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CPT_Ling_Ling
I've been reading this book for a while now, and it's amazing! although my words can't do this work of art justice I'll try my best: The characters feel so real and the author does an amazing job in making all of the magical laws make sense. when the protagonist becomes more powerful it isn't in some vague way that he is suddenly "stronger" but he gains some new thing through hard work. it makes the story that much more impressive because it feels like he is just describing how another world works rather than some make belive thing!
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ThoMiCroN
By far the best book on this platform. Remember to read the prologue otherwise you won’t understand who Carl or Chris or Ezio are. A great plus of this story is that there are no gratuitous good guys or bad guys, with one exception. The characters deemed to be protectors, guardians, are often passive in front of evil bacause they deem it necessary. Likewise, « evil » characters are not defined by their crimes and have believable motives and dreams that actually could change the world for the best. The main character also frequently does good for the wrong reasons. There is a love square, but the mc doesn’t allow himself to be tortured by it. He is able to resist the seduction of his love interests, especially when he thinks that love might be immature, that it might exist for the wrong reasons.
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WrongerMonk_10
Supreme Magus is, hands down, one of the best fantasy novels that I've ever read. Perfectly blending a world with an unfathomable amounts of detail and lore with good character development, intricate storylines with a refreshing take on magic, Supreme Magus manages to amaze me with each and every chapter, reminding me of why I have been reading it for the past 2 years, time that I do not regret investing. The author's — Legion20's — writing style is particularly unique and I personally loved how it has grown and evolved over the past two thousand chapters. The novel has had consistent uploads for as long as I can remember, with a couple of breaks here and there, but too irrelevant for me to downgrade the rating. If you enjoy a morally complex character who permanently grows and changes, never faltering before whatever obstacles are thrown his way, then this novel is for you. From infant, to a soldier. From a soldier, to Supreme Magus.
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Joha_DN
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Ice_Goddess19820
Yyyu is a good one too I like the way he looks at her
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AMOR_MONTEMAYOR
very nice story. i really love it. thank you author
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DaoistFA7WAi
Très intéressant pour des histoires écrites en anglais
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Joha_DN
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Fantasium
40 chapters in, my overall rating is 3.7 Writing Quality - 3.4 Often clumsy and awkward, the author seems young and inexperienced, resulting in the dialogue being less than believable. It is easy to read, however, and maybe the author will grow over time. Story Development - 3.7 I'll give the benefit and put it at 4. The story isn't anywhere near the level of plot developments you see in Shadow Slave, but it has the potential to be an enjoyable read. It's a bit simple but more enjoyable than the usual cultivation novels, which focus too much on cultivation at the expense of a story, where the cultivation becomes the story. World Building - 3.8 Right now, the magic system is far too simple and not very well constructed. But I imagine that in over a thousand chapters, it will inevitably evolve and grow so I just have to give it a chance Characters - 3.8 I like the ruthlessness, but the character suffers from bad writing quality. I wish the author wouldn't constantly have the character think about how much he loves his family and would do anything to protect them. Instead, he should describe his feelings towards the situations and developments. Instead of having him declare his thoughts, explain that he felt worried, panicked, or concerned about a danger or a threat looming in the forest so close to where his family lived. A threat that has already injured, maimed, or killed experienced hunters could at any time burst out and pose a danger to his own family if left alone. Instead of declaring his thoughts about his sick sister, say that his heart ached to see her coughing in pain, to see her frail figure who couldn't go outside to play like all the other kids, and to see the worried faces of their parents to see her live like that, as well as the resolve and determination he felt in wanting to create a cure. Show, don't tell. Stability of Updates - 5 There are over a thousand chapters, so I'll give full credit to the author. in this aspect.
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Fantasium
40 chapters in, my overall rating is 3.7 Writing Quality - 3.4 Often clumsy and awkward, the author seems young and inexperienced, resulting in the dialogue being less than believable. It is easy to read, however, and maybe the author will grow over time, I hope. Story Development - 3.7 I'll give the benefit and put it at 4. The story isn't anywhere near the level of plot developments you see in Shadow Slave, but it has the potential to be an enjoyable read. It's a bit simple but more enjoyable than the usual cultivation novels, which focus too much on cultivation at the expense of a story, where the cultivation becomes the story. World Building - 3.8 Right now, the magic system is far too simple and not very well constructed. But I imagine that in over a thousand chapters, it will inevitably evolve and grow so I just have to give it a chance Characters - 3.8 I like the ruthlessness, but the character suffers from bad writing quality. I wish the author wouldn't constantly have the character think about how much he loves his family and would do anything to protect them. Instead, he should describe his feelings towards the situations and developments. Instead of having him declare his thoughts, explain that he felt worried, panicked, or concerned about a danger or a threat looming in the forest so close to where his family lived. A threat that has already injured, maimed, or killed experienced hunters could at any time burst out and pose a danger to his own family if left alone. Instead of declaring his thoughts about his sick sister, say that his heart ached to see her coughing in pain, to see her frail figure who couldn't go outside to play like all the other kids, and to see the worried faces of their parents to see her live like that, as well as the resolve and determination he felt in wanting to create a cure. Show, don't tell. Stability of Updates - 5 There are over a thousand chapters, so I'll give full credit to the author. in this aspect.
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Clara_Amador
awesome book to read¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aaron_Young
the thing that will make you fall in love with this novel is the character development, and the the world building.
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AvatarOFInfinite
So much wasted potential. So much wasted potential.So much wasted potential.So much wasted potential.So much wasted potential.......................
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AbsoluteStarlight
This is the type of story that should have ended faster and in less then 1.5kish mark but it keeps on going. now i am just bored of the series.
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So_Aap_Jay
I just checked. All these reviews are fake. It seems they repeat every few pages.... 1 star trash trying to trick people for views...........................
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Daoist0khYjg
Good Book!!!! Very nice to read…. Cool!!
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Dalila_Kheteah
je ne lis pas l anglais donc je n ai rien compris
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DaoistNrSNLs
I don't like these kinds of books, but this one makes me change my mind.
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Sandra_Antunes_5391
Very good. Keep writing. [img=update][img=update]
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ruelnonato
I really recommend this story, it was appetizing
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April_Chandler_6153
im loving this book!!! I need more money to finish it.
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bethany_thurston
Absolutely incredible work, can’t wait to read more x
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DaoisthYXApU
wow. Nice novel I really enjoyed reading this
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Kaleb_Land
It is a good book I will have to read it again sometime .
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great work. really good char development
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Demi_Pageloff
very decent over would read again if I was able
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DaoistWW5sx2
this one is good the adventure and the action that gives the story an amazing plot twist.
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PrimordialKai
Everything is Great personally though I disliked how he is the sole cause for the tensions between him and his brothers. He had the mind of an adult and treated them and held them to the standard a stranger would. The authors really did a good job carry over his past life biases although. 5 stars for realism I guess. It’s went from pettiness to outright hatred. Very frustrating when I could see the many ways the relationship could be mediated. At least when they were young. By the time he became a teen that ship sailed. After all he was already an adult mentally, the rapport was soured, by this time has already est himself in that world also.
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Cartiliane
[img=recommend]esse livro é maravilhoso
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acsas683
Its' really good and amazing i like it so much😍💗
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Anaiul_Sevla
it's a nice book, it is an interesting read for people who like me like anime
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