Chapter comments on the chapter A New Beginning of the book Supreme Magus

Aikido!? Really? One of the very few martial art that tries to prevent harm for both the user and the victim. A martial art that calls other arts 'too violent'. How the hell is that a good choice when going in the violent path! Just WHY?!

Too much exercise is bad for muscle growth. Too little nutrients is bad for muscle growth. Conclusion? The MC gains little muscle.

Nice One Punch Man reference! :D

He didn't portray bipolar properly, and the father seems more of an as.shole than abusive... Definitely not enough to turn you in to the unfeeling MC, but it would land you in therapy.

Dayum good mc author (perfect candidate to transfer in a strength based society) Finally a decent mc He definitely got his father's genes lol Very promising 👍

Why would the mc pick Aikido? It is even worse than wing chun?

oh man first chapter and its a mess

>father had bipolar, Jesus fucking christ, I can't read for more than a second before another mistake pops up. You forgot to add "disorder" after 'bipolar'. This is from the first sentence of the second paragraph.

exp😁

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic Wand

sweet

what am I doing with my life...

I need exp

nice chap👍

oh no

exp

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thanks for the chapter

good

Nice