Reviews of The Snow God's Lost Daughter by Charlotte8 - Webnovel

This is a review for chapters 1-18 Writing Quality ✩✩✩ You have basic grammar errors, but not too many. Your errors mostly fall under punctuations, preposition usage, wrong plural and compound form, and other word choices. Sometimes you tend to cluster your paragraphs, which can make readers want to skim over it and miss important details of the story. You have strong skills in writing details, that gives readers clear visual images of the setting and actions of the characters. Stability of Updates ★★★★★ I always give five stars for the stability of updates. I believe that the pace of updates should not affect a novel's rating. Authors also have lives and should not be pressured into faster updates. The fact that you shared your story with readers deserves praise and encouragement. Story Development ✩✩✩✩ The pace of the story is fast at the beginning, but I find that this is common in webnovels. The pace is steady later and moves at a good tempo. Although there was some repetition, there is no inconsistency or contradictions in the story. The story is developing in a nice way, but make sure you don't lose sight of where you want your story to go. If the pace is too fast, you can easily lose grasp of the development of the plot and your characters. Character Design ★★ When Fenlan agreed to leave with Xueshan, I think her reasons for leaving behind her life and family is too weak. It didn't make me sympathize with her, which left me a little confused on what to think about here. Although 'love at first sight' is common in most novels, especially when it comes to gods or immortals, it isn't something I wanted to see here. It would have been great if there was a deeper reason for him choosing Fenlan. I found Shaonu to be another cliché character. Basically, a jealous love rival who will try to sabotage the relationship between the two leads. The other characters I found to be enjoyable. Although some are predictable, they each have a purpose in the story, which is good. World Background ✩✩✩✩ Your descriptive details bring your world background life. It appeals to readers and makes them want to know more. I am especially interested in the world in Heaven and the characters that come from there. But since the story is just starting, the world background has room to grow. Conclusion ★★★ / ✩✩✩✩✩ In conclusion, your novel has potential. As a reader, it can be a novel that I enjoy reader depending on its future development. I'd have to wait and see where the story goes. ……...……...……...…... Thank you for sharing! If you have a question about your review, feel free to contact me. - Bai Qiuyue (白秋月) Contact Information E-mail: riverautumnmoon98@gmail.com Discord: https://discord.gg/vaP2R8D Discord Tag: #9061

This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter six. I won't write anything about what the story is about, because at chapter six we're still at the prologue. It looks like the real story will begin somewhere around chapter ten, but I just don't know. What we have looks like it'll develop into a Cinderella type of story, with gods in the background rather than a fairy godmother. I'll head directly for the stars. Writing: Five stars. Basically perfect. Updates: With just six chapters I'll just hand out the five stars. There really aren't enough chapters for an opinion. Story: Five stars. Superb progression this far. Note that we're still at the prologue. I have absolutely no idea how this will pan out later on. Character: Five stars. There are surprisingly many of them. Of course most sidecharacters are stereotypes or archetype, but we're just six chapters in. The main character as well as the main character for the pre-story are wonderfully developed. World: Five stars. Once again it's really too early to form a solid opinion, but what's there now looks very good. Lastly, while I have no regrets about this all five star review, this is really much too early for reviewing. The story has yet to settle into its internal rythm where a more educated opinion about pacing and world can be voiced.