Chapter comments on the chapter Green Array (Part 2) of the book Supreme Magus

You guys are some haters... like damn lol. I enjoy how he tries to balance the fights... it would be so boring if they just ran through every obstacle.. I think alot of people forget to that when your building a plot(as he is obviously doing with the odi) **** is going to move slow sometimes... every good NOVEL has slow parts, the difference is we can rush past them because we have the whole book in our hands. In this case we dont.. you guys must watch anime or read webtoons.. Thank you for the chapter legion! I cant wait to see how the story with the odi progresses

Youre great Legion! Great arc, keep it up, ignore these other idiots!

Well this was boring. I mostly skipped chapter due to how boring I am about this never ending ark.

Yoooo can we have everybody die please? This novel is so boring at this point with the constant op enemies and the nerfs. Lith hardly gets any **** done and has to keep protecting other people meanwhile the story goes nowhere and he doesn’t get any stronger. Moreover, Lith should’ve just easily been able to destroy the array using Origin Flames but noooooooooo. Author nerfs both Lith and Origin Flames to jack ****e. If Yondra, Morok, and Lith get through this next fight, then I’m done. Because this is consistently happening, they get ****ed while also being simultaneously nerfed while ALSO miraculously pulling **** out of their asses in order to suceed.

Gonna take a temporary break and wait this out. Things are truly getting out of hand, I know it's hard to write original novel so I don't want to blame the author, he might be simply having problems thinking about the future chapters but if that is true I would prefer him to take a short break and think things through instead of just dragging things out so that the plot doesn't get effected really badly simply because the author wasn't able to sit down and think about the incoming plot. Hope things will return to normal soon and we can finally get some real plot development and thanks Legion20 for the hard work so far.

Readers finding this novel boring now, writer should take note and reflect where problem lies. Power balance is mess, you don't tell us about abilities properly so you can nerf and buff them as you see fit. Here Lith could've used origin flames, I thought it burns mana signature and it's not even a spell. You say his own spells don't hurt him but his own origin flame can hurt him in last chapter? Too much bs is going on. He stole a purple crystal from shaman last time making it such a big deal for forgemastering some masterpiece. Now he using purple crystal like cabbages. Everytime he fights op enemy and fights to protect others while covering his abilities this plot is getting so boring can't you think of something better and new?? Lith is so rich yet he don't seem to have any weapons beside lame failed gatekeeper prototype lol you want us to believe that he cares about money more than buying himself weapons? How are they breathing btw? In one chapter they burn moss and running out of oxygen and next chapter that problems solves magically. Such a big kingdom with mages and guardian but you want us to believe they can't track their location and that place is lost forever without morok? Come on really? Sigh.

You know guys, I hate doing this over and over again... And from reading your comments I can see how frustrated you are with the way the story has progressed and as a fellow reader I can sympathize with that. Still, with that being said you all are readers not the author and this is there art piece, none of us were hired to assist with the creative process yet we all get to take part in the viewing. Respect the work that is put out because it is not as easy to write as some may think. Alot of you seem to not realize that surprisingly Legion does listen to our inputs thought not a lot, but you can see that he/she reads our comments and likes to incorporate some of our thoughts and feelings from time to time. Yet quite a few of you all just gripe about how the author is doing wrong with there work, instead of doing that how about you try and put some thoughtful input, instead of "Lith sucks ass because xyz..." That's not helpful. I dare you to actually try and write something that the main character isn't always overpowered, has room, can be sympathized with, makes you laugh, and feel joy in there access once you can do that then try and do it for 700+ chapters and see how way it is, if you can't do it then try to make helpful suggestions or ask for something to be clarified. With how committed Legion is you probably would be surprised that he/she would probably be willing to accommodate and answer questions. I'm finished with ranting at you guys, hopefully it was all just misunderstandings and a bit of emotions leading to some of the thoughtless comments. I just hope we can, as an audience, try to be decent to each other. Now that that's been put forward, as reader I understand the concerns some of us have. Some people have grievances because the MC isn't strong, he gets nerfed for plot twist, mana cores/abilities/spells aren't explained properly and you're often confused by the sudden seemingly unexplained odd occurrences in the story, and to some degree I agree with you, it's probably the same for the readers like Scarlett, Morrigan and others too because they have also been quiet about commenting. Here I am once again going to stand up for the author though, I assume Legion is from some where China, I don't know if any of you have read other stories... Some of the translations just suck plain ass, it takes a lot of guessing as to what the author is meaning... Versatile mage is one such, and Apotheosis is another, it is constant guessing as to what they maybe referring too, by far this series has a pretty steady translation with minimal errors in writing. To me though that still might mean that we lost some things in translation. This could probably be fixed by him making some Data chapters that have and explain chars abilities, spells, specializations, tribulations, and strengths, with areas that leave stuff kind of unknown to give room for improvement. That way it can satisfy both parties.

Noooooo Yondra 😭 I hope she's safe ç_ç

This arc seems too endless. I completely lost interest about 10-20 chapters ago. Over the course of a huge number of chapters, same thing happens. Heroes are constantly stuck in a same type of trouble. Again and again. It's boring. No development of MC occurs. Even locations do not change. But we have tons of absurdly strong enemies, which the author sucked from a finger. + The author again used his favorite and constant move. Before starting the arc - loosen Lith. It happens every time. Just this time, the author took his weapon from him. Just to make him look weak and get into more trouble. The endless stream of absurd same type opponents makes Lith even more useless. I hope for an incredibly impressive arc finale that will fix the boring middle. Just let it end...

I know that criticisms from the readers are good as it tells the Author what he lacks or should improve on but that's only if it's constructive criticism. Fellow readers, just because we're Legion's readers doesn't mean we have the right to hurl insults at him for not keeping up with our expectations. He is the one writing the story, not us. If you're unsatisfied with the content, you can always voice it out, but not in a rude way. Remember, no one's forcing us to read this story so kindly refrain from writing those destructive comments because, surprise, the Author is also a human with feelings! Thank you.

Too many readers have been trained to like the simplistic battles often found on Webnovel. Overall this arc has been pretty good. I am looking forward to the fallout and gains/losses that occur from this arc’s conclusion. Keep up the good work Legion!

I still think this novel is good, its just not where it once was. It feels like the author went into this arc only knowing what the outcome should approximately be like. He is trying really hard to balance the Odis and Lith&Co while resolving the arc. You can do it Author-san, but maybe you need a break and use that time to distance yourself from the story and come back with a refreshed mind.

Thanks a lot Legion20. Great arc keep up the good work. And one thing I thought the way communication amulets worked was that it send some sort of feeling to the user at least that was what I read in the earlier chapters when I started reading the book again. My question is how the hell the Jirni then know that Kamila's amulet was ringing I mean do the amulets like update or what please do get back to me. I just want to be sure

Honestly I don't get why everyone is complaining. Sure this arc has been going on for some time, but I still enjoy the story. My theory is that through the reactor he can mend his own life force through mana. Maybe he learns how to mend it over time or through the mana geyser he will have enough mana. And the green array will be a nice ace for a surprise attack and maybe when he gets a purple core he will be able to use it more often. Another gain could be that he's gonna improve his light magic. Light magic constructs are still op and a must for Lith.

I feel it has been slow, but every part of it has been building to something more. They are a very small team, against an army of golems that are pretty much invulnerable and awakened... if it wasn't a battle of gorilla like tactics and small skirmishes, I would call bull****. Idk I just dont feel it has been stagnant or repetitive. To me it seems everything has happend for a reason and nothing is being forced.

Tks Chapt

😀👍👍Thanks for the Work

Hater would like to see lith say avada kedavra and kill them all, and they going home happily ever after the end

Danke

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon