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The background info is too much. Most of it gets straight pass by my head. I would suggest to add background info only when needed. Do not preset it.
For example, when MC comes across a beast then please do describe it. Don't give all classification of different beasts beforehand.
Please...
The story is quite heavy handed with descriptive information. I do like the storyline and characters, but I sometimes get lost in certain break down info. Not much in the way of smut it's a good and a bad thing.
This was worth reading. The ML are litlle bit OP. And it is BL. Well I did read only the 19 chapters that are there. There is nothing graphic in them. There is a lot of world background descriptions. That was anoying.
I only read 10 chapters. Main character is overpowered - I usually did not like. But apealing is his direct and frank personality. He is no world savior, but protects his people. I like this guy. I did not yet encounter the other ML. This is a BL. So be warned beforehand. If you dont like, dont read.
I really enjoyed reading the book and i how that others would too so u hope you will read this book! The main character hates being OP and the way the author expresses his turmoil is wonderful!!
Well i dont know if i like the character its so op for me.. like theres no challenge... and the plot is so so... wish theres challenge ahead like i want to feel the mc desperate...
This is a first-person storytelling which is interesting because most of the main character's thoughts are not hidden. I just feel like the main character will get many obstacles to achieve a 'carefree life'. My condolences. *Warning. Prepare for the test of your IQ to consume all of the info! *
Love the OPness!! Wish to have more chapters to read. Anyways, there is a lot of information dumps so for readers who donβt like these types of novels, this ainβt for you.
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It's a very interesting story. I specifically like the laid-back MC and his actions and decisions. The flow of the story is good as well. It does not only focus on the love between the characters but also in their life stories and mysteries. The MC and ML are both likeable, even though the story is just starting and there still more to know about them and their characters. As the author said, there are several grammar errors but still tolerable (English is not my first language anyway). The author tends to dump information about the worlds and the MC's past that I can't even remember or care to remember most of it haha. All in all, it is a pretty good bl novel. The interesting story and parts are enough to keep me going past the poor parts. Of course the story is just starting and the author is still growing so I'm anticipating for the future chapters. Thank you author and keep up the good work!
Prince yui is slowly wearing down the main character who knows if he keeps it up he might over extremely long time finally get the man he love the main character
I am loving this novel especially how adventures it is and also how it is also not all about adventures only it also has him creating stores and other thing but most of all the interactions between our mc and the ml prince yui
The only problem I have is that the chapter arenβt released quickly and that would be okay if they were doing multiple release at the same time but it is just 1 release I would like more stability which chapter release and updates please pretty please with a π on top ππππππππ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
Canβt wait for more chapters of this fantastic novel and some *** scenes as well as what is next in his adventures I canβt wait to see more interactions from the prince/god and the op main character
I have read Lunnear's work in the past. She writes interesting and entertaining stories. This is good slow BL story. The only (but I understand why) complain is that the update are slow.
I am loving this novel and the main character is to op like the title says and his luck is crazy lucky and itβs funny how he thinks and interacts with prince yui
Hello, readers. This is the author of this book- Lunnear, going by XiaHuahua too.
This story was meant to be fun but there's a lot of errors of grammars within, so, if that take away some fun parts then please let me know. And yes, this novel is BL. Read at your leisure, please.
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