there.
I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.
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