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CaptKay
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this book. It's as good as oxygen. Got me addicted and satisfied. However, your updating pattern is really discouraging nowadays. In all, it's a great story to follow up on.
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Hahadavis
Dropped after the Mc who had a strong soul couldn't even get rid of the weak kid's soul and had to agree to some conditions with him....... Then signed a contract with the enemy who killed his body's parents after the author put plotarmor on the antagonist to make the fight longer REALLY smh!
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StressedByHW
The story is pretty good and the others are decent but I can’t read any longer since I’m not a fan of novels which mc works with someone who killed his loved one even if the enemy can revive the love one just not a fan but for others could be different
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CZ2128_Delta
MC got betrayed and died once, reincarnated to another world with a purpose of revenge yet teamed up with another person who almost kill him. I don't know if the MC is stupid or stupid or stupid.
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imperialdramon
The first 25 chapters should be deleted and re-done they are pure ***** and the the spelling mistakes really easy mistakes that you shouldn't be making at all are ######### but ignore all that and it's a pretty good story
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goobypee
Really amazing book, good story line and great characters. Although too many spelling mistakes in each chapter got quite annoying to read. But otherwise a great book.
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CaptKay
So far, this book has been ultimately engaging. Wow! No dull moments, action packed all the way. Well done Author. For me I feel like the book shouldn't end and it should be released twice a day. I'm always on the lookout for out, anxiously waiting for the next chapters.
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Jumpe
good going ................................................................................................................. .....................................................................................................................................................
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ROMAN_EAGLE
Had to drop when i read about contract sry but thats stupid and dumb he doesnt need tht fkn guy his own powers are bull**** and op extremely sad the way this turned out
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CaptKay
Wow! The ending of this volume really got me screaming. I can not wait to see why Jenkins changed his mind and how he's going to survive his predicament now. Thank you so much great Author.
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SouthToiletWizard
If you are a fan of litrpg and unfathomable stomachs, give it a read. Typical of the genre an OP system is put inside the mc's head by a mad god prior to a migration to a new world. A great time sink and a fun read.
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GGMissFortune
transmigrated MC soul loses to a pathetic villager boys soul and has to negotiate for control of the body WTF!?!?!?!?
transmigrated MC soul loses to a pathetic villager boys soul and has to negotiate for control of the body WTF!?!?!?!?
transmigrated MC soul loses to a pathetic villager boys soul and has to negotiate for control of the body WTF!?!?!?!?
transmigrated MC soul loses to a pathetic villager boys soul and has to negotiate for control of the body WTF!?!?!?!?
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Precheur
DROPPED. You though you would finally get a REALLY bad MC, and here it ggoes pu*sy yet again.....................................................................................................................................................................
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Precheur
Im only 1 so doesn't really matter but, first i thought it would be another **** when we got this : oh yeaah you don't know your friend ****ed u up, you made and make promise to kill the wworld or ****.
But i was surprised by his reaction, he at leasst ****ed the guy th'at orginal. But please dont go usual ****ty 15yo story
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AnthonyCerbic
I was alarmed when on transmigration the hero was offered "any" power, and sure enough, my fears came true.
Expect senseless OP powerspiking non-stop, Korean-style. No balance, not even meager hint of struggle or feeling that MC is in danger. Up and Up, and Up, boosting stats and collecting skills like post stamps.
If you are into shameless plot armor and constant winning of everything on your way - you might enjoy this.
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nishiyama
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CaptKay
At first, I'd wanted to quit reading, but as I went on I the whole got addictive. Though, at some point I had to flick through lots descriptions I considered time wasting. In all, I can't wait to see Michael become a Divine layer creature.
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MasterWilkarum
Evil mc?
Yes kid!
Oooohh mmmyy god i love dath!
More kill,
More blood!
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DJRogue
Firstly this is the first time I have read a game role-playing type novel. It was an eye-opener for me. Good thing I like playing slash and kill type games (^_^).
I felt like I was reading Diablo (the game) in a novel, but since I adored the game, I enjoyed the story.
Some might find the book a bit on the gory side, but well this is a dungeon type role-playing game novel, don't know anyone who has ever entered a dungeon in a game and not had to slash and kill their way through.
The game screen's that come up in the novel can be jarring but that is no mistake of the author, that is the limitation of using webnovel's platform - and the author should not be held accountable for it.
All in all, if you like slash and kill with a side dish of gore and brains, then this is definitely a story to read. If you are a sensitive reader, then maybe you should find something different.
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Anone
Okay, I love this novel, I do. But the MC is annoying. There's been so many character change for him that I have no idea who or what he is. For someone who came from earth, even if he had a life as hard as he got, he should know better than to solve every problem with violence.
There's no meaningful attachment to give the main character a sense of humanity. While he's character is well written and developed, he still comes off as bland. And hypocritical. The last person he should trust was that crazy elf, yet he does. He refuses to form an connection in the name of being betrayed by people, which is to say he looks down on people. Doing The same thing he complains about.
Well written and with an exquisite world building, but to be honest I have no idea what the end game is. All he does is follow the direction of a person he knew killed his mother and then act like the rest of the world doesn't exist. Seriously! He's in a new world, he's supposed to explore, fall in love, get a harem, break records and build kingdoms. But 60+ chapters in and the only meaningful thing he has done is get stronger and hatch a duck.
For a story so fast paced, this is incredibly slow. (Plus I'm a little tired of cliche anti villains without a shred of common sense. He's suppose to connect with this world, the evil elf can not be the only one capable of helping him.)
But my rant aside. The story and the detail put into it is amazing. Though there are a few grammatical errors, it's negligible and does not hinder the flow of the story. Keep u the good work.
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Chryiss
After 20 chapters, I can ascertain that despite frequent misspellings and grammatical errors, you write quite well! It is very descriptive, so I can easily imagine Michael moving around. I still do recommend to proofread as sometimes the mistakes can be off-putting when trying to immerse myself in the story. With such nice writing otherwise, the technical errors are such a shame really! The grammar mistakes are typically sentence fragments, too; if that’s of any help.
The DNA absorption idea is very unique; it’s my first time reading such a story! So I applaud you for that! Now, I will say it does seem rather OP, but I don’t mind that all too much personally.
What does somewhat bother me is Michael. He’s a pretty good MC except for the fact that he’s TOO calm. As a human, and a young 15 year-old at that, I don’t rationally see how he can accept his body changing so much. I would think he would lose some sense of self or humanity, but he’s totally fine. For instance, at first he doesn’t want to change his appearance too much, so he doesn’t want a tail. But then shortly after he decides to have a tail...
Overall though, good work! Keep it up! :)
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SaintOrder
Epic evolution spacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespacespace epic exp
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Luna1777
Currently in Ch.8 But I already pretty much like it. Well maybe because I like system thingy as I read a lot Japanese novel before. The MC surprisingly badass and a little bit OP, but I like his character. Don't tell me there's a harem in this novel? Well, I'll try reading it more to find out.
Keep going for the novel.
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KingKaviar
Great novel it has nice characters that feel alive, it also has a good concept and original concept on its system and the way the MC gets stronger.
The story also has a nice set-up for sweet sweet revenge (although that should be quite far away in the story) the world and its laws also feel nice even though there has not been a lot of info about it yet.
So overall its in my opinion a solid 4,6/5
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Earthshaker34
it is a great novel with a great author who reads comments and actually cares about his readers. the story is good, grammar is great as well with only occasional typos but that is nothing that can't be fixed. characters possess their own identity and are not there for the sake of it. stability of updates is great as well with chapters out on every day.
Would i recommend this story? Absolutely.
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MajestyGloxinia
Hello there fellow Author! I like the premise of your book!
There are some grammatical errors in your writing ( past tense to present tense fallacy, misplaced apostrophes next to 's' ending nouns ).
However, the thoughts you want to convey are crystal clear! The story is very descriptive ( though need some editing, try adding more onomatopoeia and make sure to separate it from the dialogue ), and I can see good development with your MC! ( Despite reading only 5 chapters )
Keep writing! I hope you improve more, I can totally see your passion for writing and for the story! Good luck!
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Jamison_C
Reviewing with the latest chapter in mind.
Spelling needs to be improved.
Readability is fine in general. Close to 80% of the paragraphs are easy to read.
Author's strength lies in his vocabulary and thus variation in sentence variety. No long or choppy sentences can be found in CH 42 and the overall weaving of the sentences presents a nuanced feel.
While passive voice is kept low, close to 50 adverbs were used throughout ch 42. One adverb for every fifty words seems high but that is just my opinion.
All the best!
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Endless_Clouds
I do not know why reincarnate a soul that came from the planet Earth if the soul of the reincarnated body is that which assimilates the soul that was reincarnating and the most scrotal of all this is what the system helps the previous soul of the dead body in This process . I really wasted my time reading this shįt.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I feel revulsion every time I remember this shįt, I really hate it
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bitterlouise
Hi author!
Indeed, the story is great. Though there are some small errors but it did not hinder the true meaning of the story.
Keep up the good work😊
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