Reviews of Journey Towards Greatness

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Topoftheworld2890
Did not like it... mc always is op and never loses and all the girls love him and **** him... how didi this get 18 million views.. i m surprised .. it is a pokemon fanfic.. for chriest shake... why include harem... there are also many grammer mistakes
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TheSilverPrince
First of all hands down how the author updates the chapter. Being an author myself i know how hard it is to update chapters reguraly. I have only read 100+ chapters but i have to say, the grammer is average. There are many mistakes. I m not a fan of harem.. so seeing mc **** many girls... not my cup of it... it is a pokemon fanfic.. so harem is not a good genre fot it... The battle is not very simulating and interesting. I mean it is good but Being one of the best pokemon fanfic... by...power stones... it is not satisfactory... mc wins almost every fight which is also not very realistic... The story has the tendecy to get boaring... i read about 100 chapters and now i dont feel like reading... if your chapters are above 800... i wiuld expect readers to at least not sleep and read at least 500 chapters at one go... All other things except above things are awesome and well.
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Teddy_Adhijaya
this is a good story and it doesn't make you bored, the pokemon chosen by the MC is also interesting, I hope this continues to the Galar story in the Kalos story (here I want to know whether the initial rumors that he called Diantha's lover will come true or not), in Alola's story (here I want to see him use Z- Move and want to see his reaction to seeing Lusamine and whether he helped Lilie, and the way she dealt with Gladion, Zaoboo and the skull team), Galar's story is still ongoing but I hope this is made too, (I got news that the mystery of Ash's father will be revealed in the next Movie so I'm looking forward to the story. keep up the spirit, I hope more Chapters ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ
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IlikeNutella
Novel so good just wanna try and hope increase the rating. Novel so good just wanna try and hope increase the rating. Novel so good just wanna try and hope increase the rating.
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Lawrence_Ponce
I will tell you the character is kind but his personality is somewhat suck, his a playboy, likes to play *** with nurse joy, officer Jenny and other characters, (poor brock) the story is good but it makes you think how easy for a Pokemon to learn moves
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MIR_Sajeeb
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Izanmi
The story has several bad points, for example the MC can prevent many of the "disasters" that occur in the plot but no, even knowing what will happen he prefers to spend time having *** with his women or challenging the league and then when everything is in chaos he intervenes. And his "no kill" philosophy is nonsense, he just lets things happen over and over again. And please first check the names of the pokemon on the wiki, several times they are misspelled. (Google translate)
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SaintLolicon
By the power of the Loli, i have been summoned to do a review. Don't be afraid as i will not kidnap them away from the author. But you must not forget to write more chapters for the loli
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Xjysu_Lhshufu
This the bast Pokémon fanfic i have ever read. Have best uploading time and consistent. The background and the characters description is too good.
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Mikumikumiku666
I love this book and everything that's original it's amazing thank you for your hard work author............................................
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Lizrock
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Takeo_Shinji
Awesome pokemon fanfic we have here awesome starter choice with chimchar and when the mc got a bulbasaur I was sold. One of the best times I had reading fanfics
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Starcat777
This is the best pokemon fan-fic I ever read. It’s going so well with the mc accompanying Ash in his journey and unlike Ash this guy know exactly how to train pokemons and his pokemons are so cool and unique. I’m especially waiting Kalos journey
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M_Dimas_Adi_Putra
aku suka dengan perkembangan karakter nya .. tapi sangat lucu ketika mc punya wawasan tentang anime pokemon dari kanto sampai Kalos di dunia lama nya tapi dia lupa banyak karakter penting 😅, padahal dijelaskan kalau mc nya sangat mencintai game dan anime pokemon
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Above_All
Save yourself the time this story is pointless hentaI with no soul. Honestly don’t mind ***** activity in my story but most women don’t even get names so yeah. So disappointed, If that is your thing go for it otherwise move on. Writing and grammar are acceptable but not great. no real world building but uses the show and movies. Overall just another bad fic.
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Dragoncloser
the story is amazing the progression at first was perfect, i like the infernape , some of the scenes are hot................................
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Truth_Betold
One of the best long running Pokémon fanfic I've read, 5/5 but it's also the only long running Pokémon fanfic I've read so that's something to consider. Only negative in this is the 18+ later in the story to much use of the phase "Plump pssy"
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Lizrock
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lok_98
don't read this.it became normal op mc harem trope.at first it was somewhat good but now the mc fu cks anyone with big pair of ti rs.lost its quality.now the author nerf other people mind to make mc better at battling.at first the mc was said to be reincarnated Gramps but now he acts like a reincarnated teenager.by the end the mc will have tens of women by his side.no character development for any of partners.meet and f uck in two chaps recently.lost it's overall quality during sinnoh arc.if u like very quick op mc harem trope,this will suit u.for others don't even try it.u will be disappointed
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omnigamergt
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Dark_Clown_Terror
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Lizrock
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FunkyRooster
Not good. the mc finds a shiny magikarp and bulbasaur right way. poor quality story......................................................................
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Lizrock
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Exsive
I am the exp of my sword... novel is my body, manga is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless reviews... Unknown to author, nor known to fans... Have withstood pain to create many reviews... Yet, those hands will never hold anything.. As i say unlimited exp works! But seriously nice pokemon novel but the current arc is not up to the standards if we consider it with the other arcs.
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PrimarySeed
Remember your childhood watching Pokemon: - Singing the anime opening themes - Mocking Ash with his stupidity - Not catching the pokemons you want in your party because the game version you bought don't have them - F*ck you Mindy - Misty's existence leads us to a new whole world of crippling hentai addiction When you started to read this novel. Don't think about complex things, feel the list of things I wrote.
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topudo917
Grammer need improvement.....................................................................................................................
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Lizrock
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DarkPhantom_
I love this novel. Can you make mc catch a legendary pokemon? ============================================================================
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