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000911
inconsistent updates, the quality drops significantly after passing a certain chapter don't remember when but it got inconsistent...then the character, they are pretty good but lacking in background and design
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3ndl355
I read this like 2 years ago and now that I read it again it still manages to hook me
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MarinXGrayfia
The plot is predictable mc goes new region mc knew the evil organizations mc let them escape mc question himself why this happened? mc guilt himself mc try to destroy the organization but he won mc think they are the balance of the world ๐Ÿคฃ mc let them summon a legendary mc want to be a manipulator mc fight legendary mc feel like a hero mc finish league = mc dumb = author dumber Peace out โœŒ๏ธ
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Crap_Maga
j'ai lu une autre fan fiction pokemon, celle ci est pour moi mauvaise, l'histoire dรฉmarre beaucoup trop vite, les pokรฉmons sont dรฉjร  evoluรฉs au chapitre 1, le travail est dรฉjร  totalement mรขchรฉ, ce genre de livre ou tout est facile sont ennuyeux...
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Tubbtle
loved it made it to 985 2 years ago now im a re read this
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Kibo_andAi
It's a very decent story but the grammar at the start wasn't all that well but it got way better as the story went on. My issue is he hasn't been updating and posting more chapters as often now but I understand people can be busy
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ilove_3260
The romantic is annoying[img=angry][img=Your move]
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Dao_leader
MC is 1000 times more dumb then ash. If you want become stupid then follow this stupid author.
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Daniel_Sciacco
No puedo describir a esta historia con otra palabra que no sea perfecto, cada parte de la historia me gustรณ. El carรกcter y personalidad del protagonista, los Pokemon que atrapa y la evoluciรณn de cada uno, las escenas picantes, la trama de fondo en cada regiรณn visto desde el punto de vista del protagonista y tambiรฉn el desarrollo del personaje Una de las mejores historias que leรญ. Ya estoy cansado de esos protagonistas que son demasiado fuertes y se terminan volviendo locos o malos o terminan asustando a sus propios amigos o waifus, este oculta su poder y solo quiere viajar y tener aventuras, tiene su lado cruel pero lo mantiene limitado, solo castiga a los que lo merecen y no mata a sus oponentes. Tambiรฉn me gusta la personalidad de las chicas de su harem.
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Radek_Zawadzki
I like the story๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ I hope you will keep updating, even with the problems.
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Lizard_Lizard
I have not got far , but I dont know how something with such awful grammar got such good reviews. Its probably made by a younger person, considering the cliche black hair and red eyes mc. But the grammar makes it almost unreadable, and the mc didn't even take time to process things when he got into the world. just jumped straight to it. Because thats how humans react to being sent to another world I guess..?either way I am not judging this novel based on pity, but for what I have read. Seems like authors fantasy rather, then anything else.
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Art420
Its's the best Pokemon fanfic I ever read. It's a absolutely awesome novel.๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ
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ghost29
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EroSpatula
As I leave my review, Iโ€™ll ask two questions in the end. Hopefully you guys who have read ahead can give me some hope. (Read till chap 10) I want to like this story, I really like Pokรฉmon, but to see the story getting butchered to such a degree by both bad grammar, pretty annoying and braindead dialogue, and a chunk of text larger than the Great Wall of China is heartbreaking. Yeah Iโ€™m whining about it after reading Pokemon Daycare which I would say is not only better in what I am whining about, but also just in storytelling in general. Another issue I had with this story is, heโ€™s supposed to be a grandpa that isekaied into the Pokรฉmon world as a 16-y old right? Itโ€™s a bit weird that grandpa thinks with his lower half when he meets any sort of pretty lady, and the ladies just allow a one night stand to happen is slightly concerning. I mean did he get the legendary โ€˜Erogeโ€™ system which lowers the IQ and EQ of everyone around him? Cause officer Jenny who is an OFFICER of the LAW somehow gets in his pants with no worries. So what Iโ€™m asking here is 2 questions: 1. Does the grammar and overall structure of the story gets better? 2. Does the MC ever stop thinking with his lower half when he sees a lady slightly more attractive than a Jynx?
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Young_prodigy
All the wild Pokemon are vegetarian now? I mean he put his Pokemon in there boll an sleep in the middle of the forest ๐Ÿ˜‚ O.M.G this FF is something i can not give 5* sorry author an the novel is soo push
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Climer_Flores
I liked this Fanfiction... it's not one of my favorites but I liked it so I wanted to know if anyone can recommend me some similar or good Pokรฉmon Fanfiction and I would also like to ask why there are no more prizes or gifts from the system like at the beginning since with The update should improve but it does not make good use of the system, apart from that it was lost since it should have more prizes such as better Poke balls, etc. (Google translator)
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Kai_Zac
it's good...............................
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chemsou_babaali
amazing ๐Ÿ˜ .....,.......mmmmmmmm..........
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B_Ssv
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B_Ssv

you know when I first started reading this fic I really loved it. but going on I don't see any maturity or seriousness expected from a veteran. yes he is living his dream life but no responsible and dedicated military personnel who has not gone rogue or lost his mind will always try to minimise collateral damage. collateral damage is acceptable in times of need or missions. but in chapter 40 Julian destroyed the home of many electric Pokemon just because of his list for battle. he could have challenged zapdos and gone to an isolated location for battle. he is turning more and more despicable in his blind devotion of living life.
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daoist_immortal26
big bad Julian!!!!been reading this book for more then a year...this GIF is how I portray Julian
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Haku_Ouroboros
No puedo leer mรกs de 100 caps es demasiado malo y sin sentido . ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Domme
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Domme

Cant stop wont stop giving 1 star for no harem tag.....................................................................................................
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Tim_QQQ
gets way too strong way too early imo. his pokemon evolve basically every chapter. whenever the mega stones where introduced he finds a million of them for his most powerful pokemon. has a system. has a "omniverse" cultivation energy that only the likes of mew can even perceive let alone use. the only way for the story to progress without it just being a one shot fest is mc re starting at every region. 1400 chapters of a looped story.
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000911
After sinnoh, it has suddenly lost the excitement i get from this. It feels like something has gone wrong now. It is repeating itself, i just hoped that atleast in Alola and Galar, it gets its peak. I am mostly hoping for galar since it seems like alola has lost it, it is now only being used to be stepping stones and background to defeat another villain organization. Although Cypher is different than the others a little, it doesn't change anything. Sighhhh...I hoped it become more fun and enjoying
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chaotic_overlord
best Pokemon fanfic with a good world design, the mc is smart and the story is a solid read
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GlacticWolf
Man what a story, I started reading this Book 3 weeks ago.. then i stopped for a few days to make sure I wasn't dangering my health... But bro the minute i came back i was hooked again then finished it today, i hope you make more chapters soon
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Daoist007877
when are u going to make more chapters.................................................................................................................
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DaoistDnBwyA
very bad development compared to the starting of the story
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EmpyreanNex
Plz update more. Itโ€™s such a great novel and the underworld is getting more exciting and I love how youโ€™re using Cipher from Pokรฉmon XD
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Kevin_Barclay
Hey man when are you going to write more chapters of your book cause I'm going to know what happens next Cause I'm definitely hooked on to your book I'm just on the edge of my chair Cause I really wanna know what happens next does the main character ever get married to those girls does it get any more fiance Does the ever tell the truth about himself to his friends and Love ones
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