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filipesr
so are you not going to write anymore?? thats a shame the story was going is a nice dircetion
either way congrats for these 4 chapters you have here
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XiDada
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
the story is pretty interesting.... but make the chapter a little bit longer
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John_Titor
The story is about a pervert but skilled monk, dying while on his journey to japan, now, he transmigrate to a child around 10 years old.... the essence of the story is, he developed a technique when he was a monk an acupuncture skill where he can aroused and make women horny if he touch a certain accupoints....that's how his pink life started...
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